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    A piece on forgotton love..Bittersweet

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    Love comes in many forms,
    They say U can't choose who U love.
    Maybe its out of my hands,
    Determined by the higher power above.
    But all I know is I need you,
    I feel the pain when we're apart,
    And all the time I stare,
    I break another piece of my heart.

    Kwizikz

    I see your smile shine, enticing me with your movements
    Ur Motions, I watch U as I sit thinking of Improvements
    On our current situation, U got me unsure where we’re are
    I feel the twinges of hate when I look at you from a far…
    Why do we have to sneak around?...You’re too good for him
    We should be together, just me and you, the love within
    I know you feel the same way, you tell me every day
    But as time goes by, his ways keep on pulling you away
    Tell me I’m wrong, & sure enough, I will leave you alone
    But Its true what I say & the tears prove how I’ve grown
    Growing towards you, I can’t control the ache in my heart
    Pains when I’m with you, but unbearable when we’re apart
    Please let him know your feelings, I swear he’ll understand
    He’ll grow emotionally, part of being and becoming a man
    Decide now, are we going to leave it like this?or make it right?
    Cos I know U yearn for me like I do U, in the cold & night…

    I feel this way everyday,
    I burn with a desire for you.
    Even if the world ends now,
    I will still subconciously love U.
    But it is forbidden our love,
    I hate you for how I feel.
    You give me love, then take it away,
    But still, my heart is real.

    V.I.P

    When I Wake In The Mornin’ I Just Wanna Sleep Again
    Coz My Body Aches N My Mind Can't Bare The Pain
    Of You Not Lying There Naked With Me Parallel
    My Hearts Still Cryin N I Feel Like I’m In Hell.
    Coz You’re God And Your Heart Is Heavens Gates
    But Reject Me Once More And My Heart Retaliates
    It Wants To Give Up Beatin’, Nothin’s Worth Livin For
    My Love For You Is Eatin My Soul N I Want More
    For Your Paradise Of Love And Sexual Heelin’
    Not Even Iraqi Soilders Could Know Wot I’m Feelin’
    You Know How I Know That My Heartss A Muscle
    Coz It Hurts When You Work It Hard It Struggles
    I’m Attracted To You Like Haemoglobin To Blood
    Girl I’ll Love You Till There Aint Coke In The Hood
    So That’s Eternally Coz Some Things Never Change
    And I’m Hurtin Eternally, Man I’m Feelin Deranged




    Words and Emotions by the one
    & only...
    Physphon (Hooks & 1st verse)
    ....
    & the Delectable...V.I.P (2nd verse)
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    any one wanna collab on this piece get back at me
    in a PM wit a verse or summat and I'll re-post this
    as soon as get a hot enough Text-Cee to complete
    this..
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    This was pretty good here........

    Your emotion was there very nicely....I saw good imagery as well in this piece.....

    Growing towards you, I can’t control the ache in my heart
    Pains when I’m with you, but unbearable when we’re apart
    ^^Nice

    Your flow seemed pretty smooth as well....all in all a good piece.....keep up....

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    thanx....I'm ill!!!!!!!!ha ha ha..
    went for a new direction with this
    cos I always write depressed stuff,
    but now I write about depressed love..
    ha ha ha...
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    Yo, Kwiz.
    I Just PM Messaged You With A Verse.
    Add It If You Rekon Its Aight!

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    Nice!!!!!!!!!

    Nice 1 Kwiz.

    They R Pretty Tight Drops Dont U Think Peeps.

    Let Us Know Wot U Think.

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    uppin..n leave a link
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    Come On People, This Is A Tight Drop.

    Give Us Some Feedback.

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    nice piece felt it u came from the heart keep it up

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