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    ...The Color Red...Blood Stains Your Mind...

    The color reds da object of my affection...
    blatant attempts to reach perfection...

    combine da five elements to get one infectious succession..
    da blood desperately seeks protection...

    it flows thruogh da human anatomy...
    gets rid of corruption simultaneously...
    enthralled blood contains cells dat contain knowledge...
    and shares it accordingly...

    it excels thru each aspect..each perspective..and each concept...
    until an incision slits da wrist...
    den it spills words of hardship...

    it rains dis color red...
    indicating devastating epidemical violence..
    it kneels to compositional embassy..
    confronting them with lyrical tendencies...

    dis blood is being transfused...
    to fill up dese vacant minds..
    but sickle cell anemia would result in...
    evil satanic rhymes...

    the blood gets colder...
    more frigid by da heartbeat...
    in da veins theres nothing left but frost...
    and icicles in da arteries...

    until da mind burns wit fire...
    da terminals scorching wit flames...
    and the only thing dat can extinguish it...
    is da thoughtz u have retained...

    yo frame has internal affairs...
    a different universe is in your soul...
    where da population is above average..
    and each individual has a main goal...

    da plasma consists of platelets...
    dat heals da battle scars...
    but those pains are what it takes to write...
    such sensational bars...

    the color red represents knowledge...
    your blood is your exquisite thoughtz...
    people are rebels against dis...
    filled wit resistant hearts...

    taxation on words is unfair...
    words were born unbred...
    concealed emotions let loose...
    represent da color red...

    peace

    tell me if u understand the meaning of dis poem

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    Yo dawg is it open mic or poem??

    Anywayz alwats enjoy readin yo pieces cuz they always consist of big Vocabs..lol Color Red...ummmm It can be your blood or the fact u representing a gang Blood..lol Either way i like the image and once again vocab vocab contend was nice seemed kinda forced sometimes u tried to rhyme...but it was fluent.

    nice 1 homey.

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    You need to reply on two other OM's and drop the link to those replies in this thread.. Or this will be closed..

    Thank you..

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    ^ dont freepost like that.

    And Freeman is right get links or this gets closed.

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    hey this is tight it has alot of meaning to it

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    hold up u from chicago finally I know someone from here were u at

    if you ever freepost like this again you will be whacked with the bann stick so hard that you won't be able to sit for weeks. (read: you will be banned)
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    im from da southside of chicago...
    anyways..
    da meaning of dis poem is dat the color red represents knowlege and blood represents thoughtz..
    and in the title to break it down

    ...Knowledge...Thoughtz Stain Your Mind....

    dis blood is being transfused...
    to fill up dese vacant minds..
    but sickle cell anemia would result in...
    evil satanic rhymes...

    dis is basically saying dat knowledge is being spread daily but sometimes some knowledge isnt good knowledge

    it rains dis color red...
    indicating devastating epidemical violence..
    it kneels to compositional embassy..
    confronting them with lyrical tendencies...


    one of my favorite parts of dis piece... dis is saying dat some knowledge or thoughtz contain backgrounds of violence meaning that da writer has experience some pain or trauma in da past....

    hope dat sums up everyones questions thx fo feed bak
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