simply spitten~hot shit~

[Auroura]

first drop on here totally off the dome a keystyle, so peep what i'm saying and understand that i'm 4real



elevated state of mind control as i salivate wieght and grind molds, when i disentigrate fakes and bind flows~
for perptuates sake i find those thru gifted telepathy who's on top an shift thee ahead of me~
i only deal within the realm of the real,at the helm of the wheel i steer blind thru life an define true mics~
refine a new sight over a spectrum grew tight so i can shine bright and make foes furture dimmer than blue lights~
devour an shower imbesoles with blows and have them cower as i tower an peer into there soul~
i hold power that flowers daisy's illumate the dark an make the night an hour daily, possess the strength to empower ladies~
yet i date rape babies and shape slates vagely, a walkin contradiction with contraband my montra stand firm~
a mans burned, a star he was, now its a stans turn, i'm a fan turned mic holder i peer over ya right shoulder~
engulf the fears of those with elite status, within pulses i impeach faggots, then restart the beat an teach magic~
enter the pageant, were those who fail to win are banished, whom evers #1 you had ya time to eat now its time for you to be famished~

[Mistral]

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[Auroura]

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[Auroura]

want some feedback

[Unwritten Hazard]

nice drop


lines looked alittle streched out though


nice multis, some seem kinda forced


extend vocab, could be more complex and deeper metas


stay up


props