Se7eN v.s MadMC

[Se7eN]

Rules:

12 lines
Blind Spits due in 40 minutes
No hate, d/r, bullshit, or crew votes

check in dawg................then key up a verse

[Se7eN]

check in dawg

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[Se7eN]

check in dawg ************************************

[madmc]

I'm dumb haha i found it but it wasnt there earlier!
alright clock starts now

[Se7eN]

(verse)

I’ll make this guy seem un-doubtful, like a pen that can’t squirt ink
Have him wanting to be filled like a space that says “insert link”
I’m lyrically magic, it’s tragic, that I had to up and fire you
Cause the only way your part MC, if ~MC~Donalds hired you
This guy’s battle verses are senseless like a speach spoke by the pope
Only time he can be dope, is when he’s rolled, licked, and then smoked
Guy begging to get a battle, guess his herbness runs in his heritage
Naming the list, he’s talking shit, can’t spit, and agrees wit gay marriages
Ending this pending controversy on why this kid is never gonna make it
Cause he couldn’t get people’s attention, if he had a mic and was naked
I’ll end this verse, and curse out and blurt till this guy closes his mouth
He’s more scared than a virgin, wit a girl that wants him to go down south

[madmc]

you know what how bout less than 40 minutes
like 15 unless your too slow!!

[Oakley]

se7en go check in....
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115919

[madmc]

heres mine:

this is my first bout to make yours look like the worst you sound like a bitch with a purse
my connections disconnect disrespect leve you wrecked matta fact i got a tech to detatch your head and neck
when my lyrics hit you you'll get whipped, flipped then slip I'm fully equipped to inflict sick shit like tales from the crypt
your a fuckin tough talker I'll make you a rough walker you'll be left walkin awkward
like a highly trained slut/stalker
I'm the pimp of the nation your the king of masterbation who's full of frustration
you just received all the pain and shame
I just spat sickness and quickness at you like acid rain!!!

now we need votes

[madmc]

I gotta admit your shit was pretty tight!
mine wasn't long enough

[madmc]

here I gotta give a couple more lines it wasn't long enough so votes don;t count yet

I'm probly half your age but twice as viscious
I'll throw hard lyrics at you like dishes
stick to being a little girl and keep singin bootyliscious! (destiny's child)

whatever i fucked up a bit VOTE PPL!!!

[Laureate]

Se7en took this...he jus came more creative and original...also had harder punches and personals in his verse...Madmc work on ya structure...cause it effects your flow..try and even it out...Not a bad verse from you tho Madmc...jus try and be creative with ya punches/personals/metas...you did have a few ok multis...but make sure that your multis are also punches..dun use them jus to have multis in ya verse...Se7en good drop

Se7en drop an honest vote here...MadMC drop an honest opinion since you have under 100 posts....Thanks http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115653

[madmc]

we need votes so ppl if you read for this then FUCKING VOTE!!!!!!

[Se7eN]

uppin x1 please vote people VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE

[lyricallyabbusiv]

hmmmmmmm
7 takes this no doubt....he had better punches.....better flow...n most of all creativity...his punches had meaningz 2 em.....n if u understood em...they were pretty funny........
madmc- ur opener waz wakkkkkkkkkkkkkk.....no offence.u didnt really try...ur punches were pretty weak....ur flow was a bit off....and u really have 2 work on ur structure
one-sided battle
punches- 7...easily...good shit
flow- se7en....easier to go with..kept the rhythm
structure- 7...its visible
creativity- se7en...put meaning bhind punches
vote- se7en

one-sided
plze hit this up dawg....thnxx
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115933

[Se7eN]

uppin x2 please vote people VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE