HW Matchup: $pitacular Vs. Inversry

[Aisle Phive]

Read the rules.
Verses due by NEXT Friday, I put the matches up now for more exposure to check in.
Check ins are due next Wednesday. If you don't check in there will be a replacement.
No show verses will not be permitted, if you drop a no show verse and the other person shows before the deadline you will not be allowed to edit your verse. Please don't wait for the last minute to drop, drop as early as you can.
Agree on a line limit of 10-20 lines, nothing more nor less.

HW Match Winner = Automatic stay in LLL for at least two weeks stay if they come good.
MW Match & LW Match Winners = Both will square off in a do or die match in LLL.

[R.Roots]

16lines? Check In Thats A LONG PERIOD of time...It should be Monday Verses r Due

Anyway good luck.

I was going to wait till Monday to set the matches up, but decided to do it now.

-Aisle

[$pitacular]

16 is fine. Good luck

Checkin IN.

Yo Aisle - will drop three more votes as soon as I can... all battles 'cept the ones I voted on are either locked & done or both haven't dropped yet... Thanks

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115696
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115699

[R.Roots]

Your good ? Nope, & listen chump..you cant harm me
Cos…
……Il leave you so imbrassed, you’ll jump to new Rb.
You & Illunatic..Running Your Crew..Ok.., For Starters.
But His ^ Dna's Found In Yours...BETS Your More than crew Partners

U tried to Keep Me Outta Elite... then your The First to jump on my Dick
U tell me you Gotta Crew Now... then you Point Out that it's Shit

Your Trash, You've Crashed & Still A Herb....The Fuck You Ment^^?
& If You Wanted To Make Sense...
..............................................A-B-C Ur Verse In...Word Document
Im a VIP, that’s why im here…& we should be balanced
But..aisle phive left his mind at home….N placed ½ The talents
Your one of these..............1.shit, 2 wack or 3. , dope or Skilled...
But You Gotta Be 1 & 2.........Cos Your no way close to ill...
Your a sinner, likewise spita sit back and.....Receive Anointment
Cos Il Put shells Up There^<-& thats where he's pointed...
Dedication, Determination….that’s how my Gang Works
Cos im tearing him , limb by limb , And That’s why im rank 1st
Your Useless, I’ll conflict damage, & listen no one needs you..
So prepair for war..Look Dude^..there’s a sneak preview
I’d Give you a taste of your own medicine…But then il be wack.
And I’d Drop More Destruction……than America dropped Iraq
Words r wisdom & while feeding truth, Im revealing he’s failed
Cos the closest your getting to ill...Is Coolio In..Keening N Kel

Arrr. There It Tis..

Fuck spit u kept me waiting long

[R.Roots]

Spit stop being wack & Drop..fuck sake 20 lines cos of your slowness.

Stop clogging up your own thread, this is your last post in here till he drops.

-Aisle

[$pitacular]

yo I work a fuckin five day week and Friday was my b-day bitch so calm down... I been drunk since Friday.

Now, let's get back to our regularly scheduled merkin...


check it,

Lame... changed ya name in the hopes I pre-wrote... No Luck
On-Knee-Skryptz... perfect name considering your Flow Suck
fuckin Snitch / Biter... but you don't have to take my word
Gossipin Herb... startin up bitch-made threads like I Heard...
I know ya Mechanics in beef... you just lick Nuts and Bolt
this Bout might be a Heavyweight... but a Match-Up it Won't
helped you get House Broken... but turned you to a Nympho
tried to have sex wit me... cuz I threw you In-Ya-Window (inuendo)
read ya 18 lines of Filler... I could barely get Through It
sayin' How Bout 20 Lines... why would you add Two To It?
go ahead dude, Do It... so you could seal ya own Fate
you confused... Wordplay don't mean use Words that's Played
you dropped quick... Me? I Forgot and took my Time
cuz you can't See Me... so it's Outta Sight, Outta Mind
you Clog threads... I $pit Fat and clog Veins if you Bite
I got you in the Dark... but check it, I'll Sell-You-Light (cellulite)
you think you a Super Star... you listen to K-oss Too Much
but it still don't matter... ask Carl Jr., I eat Superstars for Lunch

there's ya 18....




