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    SS: Dropping Anchor

    Dropping Anchor
    Written By: ELEETE


    When the anchor dropped...My life came to a stop...
    Stopped the partying, the sex, cocaine, an crystal rocks...
    My attitude began to shift in a different direction...
    Strive to gain some intellect on achieving perfection...
    I guess perception is everything to everyone in their eyes...
    Despised my life cause I was a fake behind the lies...
    But since I knew it was a matter of time before I died...
    I tried to make the most of it...I tried to make it mine...
    I thought of everything I had done...My memory flashed back...
    Thought of all the bad crap I'd done when I was on bad tracks...
    I had Rap...I was good...I shoulda really stuck to that...
    But when I heard the news...The nerves shot down my back...
    Soon the feeling hit my soul an made first contact...
    But that’s that...Now God an Satan compete for my contract....
    I wish I could retrace the steps I made in the past...
    But my path has led me to a dead end, no chance to go back...
    Now I live day to day dying slowly in some ways...
    A disease that will kill me before my next birthday...
    My mind began to ponder...An my soul began to wander...
    The devil began to pull the ground out from under...
    I guess I wonder...But I think I really deserve this...
    What sole purpose does my life play when everyday it worsens...
    AIDS isn’t a joke...It's my life an it's real...
    The day the anchor dropped on me I didn’t know what to feel...
    I shoulda been a little more careful when it came to sex...
    My minds in a hex...Now I’m living a life of regrets...
    Its all too complex...its like my life is debating...
    Heaven or Hell? Dont matter I’m ready...Whichever is waiting...


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    Nice verse....I haven't read Kwik's yet...But..this was nice...

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    Thanks Penny...OMG what is going on with RB these days? Too many people snoring in here...

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121153
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121241
    Last edited by ELEETE; March 24th, 2004 at 03:58 PM

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    Oh my god RB! Wake the fuck up!...

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    Pretty nice - what's up with all the "AIDS" pieces coming out? Felt pretty retrospective - like a person just sitting back and thinking about their life. Good work - hit my Breathless if you get a chance - peace

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    I'm dead.


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    Hence Forward

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    Well this SS i wrote so damn quick...like 15 minutes an shit...I was stuck on the topic...I agree wit B2K....SS got some shitty topics...

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    Hey holmes, whats going on Eleete? Nice verse from yourself...good flow, vocab was weak in some places but in others it made up. Topic was a little, ah. But anyways, good verse, keep it up.
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