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  1. March 3rd, 2004, 01:08 PM #1
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    Unhappy Forbidden!!!!!

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    Why we as people love to have what we can't
    Just cuz you got a big ass I want in yo pants
    your eyes are hazil before we fall in love I'd hate you
    I want pussy that is the only reason I date you
    Maybe play you say I love you and fake to
    we had sex now I am trying to stay cool
    trying to make you relate to........... myself and my past
    Fuck playing you tamra I wanna last
    Ever since the ass our connection crashed
    Why did you give it up so fast???
    Our motives crash and emotions get whiplash
    Now I miss ya ass
    You graduated and finally making a living
    Love is forbidden who am I kidding
    Listen!!!!!!!!!
    I never loved a girl as much as I loved you
    Now you act like a bitch with an attitude
    I stay mad at you because you don't know your value
    now you take drugs and moved to cancoon
    I still call you deep inside I wish you was by my side
    But I'm only 19 and I can't provide
    with tears in your eyes you claimed we spend the rest of our lives.....
    Together until one of us die.....remember you and I
    I never respected you till you was gone
    To make the situation worse you carrying my son
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  2. March 3rd, 2004, 03:03 PM #2
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    damn homie in high school I got feedback homie
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  3. March 3rd, 2004, 09:20 PM #3
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    ok I should rap about killing someone or selling crack......not what happens foreal because that get's no feedback....I can do that and I will
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  4. March 3rd, 2004, 11:06 PM #4
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    Don't regress - this was better than what I've seen from you before. Felt some emotion in this. I've still got pretty much the same advice I gave you before - but I've noticed some improvement. Keep working on vocab - phrases like:

    your eyes are hazil
    trying to make you relate to........... myself and my past
    Our motives crash and emotions get whiplash

    are good. Flow was alright - keep working on it. Nice closing line - made the piece hit harder. Keep writing - hit my ELEETE collab if you get a chance. (Two Geniuses - One Mind)

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  5. March 3rd, 2004, 11:10 PM #5
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    yeah what he said lol naw this was ok i like it better than what i've seen from u b4

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    THANKS YALL...THIS TIME i DID'NT GIVE A SHIT ABOUT MULTIES OR VOCAB...i JUST SPIT SOMETHING THAT REALLY HAPPENED
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  7. March 4th, 2004, 06:27 PM #7
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    more feedback yall
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