Alright, I really tried hard to make this one Have Four things:Structure,emotion,length,and most of all Vocab.Tell me what ya think:
I can't take it anymore,
All of these damn sores,
I want to express myself,
Not depress my love,
All of this abundance has to go,
I'm not tryin to make this a show,
I just can't find myself to say,no,
I don't want to make no enemies,
This sort of tendancy is Pressure,
I feel like I'm stuck in a ticking box,
With out no damn lock to break,
Even though I search desperatly,
I then manage to find an open spot,
Yet, I feel no need to leave,
My emotions are mixed up like colored dots,
Why can't I just get out while I can?
Time sets in, leaving me stuck in a den,
Here comes the pressure again,
I can do this, I have to do this,
I say what I truly feel, expressed in motion,
All of my feelings burst out like an explosion,
My emotions are now in phisical motion,
I finally surpassed the pressure,
And now, that bridge is destroyed,