-I had to edit spelling on a word...

[TheUnderRated]

Your good ? Nope, & listen chump..you cant harm me
Cos…
……Il leave you so imbrassed, you’ll jump to new Rb.
^meh this is an ok punch......coulda came with a better setup...
You & Illunatic..Running Your Crew..Ok.., For Starters.
But His ^ Dna's Found In Yours...BETS Your More than crew Partners
^a gay joke...............sigh...........
Quote:
Originally Posted by Shitacular
U tried to Keep Me Outta Elite... then your The First to jump on my Dick
U tell me you Gotta Crew Now... then you Point Out that it's Shit

Your Trash, You've Crashed & Still A Herb....The Fuck You Ment^^?
& If You Wanted To Make Sense...
..............................................A-B-C Ur Verse In...Word Document
^meh.....your just admitting you don't get his punches...might not be a good idea..
Im a VIP, that’s why im here…& we should be balanced
But..aisle phive left his mind at home….N placed ½ The talents
^aright this is a good punch...against aisle LOL....anyway...ok..
Your one of these..............1.shit, 2 wack or 3. , dope or Skilled...
But You Gotta Be 1 & 2.........Cos Your no way close to ill...
^WOW that was a horrible bar...hope you weren't proud of that....
Your a sinner, likewise spita sit back and.....Receive Anointment
Cos Il Put shells Up There^<-& thats where he's pointed...
^sucks even more without the whack as smiley....ehehe wtf....no...
Dedication, Determination….that’s how my Gang Works
Cos im tearing him , limb by limb , And That’s why im rank 1st
^GOOD FILLER.................why would you rep your gang in the battle...punch fool..
Your Useless, I’ll conflict damage, & listen no one needs you..
So prepair for war..Look Dude^..there’s a sneak preview
^lol you made a bar...refer us back to your whackest bar....OMg stop...
I’d Give you a taste of your own medicine…But then il be wack.
And I’d Drop More Destruction……than America dropped Iraq
^and this is played ass all hell....creative is the key to success...
Words r wisdom & while feeding truth, Im revealing he’s failed
Cos the closest your getting to ill...Is Coolio In..Keening N Kel
^this doesn't even really rhyme......anyway overall not enough to beat spit i'm guessing......let's see..





Lame... changed ya name in the hopes I pre-wrote... No Luck
On-Knee-Skryptz... perfect name considering your Flow Suck
^nice play of the name.....good observancy on the name change...
fuckin Snitch / Biter... but you don't have to take my word
Gossipin Herb... startin up bitch-made threads like I Heard...
^meh link punch....ok .....not so original but it works right....right...
I know ya Mechanics in beef... you just lick Nuts and Bolt
this Bout might be a Heavyweight... but a Match-Up it Won't
^hmmm...good wordplay on the first line..second line came a lil weak...
helped you get House Broken... but turned you to a Nympho
tried to have sex wit me... cuz I threw you In-Ya-Window (inuendo)
^ok thats really creative.....but kind of a stupid punch..ehehe...
read ya 18 lines of Filler... I could barely get Through It
sayin' How Bout 20 Lines... why would you add Two To It?
^nice nice......well technically.....meh.....fed...but ....i onno..i think its ok...
go ahead dude, Do It... so you could seal ya own Fate
you confused... Wordplay don't mean use Words that's Played
^seen it done but still a good concept to come with..
you dropped quick... Me? I Forgot and took my Time
cuz you can't See Me... so it's Outta Sight, Outta Mind
^allusions are always good.......
you Clog threads... I $pit Fat and clog Veins if you Bite
I got you in the Dark... but check it, I'll Sell-You-Light (cellulite)
^again with the creativity...better punch this time too...
you think you a Super Star... you listen to K-oss Too Much
but it still don't matter... ask Carl Jr., I eat Superstars for Lunch
^and the closer comes ok ...nothing spitacular..ahahah i'm so funny..

overall spit takes this for a way more creative verse....Inversery you need to study up on your opponent and maybe work a couple battles in elevated before you try to come here and compete....pz..

