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Verses due by NEXT Friday, I put the matches up now for more exposure to check in.
Check ins are due next Wednesday. If you don't check in there will be a replacement.
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Checkin in....10-12 lines???
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Last edited by rule; February 26th, 2004 at 02:41 PM Reason: Links
Soft Focus
..Returns..
sure that'll work...
checkin in
I.J.L.
Bitch..your on the war ground now awaiten to open Rapid Fire
W/ a thread abreviation name cuz Insane Joker Lyricest expired
For a co-leader position you lack in the talent expected to hold
GameTime ranked ya last out'a 5 of ya crew let the truth be told
Ya Arsens Ill? Right up until..somebody opens the roster thread
I.J.L. Arsenal:
...SmokaJoka666
...~RaPiDfIrE~
...TheUnderRated
...GameTime
...Ill Testament
...lyric
...illtalic
^^Elite roster..Blah.. ye'all starven cuz true vets wont pass the bread
Ya under rated lyrics put in illtalic with a ill testimate awaiten gametime
Smok a this joka before the whistle blew hurten ya..an leaven ya crew flatlined
Inpecable queer claimen talent but pissed cuz nobody dick rides ya crotch
Nobody will fuck with me Until ya rep the Ars-en-ILL will Lub ye thoughts
Comen with flipped concepts to dismantel this whore between periods
Don't want you to get depressed..se before the votes come in...
...together i'll pierce ya eye lids
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Explinations:
IJL want a different crew name
Top five battlers in the Ars crew...
.......gametime ranked him 5th
The rest you should be able to understand.
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Good Luck Rapidfire
Soft Focus
..Returns..
Up over closed battles.
^ I don't get it....I'm a little slow...regardless here's my verse...
Ayo
I'm hotta than gasoline poored on the floor it seems...
yea they call u 'Rule', because you're a queen....
u feelin the pain inside, just like I impale ya intestines...
cuz ur open mics are worse than your spelling of "heaven"*
u comin in second..can't see me like I ripped ya opticals...
ur like dog shit on a good book....just stick to topicals...
I opened 'My Teenage Eyes'...but realized that shit sucks...
n u can't get rid of me like some bad hiccups...
wackness at RB...well I blame it on you..
b/c u 'focus' on being 'soft' like the name of ya crew...
n that's ironic...cuz nobody ever seen u flowin hard..
ur just another dead canadian like Owen Hart**!!!
(*) He has an open mic called "Heavon on Earth" the spelling of heaven is wrong...and he reposted it several times, each time spelled that way...
(**) Incase you don't watch wrestling...Owen Hart was a Canadian wrestler that died back in 1999 when a ppv stunt went wrong...Rule is Canadian too....
the rest should be pretty easy to figure out...
good luck
peace
I.J.L.
aight good battle
rule- had a good verse
good punches
good personals
flow was there
structure was good
opener was good
closer could have been better
good verse
8-10
rapidfire-ok verse
good punches
personals were ok
flow was good
structure was good
opener was ok
closer was nice
7-10
rapidfire started off really soft and then turned it on at the end. it wasnt enough though because rule had a good verse from top to bottom. he was very consistant and won this battle with that and personals
v/rule
both verses had their weak points... but Rule's creativity is what got this. The use of the whole crew roster in the punch set up was nice. There were really no hard hitting punches... Rapid - liked the dog shit on a good book punch... lol
both of you need to elevate, but you both had personals which is more than I can say for a lot of textcees.....
vote = rule
^ isn't a textcee bitch lol...j/k
I'm not a textcee tho..I do audio more than text...which is why I'm not as good at text....neway I'm not gonna sway votes but I say BLAH lol....
peace
I.J.L.
rule - couldnt catch a flow.. mad stretched i thought.. an alot of ya lines were forced.. didnt understand the line under the roster..
^ lines like that are confusin an really disrupt the verse.. i wasnt really followin alot of ya ideas.. but u did have some cool personals in there an wen its re-read there are some creative punches.. but a lil too stretched an confusin..Originally Posted by rule
Rapid - rather general in places.. but ya personals were effective an ya used some nice metas.. simple style was easy to follow so the flow was on point.. punches were consistant too..
VoTe = Rapid (easier to follow an more effectively personal)
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^i disagree that roster shit did zffect his flow,
but it worked nice wich was gr8 creativity,
also rule had alot harder punches...rapid you had,
alot nicer structure but you shudnt have to explain,
your punches that much in lll....but not bad man,
v-rule
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Rapid came more original, Really played...
Rule Just brought more creativity to the table..More humor...Ect..
V/ Rule
i gave this to rule
rapid's verse was to basic and wasn't creative at all rule came harder and had a better overall verse
vote=rule
rule- i think your lines were a little too stretched out, some of them were hard to read or they just didn't flow that well but you did have some nice wordplay and personals in your verse, i just had to re-read certain spots to grasp the concept
rapid-you verse had some decent personals and punches but you started off too weak and then it picked up a little way through, if you would have came consistent throughout your entire verse this battle would have been yours, you did use some creative lines though and for the most part your verse was pretty good
v/rule
ima have to go with rule on this one
rules structure was fucked up wih the list, but other than that flow was good
rapids flow was also good
punches, creativity, vocab all go to rule.... rapidfire u need to elevate son...
so vote goes to rule
.. im back
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