Verification
÷Thìñg÷
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5th uppin....................................
ill vote on this battle thing if u vote on this battle
cuz im tired of votein and no one repayin the favor iight u vote on my battle ill vote on ur's
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119302
damn this was a totally one sided battle
thing u merked this kat fav line from u was:
verification is not clarification...
sound like ileteracy hit u wit the dunce stick 1billion swipes!
couldent verify basic knowledge like how ta wipe ya own ass
leaves the buttcrust a mile high...
iight i liked it though it could have been better
line from ver:
umm........I`l Shoot at will & wont boast, I`m only battling for my post.
because will he win 2day? Nay, unless you hire Ver as your Gh05t
. .I`m crushing you , I`m breaking you & your weak aight , look.
WEAK
breakdown:
flow:thing
mutlies:no one
punchlines:thing
enjoy reading:thing
structure:thing
opener:thing, good overall
closer thing, good overall
vote easily .... thing
please return the favor if u havent already done soo.
uppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggg and shit
uppin on this please /.//////////////////////.....................
decent battle.
thing- you came pretty good. a lot of people have that same style as you. i don't like it cuz it seems stretched. but you pulled it off in this one. your punches hit pretty well. you did your hw and hit him up wit sum nice personals. nice one.
verification- you took the flow and the structure in this battle, but i don't think that was enuff. your punchers weren't very hard hitting. you had a personal or two, but that was it. ur lines seemed played. but you still do good. but i feel ^he did better. props to both.
vote- thing...better punches
peace
^^^ima say those were ya two best lines.......they could have been worded better, but whateva......had some wordplay and a decent punch........overall ur verse wasnt that good.......ive seen way better from u.......this wasnt worded that well, there were a few metas, and some wordplay.......u had some ok personals, and punches, but nothin really stood out to me.......Originally Posted by ÷Thìñg÷
^^^i guess those were my two favorite lines.......attempted wordplay, and a pretty weak punch......overall ur verse was pretty wack.......it had a few metas.......just sad attempts at wordplay.......ya punches were either played or wack, or both.......no personals......
conclusion - in a pretty weak battle thing takes it with more metas, better wordplay, and less played and wack punches.......he also had some personals, whereas verifcation had none.......so thing gets my vote.....
VOTE - THING
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aight i felt that thing took this one for better punches and personals
he had an ok flow and the structure was good. the opener and closer were both good. You had a good verse and you had a good flow that made your verse easier to read....good showing from you
verification also had a good verse but it was way too simple.....use more personals and complex sentences...elevate and get better...flow was ok and so were the opener and closer.....keep workin at it
v/thing for good punches and personals
Thing - You had some decent punches & personals. Structure was pretty good. Flow was aight, wordplay & multies coulda been used / used more. Punches were pretty consistant. Overall.. Decent verse
Verification - Some punches, but some were played. Structure was decent, coulda been better. Flow was good. Wordplay & multies also coulda been used / used more (like i told thing). Overall.. I wasn't feelin you that much, you came close though.
V/Thing
Thing came out..
..juss a little more consistant
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