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Agree on a line limit of 10-20 lines, nothing more nor less.
Winner is in the FW matchup next week.
Check, lines up to you.. I don't care.
Rape a pregnant bitch and tell my friends I had a threesome
check. 10-14 is good.
A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E
Blah. busy the rest of this week....so....
Aisle, this matchup’s a joke, Phoeniix is only playin’ tough,
Beatin’ him’s like bein the best in Hence Forawrd…not sayin’ much,
He’d hafta make up shit, Phoeniix ya better not lie to me,
Cuz I know you have no personals, I keep blank diaries,
Imagine the irony, the punches from his talons can’t land right,
Ima clip this bitches wings, and show ya this bird can’t fly,
People always worried he gonna bite, it’s what minds go through,
Shit, that’s prolly the reason you always got two i’s on you!…. get it?
And don’t think you won if you get less votes, these aint golf scores,
This bitch about a year past his freshness, like high school sophomores,
Ya LLL jr. record is aite, but how many times you been beat?
Only askin’, cuz ya so fuckin’ stretched ya wingspan seems 10 feet,
Here’s some advice, get a clue n have ya length lowered n so….
Hence Forward? Word, yall mufuckas only got forward to go
Rape a pregnant bitch and tell my friends I had a threesome
Saw the ambiguous titles and thought $pit might step in
I was suddenly motivated...
...till I noticed Politricks checked in
I mean this kid for Flyweight? Bitch could never pull this
It's fucking common knowledge that Politics is bullshit
And to sum this battle up, I think its just best to say
Phoeniix rose from the ash hot...
...Poli won't ever leave the cage
Could I measure up? I read your verse and got answers
I couldn't match that shit...
...unless I was diagnosed with brain cancer
Thrown in this match so fast you ain't got breathin room
Think you had a chance at being champ?
...You should hate Aisle for teasing you
Been here 3 weeks and just had to beat these 3 geeks
My post is flooded with talent...Your's is barely knee deep
Stuck in Jr. forever and that's Politrick's hopeless story
So while I climb to triple L, bitch...
...you can hold the ladder steady for me
A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E
Hate/morom vote is gone.
-Aisle
Last edited by Aisle Phive; March 25th, 2004 at 05:43 PM
Politrix:
Aisle, this matchup’s a joke, Phoeniix is only playin’ tough,
Beatin’ him’s like bein the best in Hence Forward…not sayin’ much,
Maybe there's somethin I dont get...but weakish open
He’d hafta make up shit, Phoeniix ya better not lie to me,
Cuz I know you have no personals, I keep blank diaries,
Aight concept, good rhyme
Imagine the irony, the punches from his talons can’t land right,
Ima clip this bitches wings, and show ya this bird can’t fly,
Nice thought...punch wasn't really hard ( I realize a pheonix is a bird. )
People always worried he gonna bite, it’s what minds go through,
Shit, that’s prolly the reason you always got two i’s on you!…. get it?
Hmm. okay.
And don’t think you won if you get less votes, these aint golf scores,
This bitch about a year past his freshness, like high school sophomores,
Good play.
Ya LLL jr. record is aite, but how many times you been beat?
Only askin’, cuz ya so fuckin’ stretched ya wingspan seems 10 feet,
No punch there.
Here’s some advice, get a clue n have ya length lowered n so….
Hence Forward? Word, yall mufuckas only got forward to go
Good play on tha name...
You gotsta make those punches hit harder. There were only three good hits or personals. And make sure ur open in better nex time.
Pheoniix:
Saw the ambiguous titles and thought $pit might step in
I was suddenly motivated...
...till I noticed Politricks checked in
ehh open
I mean this kid for Flyweight? Bitch could never pull this
It's fucking common knowledge that Politics is bullshit
lame, sorry
And to sum this battle up, I think its just best to say
Phoeniix rose from the ash hot...
...Poli won't ever leave the cage
Maybe there's sumthin I dont get, but if there isn't, weak
Could I measure up? I read your verse and got answers
I couldn't match that shit...
