Structure - Thing
Opener - Thing
Punches - Thing
Flow - pretty well tied
Personals - Thing
Originality - Thing
Weakness - Stryk9
Multies - Neither
Wordplay - Neither
Finisher - Thing
Stryk9: verse was weak, punches were soft. Not many personals, and the ones that were attempted were played. Structure was gone to hell, a bunch of stretched lines.
(best bar from you)
^pretty played, but that was your best.Originally Posted by Stryk9
Thing: Nice structure, lines were nice and short. Punches were decent, a few hit pretty hard. Personals.. eh.. a few were used. Overall.. decent piece.
(best bar from you)
^Decent, pretty funnyOriginally Posted by Thing
Overall.. Thing got this
His punches hit harder, structure was better.. and came better overall
Stryk9 has alot of time yet to elevate, so not hate.. good luck, elevate!
V/Thing