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check.... let's go 10 yo
Provoke in LW match?!
Look... I'll call you Chronic: the most elevatin Herb
nah I'll call you Bullshit.... cuz ya best described as a cow-word
you Diss hence... but all our Members shine true
& since you ain't in a crew... I'll just Diss-Member you!
banish you to FL.... where you dominate the wack
no thanks, yall can have him back...Originally Posted by Phoeniix
what's worse is ya verses are shitty.... a pity you post pathetic
always played & weak... shoulda opened that other can of Edit (sig)
bitch i'll pass you bi.... like I tossed you a part-time lesbian whore
thought U had your back against the wall.... til U realized it's the floor!
My bad..
I'll drop a quick verse anyway..
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I'll tear you apart kid.. looks like I'll have to induce fear..
'Cos this egotistical fuck's got a bigger dome than Sways headgear!
You aint got a Spec' of real talent man... victory? Stop dreaming..
Glad he's up against me... Spit just hoped for the literal meaning!
You're a faggot.. a fucking loser.. you've no chance of caning me
Especially when you can't even spell your crew name correctly!
Thats how bad you suck fool.. the illiterate wannabe of LLL..
Tho I wish you'd had the title.. so I could rip it from you as well!
Seriously.. you're nothing.. & we all know you dream of breeding
But the only time you've caused pert nipples..
.................................. is when your moms started breastfeeding!
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this was a pretty good battle
this is really tough to decide, i thought the best lines was provokes about how spt spelled hi screws name wrong..... but as for the structure it was fine until i realized the little ! at the end, newb structure doesn't make the punches harder
spit i liked ur closer and this lines
banish you to FL.... where you dominate the wack
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Originally Posted by Phoeniix
fucka hater. HF ownz you provoke.
no thanks, yall can have him back...
but the verses did have fillers, and in a battle thats so short, thats a shame.... spit ur verse was a littleplayed though...... dis-member, i liked the wording, but its played
and pro, ur verse had some filler......... my vote goes to spit for having a better verse overall
.. im back
good battle....
spit - good flow, structure... some nice metas... some solid punches.... decently hard hitting... some wordplay... couple personals.... overall you hadda a good verse...
i felt as if u came pretty hard...
12/20
provoke - also a good flow and structure... some alright metas... not too much wp...
punches were ehh... ok.... not that hard hitting or consistant tho.... & i didnt think you had enough personals in this battle to win..... 9/20.... and...
vote - spit
Damn this shit is mad hard to judge,
both came good....Both had solid,witty punches..
concepts werent to played, descent wordplay by both,
I think Spit took personals,his were harder hittin n more direct
He just had a better rhyme all together,wordpkay,flow, personals
V/ spit
V/$pitacular
He simply came better Overall..
He had alot harder, and complex punches.
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Man.. close this shit already..
Ppl got an IQ of like 5..
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^^ your just mad............. you got beat straight up
spit had a real nice flow.............you went off at the end of some lines
his punches were original and complex
yours were pretty basic.............
his personals were better as well...............and he had more
v/ spitacular
You know.. its idiots like you that make me wanna just find a new board.
Original & complex you say?
Fuck the battle.. but here.. let me break it down for you..
1st bar..
Look... I'll call you Chronic: the most elevatin Herb
nah I'll call you Bullshit.... cuz ya best described as a cow-word
He praises me in the first line. Uses played wordplay in second. How original.
I'll tear you apart kid.. looks like I'll have to induce fear..
'Cos this egotistical fuck's got a bigger dome than Sways headgear!
Personal. Original. But lemme guess.. you don't know who Sway is? Get the fuck offa this hip hop site you retarded fuck. My opener clowns the kids wack attempt.
2nd..
you Diss hence... but all our Members shine true
& since you ain't in a crew... I'll just Diss-Member you!
Oh my fucking god.. what a retarded line. That shit was played out in the 80's man.
You aint got a Spec' of real talent man... victory? Stop dreaming..
Glad he's up against me... Spit just hoped for the literal meaning!
First line.. 'Spec' - wordplay on his name. Second - original/creative punch. Lemme guess.. its too complex for you? Dumb fuck. I own both his bars so far.
3rd bar..
Spits quote line..
Hey.. I'll be kind. Even though my 3rd line has been singled out as the best of the battle.. I'll give this to Spit.
You're a faggot.. a fucking loser.. you've no chance of caning me
Especially when you can't even spell your crew name correctly!
Still.. mines a good personal. Chump had it spelt wrong for days.
4th bar..
what's worse is ya verses are shitty.... a pity you post pathetic
always played & weak... shoulda opened that other can of Edit (sig)
First line.. uh.. good try kiddo. The punch.. what fucking punch?! It doesn't make sense idiots. I guess the mention of my sig makes it a dope personal tho huh? Retarded fucking prat.. 'open another can of edit?!' Its not even a punch.
Thats how bad you suck fool.. the illiterate wannabe of LLL..
Tho I wish you'd had the title.. so I could rip it from you as well!
Personal. I took the belt from his fellow crew member. The punch is ten times better than a punch that makes no sense. Damn..
5th bar..
bitch i'll pass you bi.... like I tossed you a part-time lesbian whore
thought U had your back against the wall.... til U realized it's the floor!
Hmmm.. an okay closer. Not too bad. But not anywhere near dope I'm afraid.
Seriously.. you're nothing.. & we all know you dream of breeding
But the only time you've caused pert nipples..
.................................. is when your moms started breastfeeding!
Funnier.. a personal.. creative twist.
Seriously.. open your damn eyes for fuck sake.
Regicide.. you're a dumb fuck.. and as for ppl like Illunatic. Damn..
No wonder RB is the laughing stock of boards like RnR.. it seems age old concepts without a good twist beat creative/original punches almost every time.
Blah.. yeah I'm bitching.. but check what I've just wrote. If you cannot see it.. fuck you. Come back when you grow a damn brain man..
You retarded fucking faggots..
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^i've never witnessed such blatanty elaborate swaying.
A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E
I've signed out man..
He's won whateva happens..
But do you at least see where I'm coming from?
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lol Provoke, i like you but bitching like that makes
you look bad. you remind me of aisle phive
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