...unless I was diagnosed with brain cancer
kinda weak, comon
Thrown in this match so fast you ain't got breathin room
Think you had a chance at being champ?
...You should hate Aisle for teasing you
Don't be so cocky now.
Been here 3 weeks and just had to beat these 3 geeks
My post is flooded with talent...Your's is barely knee deep
Aight rhyme, okay concept. Kinda self glorifyin.
Stuck in Jr. forever and that's Politrick's hopeless story
So while I climb to triple L, bitch...
...you can hold the ladder steady for me
Nice close tho.
You had a nice close, but no hard hitting punches.
Both of you should've dropped harder. Seemed like you were both expecting the other guy to drop somethin wack, so you didn't try hard.
Ima go wit Politrix. He had tha harder punches
ima go with politrix on this.....
both you dropped nice here wit some herd hitting punches....
pOli had better metas and wordplay .... flowed better....
and his punches were more direct.... his verse was straight wittier...
vote - poli
good verse by pheoniix tho .... cant say he didnt come hard...
shit.... this was fuckin sick. nice battle.
Poli (after Phoeniix's punch, I have to call you Poli) - you had some good punches, but you fucked your best one up by saying 'get it?' ..... alot of personals, the one's on hence foward were good (though untrue of course) and you had some ok wordplay. But all in all, still and LLL Jr. verse which shows you're really not ready for a FW or LW shot yet.
Phoeniix - started out strong, stayed consistant, hard hitting.... but most of all fuckin mean, ego-trippin and witty. That's what this shit is all about. Enough stroking you're already ugly ego.
Vote - Phoeniix
VoTe = Politricks
Poli - consistantly effective personals.. hard hittin thru out.. flowed fine an was easy to follow.. a couple of quotables..
U nearly went too far with the 'bird' related lines but still came original.. solid verse..Originally Posted by Politricks
Phoe - not bad.. but personals werent as effective.. didnt feel u opened strong but u picked up soon enuff an stayed consistant.. it flowed ok an the structure was fine.. felt u played on the 'climbin LLL' theme a bit too much.. thats been done by everyone already..
So Politricks takes this for more consistancy.. more effective an witty personals an for bein more original.. but a close battle none the less.. an a decent read.
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Mehh...
...Ok battle.
Basicly it came down to wittiness and punches...
...Which I though Phoeniix got in this.
Some of Poli's lines were aight...
...but not hardhitting, and why explain ur punches?
Phoeniix was just overall more consistent than Poli...
...Better lines and more creativity...
V/Phoeniix
Politrix:
Aisle, this matchup’s a joke, Phoeniix is only playin’ tough,
Beatin’ him’s like bein the best in Hence Forward…not sayin’ much,
Not very direct, didn't really like.
He’d hafta make up shit, Phoeniix ya better not lie to me,
Cuz I know you have no personals, I keep blank diaries,
Ehhh, this was alright.
Imagine the irony, the punches from his talons can’t land right,
Ima clip this bitches wings, and show ya this bird can’t fly,
Terrible and played. So what if Phoeniix can't fly? Or swim, jump, and climb trees for that matter.
People always worried he gonna bite, it’s what minds go through,
Shit, that’s prolly the reason you always got two i’s on you!…. get it
I was the first to use this concept...about 2 months ago. Everyone has used it since, it's played like the FM punch against Feeble Minded.
And don’t think you won if you get less votes, these aint golf scores,
This bitch about a year past his freshness, like high school sophomores,
Kind of played but flipped well.
Ya LLL jr. record is aite, but how many times you been beat?
Only askin’, cuz ya so fuckin’ stretched ya wingspan seems 10 feet,
I actually found this to be pretty good.
Here’s some advice, get a clue n have ya length lowered n so….
Hence Forward? Word, yall mufuckas only got forward to go
I also found this to be pretty good.
Phoeniix:
Saw the ambiguous titles and thought $pit might step in
I was suddenly motivated...
...till I noticed Politricks checked in
Not a punch really, just a really good set-up. I know what you're saying but it's not direct enough.
I mean this kid for Flyweight? Bitch could never pull this
It's fucking common knowledge that Politics is bullshit
I don't like this punch at all.
