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Enygma
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Checkin in..............I've been writin for a minute
Your name looks like its from that movie wit Morgan Freeman/
But my rhymes are sicker, leave you cough and sneezin/
My spits are suffocatin and I see you're often wheezin/
And even your name predicts that you just won't get even/
Your flow's a joke, plus rhymes are pitiful/
And I probably shouldn't be doin this to such a little dude/
You wanna ball wit the big boys, remember you asked to get into this/
The only way I see you leavin this battle's on the injured list/
Court is now in session, don't get convicted for perjury/
Lyin to these people about how you gone be merkin me/
Now lets hear your closin remarks, I won't take it too personally/
Cause if you gave syphillis to your girl, that'd be your only chance of burnin me/
Dropping done in like 5 minutes started typing a lil while before ya checked in
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Check it, Ayo, Check it,
I’ll work this Enygma guy, so it’s his word against my word
Only time he get’s witty, is when he mixes a noun wit a verb
Short and sweat, my heat covers him like a freshly paved street
If he tried to take off into this game, he’d still be stuck on his feet
He’s more trash than I thought, no potential in him, that’s a fact
Said vote on my battles in frontlines and he set our battle up in bitch slapped
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116862
If I battle him again he’ll be crushed, like his first time getting fucked
He can’t make it across RB, or else his big ass ego would get stuck
Guy says it’s juss business in his sig, you a herb or is that how you get down
Got wins handed and handed one to me, so wat comes around, goes around
hey, se7en took this one again.
enygma, ur punches had semi-weak words. Up ur vocab dude, but u had better structure
se7en, ur wordplay flowed better and punches hit harder. Ima hav to say u won this but u coulda dont better but u didnt need to i guess. No hate guys.
v/se7en
return fav. if u can
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He’s more trash than I thought, no potential in him, that’s a fact
Said vote on my battles in frontlines and he set our battle up in bitch slapped
^^lmao... this is classic... ummm can i say man? flow was on... decent structure...needs some complexity... vocab can be upped... more personals...
My spits are suffocatin and I see you're often wheezin/
And even your name predicts that you just won't get even/
^^k i got that... but it wasn't very much of a punch... really the punches here didn't stick at alll... an uneven flow in most parts tooo... just keep workin on things cuz i think it's just generally a bit herbish... need more complexity in the verse and wordplay is a must... try to work similes and metaphors to your advantage... noted that you used personals ok but not as well as him...
vote = 7
plz take the time to vote on the link in my sig... it would be appreciated.
Hence Forward
ayo fav line from se7en:
fav line from eny:I’ll work this Enygma guy, so it’s his word against my word
Only time he get’s witty, is when he mixes a noun wit a verb
Short and sweat, my heat covers him like a freshly paved street
If he tried to take off into this game, he’d still be stuck on his feet
He’s more trash than I thought, no potential in him, that’s a fact
Said vote on my battles in frontlines and he set our battle up in bitch slapped
breakdown:Your name looks like its from that movie wit Morgan Freeman/
But my rhymes are sicker, leave you cough and sneezin/
My spits are suffocatin and I see you're often wheezin/
structure:se7en
flow:se7en
multies:se7en
x/se7en
Return the favor in my battle in my signature please
uppin x1 and thanx for the votes I got Enygma wit that one bitch slapped line is wat ya'll are saying, thanx, please drop more honest votes.....VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE
I'll take the criticism....but the only line he had was that bitch slapped one I set him up wit. It didn't take a genius to come up wit that..........Anyway, nice battle man, I guess you got me
thank god, ur not cryin about it like timeless or kareless damn. Just take the advice and work with it, thats the way to get better not by bitchin about lossen. Goo battle.
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uppin x2 and thanx for the votes I got Enygma wit that one bitch slapped line is wat ya'll are saying, thanx, please drop more honest votes.....VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE
no need for a breakdown, seven took this battle, with more personals!!! i really look for these when i vote shows ya being witty aginst the other oponent!! flow went to enygma just and vocab and punches to severn again!! sorry for not beakin down, but i wanna go to bed!! pz
vote = seven!!
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uppin x3 and thanx for the votes I got Enygma wit that one bitch slapped line is wat ya'll are saying, thanx, please drop more honest votes.....VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE
enigma -
Your name looks like its from that movie wit Morgan Freeman/
But my rhymes are sicker, leave you cough and sneezin/
no
My spits are suffocatin and I see you're often wheezin/
And even your name predicts that you just won't get even/
ok punch
Your flow's a joke, plus rhymes are pitiful/
And I probably shouldn't be doin this to such a little dude/
doin what? makes you sound perved...j/k lol
You wanna ball wit the big boys, remember you asked to get into this/
The only way I see you leavin this battle's on the injured list/
funny...but not hard hittin
Court is now in session, don't get convicted for perjury/
Lyin to these people about how you gone be merkin me/
weak punch...blah
Now lets hear your closin remarks, I won't take it too personally/
Cause if you gave syphillis to your girl, that'd be your only chance of burnin me/
nice closer, best of your verse
and
Se7en-
work this Enygma guy, so it’s his word against my word
Only time he get’s witty, is when he mixes a noun wit a verb
eh...
Short and sweat, my heat covers him like a freshly paved street
If he tried to take off into this game, he’d still be stuck on his feet
what? short and sweet, not sweat..but hey have it your way
He’s more trash than I thought, no potential in him, that’s a fact
Said vote on my battles in frontlines and he set our battle up in bitch slapped
good punch/personal
If I battle him again he’ll be crushed, like his first time getting fucked
He can’t make it across RB, or else his big ass ego would get stuck
nah...
Guy says it’s juss business in his sig, you a herb or is that how you get down
Got wins handed and handed one to me, so wat comes around, goes around
ok closer, decent
overall goes to Se7en, better punches/personal, wittier.
yall drop an honest vote like the thread promised...
on this:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115255
and the link in my sig
uppin x4 and thanx for the votes, please drop more honest votes.....VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE
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