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Thread: Im only a theif cuz im cheap....hahahaha, check this out

  1. #1
    YoungBobby
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    Im only a theif cuz im cheap....hahahaha, check this out

    i use to ride a bike now i roll in your jetta/
    still at the school house writing your girl letters/
    and you wonder why theyre dry with you, cuz i get em wetter/
    my dick gets sick, throwing up cum that blasts like barettas/
    poetic verses the next time theyll see you will be in a hurse at a church/
    my fist will leave your face molested and hurt like a victim of rape/
    call me white man, with the white cape, representing that KKK, jump out a car with 8 AKs thats sure to make em pray/
    Short and to the point that i didnt have.

  2. #2
    I sing the body electric. Maven.'s Avatar
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    reply to two other open mics, and post links to your replies or this gets closed.
    leave decent feedback.
    thanks.
    wordperfect?
    ..o0Pure0o..

  3. #3
    State_of_Mind
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    flow was ok buh the vocab was too simple for me...overall this piece didnt cut it buh the flow was nice. make it longer so i can actually critique you

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...900post1241900

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    i agree...
    bad topic i lost interest after the first four lines....
    and if u do represent da kkk then watch yo back lol
    keep elevating dawg

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