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Verses due by Friday,
Check ins are due next Wednesday. If you don't check in there will be a replacement.
No show verses will not be permitted, if you drop a no show verse and the other person shows before the deadline you will not be allowed to edit your verse. Please don't wait for the last minute to drop, drop as early as you can.
Agree on a line limit of 10-20 lines, nothing more nor less.
Meters will hold the belt until LLL resumes or he is knocked off.
Last edited by SmokaJoka; March 18th, 2004 at 12:30 AM
Checking in.
Let's go 16 lines?
why not...
Last edited by Brethren; March 14th, 2004 at 11:51 PM Reason: Wanted to subscribe
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
A little late, but whatever...
"Is your verse on?!" cause something's running from ya lines,
Spot Meters in Eden's Garden, and hung him from Da-Vine,
You're mocked, go to any lenght to win, while I word block,
Cause like bad smiths, this kid definitely ain't no sure-lock,
Fact is he plays Monopoly too much...running out of chances,
Yea Meters raps circles...looking for ways around his wackness,
Wretched on songs, tried to catch rap, but only catching our wrongs,
Then Meters sent back to the lab...like humans fetching for dogs,
Who said a challenge? Meters battles me and gains shreads of talent,
Cut and play see-saw with your brain, but heads don't balance,
Nobodies sees that you're whack, on a track Meters needs a re-lap,
Only time you 'throw up', is battling yourself to get feedback...
No car rides... in a Harley, drives here and to the stars wide,
But even if you dropped before me, you couldn't set the bars high,
Think just cause you're LLL your big shit now, think your past death?,
Because even after 20,000 leagues, Meters couldn't grasp depth.
Last edited by Aisle Phive; March 20th, 2004 at 02:23 PM Reason: Adding lines.
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
Breth's a little bitch 'silly'...with masculinity to make opponents quiver
Too bad your sands of time have run out...
...now that i smashed your hour glass figure!
cuz I deliver punishing blows...even if this contender just wastes my time
But man, soon you'll write ill verses...after i give you a piece of my mind!
Confined in a world of idiocy...it's vicious of me to leave this moron alive
Could've no-showed and actually hurt me...
...By giving me three points instead of five!
Stepping to Meters for recognition...contend with me? you're just a fool
But i'll tie my writer's block to your leg...
...before I throw you in the talent pool!
I'll school ya to oblivion...shadowboxing this bitch who can't fight back
and you may be re-nouned...but son, your adjective'll always be 'wack'!
Bitchslap this hoe...as I obliterate his character until i get the easy win
and man, it's alright to be scared..but don't let it show in your check in!
Pinned ya far too easy...but the repercussions of this are gonna be wild
Cuz we're all going to therapy...
...When i slay Brethren and leave RB as an only child!
Food for thought? Fuck man, you're malnourished and shit outta luck
So be thankful for the chip I left on ya shoulder you impoverished fuck!
"Is your verse on?!" cause something's running from ya lines,
Spot Meters in Eden's Garden, and hung him from Da-Vine,
^nice wordplay. hehe, made me smile...
You're mocked, go to any lenght to win, while I word block,
Cause like bad smiths, this kid definitely ain't no sure-lock,
^nice wordplay. liked it.
Fact is he plays Monopoly too much...running out of chances,
Yea Meters raps circles...looking for ways around his wackness,
^concept used before. decent.
Wretched on songs, tried to catch rap, but only catching our wrongs,
Then Meters sent back to the lab...like humans fetching for dogs,
^meh...
Who said a challenge? Meters battles me and gains shreads of talent,
Cut and play see-saw with your brain, but heads don't balance,
^meh...see where you were goin...but no
Nobodies sees that you're whack, on a track Meters needs a re-lap,
Only time you 'throw up', is battling yourself to get feedback...
^hehe.
No car rides... in a Harley, drives here and to the stars wide,
But even if you dropped before me, you couldn't set the bars high,
^flipped concept. It was ok...
Think just cause you're LLL your big shit now, think your past death?,
Because even after 20,000 leagues, Meters couldn't grasp depth.
^ok...
Breth's a little bitch 'silly'...with masculinity to make opponents quiver
Too bad your sands of time have run out...
...now that i smashed your hour glass figure!
^lol...made me smile a bit
cuz I deliver punishing blows...even if this contender just wastes my time
But man, soon you'll write ill verses...after i give you a piece of my mind!
^lol...nice wordplay
Confined in a world of idiocy...it's vicious of me to leave this moron alive
Could've no-showed and actually hurt me...
...By giving me three points instead of five!
^ouch...
Stepping to Meters for recognition...contend with me? you're just a fool
But i'll tie my writer's block to your leg...
...before I throw you in the talent pool!
^hehe. decent.
I'll school ya to oblivion...shadowboxing this bitch who can't fight back
and you may be re-nouned...but son, your adjective'll always be 'wack'!
^very nice wordplay. Good punch.
Bitchslap this hoe...as I obliterate his character until i get the easy win
and man, it's alright to be scared..but don't let it show in your check in!
meh...
Pinned ya far too easy...but the repercussions of this are gonna be wild
Cuz we're all going to therapy...
...When i slay Brethren and leave RB as an only child!
^meh...
Food for thought? Fuck man, you're malnourished and shit outta luck
So be thankful for the chip I left on ya shoulder you impoverished fuck!
^lol...haha
Well...Meters did come with more wit than Brethren in this battle. And that did lead to him having stronger, and more effective punches. Actually liked the battle in a way...Both shows good flips on concepts and had sum good wordplay too.
I guess most voters will determine this on personal enjoyment factor...and mine is Meters.
v/ - Meters
Battle was close, both of you came pretty aight. Damn Meters, every week he has one line that just kills it. This week it was:
Confined in a world of idiocy...it's vicious of me to leave this moron alive
Could've no-showed and actually hurt me...
...By giving me three points instead of five!
Brethren you dissapointed me this week. The sherlock line was cool, but the rest was played with a bad flip. I wasn't feelin' most of this drop.
V/ Meters
yup...pretty much agree with everyone....Meters took this cause his punches and personals and metas hit harder and also he was more creative and original with them which emphasized them more. Meters was also more consistent with them and had an overall better verse.
I felt that Brethren came too played..his punches hit...but not as hard as Brethrens...lotsa ok punches but nothig great.
Vote=Meters
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Brethren - good verse.. opened well an stayed pretty consistant.. some nice personals.. a few played flip concepts but none too bad.. creative metas were cool..
Meters - pobably gonna get 'Punch of the Week'.. again.. several quotables.. decent personal opener.. stayed hard-hittin thru out.. didnt see u fall off..
VoTe = Meters.. for more quotables.
Nice battle.
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Meters wins (4-0)
Brethren loses (3-1)
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