so you say you dont carrre
but if i had the currre???
it majestic aint that fantastic?
pass the moutains, past the plains, over the raninbow
ohhhh oh, ohhh oh
damn zee at the lab again
he gonnna remind, ta rewend again
remember pac, he got shot
remember biggie, he got shot
remember zee
he got a stronghold ova da roc
holdin it down with H o aka hov
pass the battle cuz my son
you've been murdered to quick
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You need to elevate!
Nothing else really needs to be said.
Flow was even pretty weak.
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FLow was basic needs really really more practice
i think fo a begginer it was aight but u missing alot
make it creative. Transitions make the flow smoother.
Blah!!!
i aint the illest but you straight butt
who feels it knows
zeezimma you tryin too hard son like i said kid FALL BACK word up
who feels it knows
j-kwon goes to forums? lol jk
keep elevatin.. big tyme
way too simple, and has nothin really behind it to hold it together
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