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Last edited by Penskills; March 25th, 2004 at 07:20 PM
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i thought it was pretty dope ...liked the rhyme secence.....the rhymthen...i was really feeling ......it ............i give it ..........8/10
Spoken Word amazing they way u express yourself.
I liked this poem and the rhymesheme but as a poet it doesnt have to rhyme everytime some of the rhyme sheme kinda looked forced but the rest it was fluent
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This was a pretty dope piece...kinda reminded me of a lincoln park song....your structure was good....I like how you put all the feeling into it....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120182
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^Yes.a linkin Park song is right...This was a Fanfic I did for another site..
The contest was to take a favorite LP song and translate it to your own version...
I didn't win though
i liked it...can almost hear it being sung in the backgrounds of my mind...well done
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lmao @ those thinking he wrote this. its word for word from Linkin Park.
where is the translation?....
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