And to sum this battle up, I think its just best to say
Phoeniix rose from the ash hot...
...Poli won't ever leave the cage
Decent nameplay, i liked it.
Could I measure up? I read your verse and got answers
I couldn't match that shit...
...unless I was diagnosed with brain cancer
Weak man, i didn't like this either.
Thrown in this match so fast you ain't got breathin room
Think you had a chance at being champ?
...You should hate Aisle for teasing you
This was a good punch, very effective. Liked a lot.
Been here 3 weeks and just had to beat these 3 geeks
My post is flooded with talent...Your's is barely knee deep
I've seen this concept before but it was decently flipped, not bad.
Stuck in Jr. forever and that's Politrick's hopeless story
So while I climb to triple L, bitch...
...you can hold the ladder steady for me
I liked this closer. Not too direct but pretty cool man.
So vote goes to Phoeniix for above breakdown. Politrix had the right idea but didn't carry through on it. Phoeniix, on the other hand, didn't have the concepts that Poli did but executed well with a lot of cockiness and flair. LMAO at KayOhh telling Phoeniix his verse was too cocky, that's a large part of what wins battles man.
Aisle, this matchup’s a joke, Phoeniix is only playin’ tough,
Beatin’ him’s like bein the best in Hence Forawrd…not sayin’ much,
decent
He’d hafta make up shit, Phoeniix ya better not lie to me,
Cuz I know you have no personals, I keep blank diaries,
nah
Imagine the irony, the punches from his talons can’t land right,
Ima clip this bitches wings, and show ya this bird can’t fly,
nope
People always worried he gonna bite, it’s what minds go through,
Shit, that’s prolly the reason you always got two i’s on you!…. get it?
nah
And don’t think you won if you get less votes, these aint golf scores,
This bitch about a year past his freshness, like high school sophomores,
ok
Ya LLL jr. record is aite, but how many times you been beat?
Only askin’, cuz ya so fuckin’ stretched ya wingspan seems 10 feet,
nah
Here’s some advice, get a clue n have ya length lowered n so….
Hence Forward? Word, yall mufuckas only got forward to go
eeeehh, nah
a couple decent lines, but weak verse
Saw the ambiguous titles and thought $pit might step in
I was suddenly motivated...
...till I noticed Politricks checked in
decent
I mean this kid for Flyweight? Bitch could never pull this
It's fucking common knowledge that Politics is bullshit
nope
And to sum this battle up, I think its just best to say
Phoeniix rose from the ash hot...
...Poli won't ever leave the cage
decent concept but could have been alot better
Could I measure up? I read your verse and got answers
I couldn't match that shit...
...unless I was diagnosed with brain cancer
nope
Thrown in this match so fast you ain't got breathin room
Think you had a chance at being champ?
...You should hate Aisle for teasing you
ok
Been here 3 weeks and just had to beat these 3 geeks
My post is flooded with talent...Your's is barely knee deep
eeeh, could have been better, but iight
Stuck in Jr. forever and that's Politrick's hopeless story
So while I climb to triple L, bitch...
...you can hold the ladder steady for me
lol
Poeniix gets my vote, cause he had four lines that I was feeling and Politrcks only had two. Phoenixx just came with better original concets, and out punched Poli.
Vote: Poenixx
Hence Forward
axis powers
V/Phoeniix..
Had more lines that made me laugh, overall this was a decent battle..Liked the closer..pretty funny, had harder hitting punches, both mc's flow was nothing special, and disses weren't all on point..But vote to phoeniix because he had more punches that I liked.
7th|SEVENTH MOVEMENT|7th
Due to W1CKED and Meters having matching IPs, and knowing Phoeniix and Meters are close friends. I should DQ you for cheating but i'll let Aisle decide.
Double checked....W1CKED and Meters run on AOL Proxies so valid proof is irrefutable...I suggest you two dont vote in the same battle again....and allow more than crew votes....Phoeniix wins 5-3...closed.
Phoeniix (3-0)
Politricks (1-1)
Last edited by SmokaJoka; March 26th, 2004 at 02:53 PM
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