Winter to Spring Part 2

[Laureate]

please?

[Key Tone]

I havent read the last one but this one was creative no doubt great description of surroundings....spring..spring..wow Vocab was high but ok to make a good poem doesnt really need alot of vocab just alot of emotions and imagery. Nice one lyric

[Freeman]

Ok.

A nice poetic piece here.
As ever in poetry..
.. Imagery is a must.
And you had lots of it.
I can nicely picture the scenes that you described in my head.
Im not really a poetry person.
But I know a good piece when I see one.
This was nice.
Hit this up if you will, please.
Only need one more vote..
Freeman Vs T West (Topical.)
Thanks, man.
Peace.

[Philo]

well done. This was a very nice read and you had a grasp of what you were writing here. I haven't read the first part but I wasn't really concerned this stood on its own.
It was a nice poem, great imagery and a nice poetic flow.

i think your doing a good job of exploring from what i've read of you so far. Continue to explore... thats the only advice worthy of giving because your shit seems structurally sound but, oh.. I think you missed a plural somewhere but I'm on a different page so I can't remember which word.
ha.

Anyway, continue to explore with poetic style.... read others a lot.... nice shit.
...and like I said in that other thread of yours man you gotta stop upping your shit so much... you did like 7 times in one page in this thread.... not cool, there are others in this forum as well...
anyway good work.

.peace.