10 lines
blindspit
1 hour & 30 min time limit
fail to meet deadline i win
no hate d/r votes
no feeding
no recycling
no biting
no bull shit
check in
no krew votes
Rappad
It
10 lines
blindspit
1 hour & 30 min time limit
fail to meet deadline i win
no hate d/r votes
no feeding
no recycling
no biting
no bull shit
check in
no krew votes
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n/m dogg you never checked in
lets just make this due by tomorrow night
deadline is march 3rd 11:59 PM
check in first
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*Boxer=punches......etc
**Book=IT, by Stephen king, about an object with no appearance that takes the shape of things like a clown, a spider, etc, and gets killed by a group of kids.....twice
rest is self explanitory.
You die right.....about.....now
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I guess it was a somebody, then he fucked up nicely
Cuz on RB you had to 'Hack,man,' just like Gene
Now stop and think, bitch I'm tired of your wack fakin
Cuz you just filler up, like full service gas stations
Keep tryin to taunt me, It sound dumb when speaking
But I'm known to drop the boxers, like public streaking*
Think your ill, but I bet you can't even brave storms
Cuz as we know from the book, IT gets killed in all forms!**
You only hanging with hope, cuz none of ya punches are hard
Leave ya muddy and scarred, cuz like Snickers no one's 'nutty for It's bars.'
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goodbye.
Go Red Wings
you never said to check in.
Anyways, drop when you want......
Go Red Wings
damn ya bold droppin that whack shit i guess u is "Rappad"
u have the same style u quack no wonda ya records trajic!
hurried a win but this "Rap" "Pad" is merly a bloody tampon
a flurry of gayness is ya hold & now ya mad cuz ya "faceoff!"
...imbarrassed i know,i mean this sopose to b ya homepage
take ya verse flush that down tha stormdrain itsa wormplague!
ya a bug&tha only way ya "rock"is "n tha life of the earthworm"
...ya nota mean mug&when ya strug is cuz its ya 1st"firm!"
u a small dick&this kid couldent floor me even ifshe was concrete
its not that u sucked today but ya pores bursted ya"keysecrete!"
^Originally Posted by Rappad
damn wtf is this whack ass bull shit dogg? omfg idk
i mean talk about trying to get some sorta attention
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lol....took you long enough
Ok people start voting........
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Go Red Wings
alrite this battl;e was quite nice rapped ent seen you,
spit in ages man wats good?.....well neway,
rapped-had a nice sence of flow a simple and good,
structure with nice sense of wordplay..alot of personals thrown,
and alot better punches here as they were clever and hard,
it-nopt bad man but your wordplay was wak as fuck man,
this made your punches really hard to get as the flow,
was affected from your wordplay it would have bin,
alot better if you just werded if differently...also,
your [punches hav to hit with personals......rapped 1 tip man,
i dont think you shud have to explain your shit so much....but
v-rapped
plz plz hit this now man as i took the time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117659 thx man.
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^make sure you follow the link plz man............................thx................ ..
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..................rise............................
Go Red Wings
ROFlmao. . . .
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Go Red Wings
Punches: Rappad, the service gas stations line was dope, nothing really quotable from It.
Wordplay: Rappad, the nutty line was decent wordplay, I thought you could've worded it better though.
Multis: Neither, both used 1 syllable lines.
Personals: It, most of your verse was personals, some were weak though
Opener: Neither, both didn't even ryhme, or rhyme well, and were not great punches, both started off horrid.
Closer: Rappad, had a nice wordplay, didn't feel It's finisher.
Vote - Rappad
It you need to throw more punches and wordplay, and actually use more syllables in your rhyme scheme to get a better flow out of it. I see where you were going with the punches, but you never got there. Let is flow smoothly. Rappad had some nice punches, used a bit of filler, but still good.
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
. . .D/R^. . .
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Aight this went to rapid because he had two nice lines .....some of your shit was played....i.e full service gas station fill em up....heard it before......that was the only one but it really hurt your verse overall.......Good wordplay that helps you out alot..i like the boxers line and that was really about it.....but i wasn't feeling IT on this one...
IT you need to stay away from the midsection and all things related....dicks ..pussies...TAMPONS....plus man this concept is overly play i remeber last year when i first got here i saw The Exectutive use that concept and i thought it was the shit but its just old now man....really wasn't feeling your rhyme scheme work on that......had a couple ok punches but really nothing beat..............the wordplay actually......so vote goes to rappad...i took the time do tha same...and it poll your vote on my battle thanx..
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114166
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man how you gonna vote for this herb omg
his verse was blah yer just a D/R get the fuck outta here stupid mother fucker god damn upping for me to win this ehh. . . .
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