Thing vs. jockyourself

[Meks.]

jock yourself ..... u are wack ....lern how to throw a punch ... lern how to use creativity and witt..... ur structure wasnt good .... but better toward the end.... your vocab lacked....and u came on that wanna be vet shit ... when ur not good....u need to elevate..... metas and wordplay were OK....but that it..... no goood verse ... 7/20

thing ... least u try'd to diss him creativly ... good struct....metas and punches .... tried a personal or two ....la jawn was nice..... your wordplay was ok ... obivously u did just enough to win ..... cuz you merked this fool .....
12/20

v/- thing
peace

[Meks.]

damn forgot my link here..........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117164
peep that wit ya honesty

[Slit Viciouz]

Thing - u had alotta personals. direct disses u didnt side track at all, u also flowed pretty well.it wasnt the best thing i eva saw but it was good enuf.

jockyourself - your verse bored me u wasnt flowin yah words togeather nicely and in the begining i really aint see where everything rhymed.it also lack meanin it seemed like u was jus typin away jus to not no show.

Vote - Thing

[Waz]

word thing took this easily i cant wait til i get enough posts to vote to show weak ass mc's how easily they lose

["PheerLess"]

Shit if mo fuckin obvious

Punches- Think
Flow- Thing
Ryme scheme- thing
Enjoyment- Thing
Overall-THINK

DAMN pz

[Mimesis.]

thing easily fuckin takes this.....

but i dont feel like breakin shit down, and i jockyourself will end up sayin its dr.......

so if i feel like breakin this shit down sometime then ill come back.....

until then im not goin to poll.....

but i still think thing won......

[phenomicaliverse]

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[phenomicaliverse]

^sorry delete that post

hit this link up and ill be back to vote or drop an opinion on the battle

http://www.freewebs.com/verbalmurdercrew/

[UNDEAD.]

MY VERDICT

This was an aight batle both of you did well but thing out did jock by a little bit.

thing: good attacks and nice flow you did well in your drop good attacks on personals and about "cockyness" lol worked it well and out shon your oponenet good structure and i think i saw a multie in there sumwhere. 6/10
my favourite line:
"kids as close as beeting me jus like if "jockyourself"actually gets laid
which is impossible. .closest ya been to sex was a "plasticDoll made"

jock: good start at the begining but you lost your focus near the end you could of done better but a good drop anyway good flow and an ok structure but needs work
you ryhmes were good but nuthin that technical u should aim ur sights on betta and more complex lyrics.8/10
my favourite line:
"dis is front lines, wer da loser is bitch slapped and da real emcee is chose/
why do you lightweight hoes even fuck wit us rap battle pros/"


Flow:thing
structure:thing
puches:thing
attack:thing
swears:jock

MY VOTE: Thing

please return the favour by voteing in my threads. (look in my siggy)

[Noob]

Uppin this shit. lmfao. Dope ish. Another ill battle from a illhead.

Hahaha.

[ILLunatic]

kids as close as beeting me jus like if "jockyourself"actually gets laid
which is impossible. .closest ya been to sex was a "plasticDoll made"

^prolly the best from thing in this battle.. Still played tho
Punch was decent, could use work in places.

jockyourself didnt' exactly have any punches or lines worth quoting
They were all pretty lame. The punches were soft, none directly connected.

V/Thing

Thing gets this simply for comin better with punches, structure, flow.