[Samuel Same Old]

This battle was raw, but I will have to go with Spit in this..he came with better wordplay and overall better/less played punches...and Inversy had a good attempt, but he fell off numerous times.He tried to use the quote trick like I used, but it threw me off.so,when it came to better punches,wordplay, and just a overall solid verse..im going with $pit

vote~$pit

[Laureate]

Gonna agree...$pit jus came with the best punches and personals of this battle...The quote from Oni was ok...but it was really long...a whole bar....usually yoiu should keep them short and sweet....Oni also came with some played lines and filler in his verse...also some lines seemed a lil stretched...$pit had some good punches such as

elped you get House Broken... but turned you to a Nympho
tried to have sex wit me... cuz I threw you In-Ya-Window (inuendo)

That was great wordplay...
Over vote=$pitacular

[R.Roots]

DeMuirgic your oboivsly a d/r..
i already had a comment from a TOp battle on the stie about the annoitment line so please dont do a dick-head Break down thanks for the votes others.

[Brethren]

Inversy/Oni -
Overall verse was pretty weak, no hard hitting punches, some creativity, no wordplay. The middle of your verse was relly weak when you started this stuff "I'll kill you, like this line^^^"...

Spitacular -
That cellulite line was dopeness, the enuendo line was really nice too, creative wordplay. The mechanic's wordplay line was decent. Not really good punches either, but much more creativity. Flow was on point, I give props on that wordplay though.

Vote - Spitacular

[Judge Judy]

Oni-came average and had a good few lines but ya lacked
that cheekiness in ya verse that made me chuckle
ya had a good few hard'ish lines but nuttin that got an
ahhhhh outta me. Ya flow was ok but choppy at times.

Spit-ya came good and took this match but not clearly
ya punches were cool as I laffed at some like the
sell-u-lite one lol. it wasnt amazing but funny
it was jus the added sense of wit from yours to Oni's
that gave you the edge.

Props to both
I'll see Spit In LLL nxt wk pz

[R.Roots]

Whats wrong with using ^^ have a look at some of the other LLL guys they use it dont matter thou, im moving towards Audio now. N spit its gay you fed of my comments & verse.

[$pitacular]

^^never fed off the verse... only comments... and you fed off an old verse against Brix so suck a dick. Your just lucky I didn't really take the time to write or I would have destroyed you even worse... as for now it's a knockout anyway so shut your pie hole.

Aisle - sorry for the freepost, just need to clear things up since Oni thinks he needs to sway after every vote....

pz

[Diverse]

Your good ? Nope, & listen chump..you cant harm me
Cos…
……Il leave you so imbrassed, you’ll jump to new Rb.
nice idea but wording made it weak.....
You & Illunatic..Running Your Crew..Ok.., For Starters.
But His ^ Dna's Found In Yours...BETS Your More than crew Partners
again okay concept, don't use sexual shit it doesn't hit hard enough

Quote:
Originally Posted by Shitacular
U tried to Keep Me Outta Elite... then your The First to jump on my Dick
U tell me you Gotta Crew Now... then you Point Out that it's Shit

Your Trash, You've Crashed & Still A Herb....The Fuck You Ment^^?
& If You Wanted To Make Sense...
..............................................A-B-C Ur Verse In...Word Document
not bad....lines played nicely off each other
Im a VIP, that’s why im here…& we should be balanced
But..aisle phive left his mind at home….N placed ½ The talents
didn't like the first line, second was nice
Your one of these..............1.shit, 2 wack or 3. , dope or Skilled...
But You Gotta Be 1 & 2.........Cos Your no way close to ill...
meh, wasn't feeling this multiple choice thing
Your a sinner, likewise spita sit back and.....Receive Anointment
Cos Il Put shells Up There^<-& thats where he's pointed...
okay but people use lines like this too much
Dedication, Determination….that’s how my Gang Works
Cos im tearing him , limb by limb , And That’s why im rank 1st
not bad here.....
Your Useless, I’ll conflict damage, & listen no one needs you..
So prepair for war..Look Dude^..there’s a sneak preview
good lines here, nice wordplay
I’d Give you a taste of your own medicine…But then il be wack.
And I’d Drop More Destruction……than America dropped Iraq
played punches here, nice setup tho
Words r wisdom & while feeding truth, Im revealing he’s failed
Cos the closest your getting to ill...Is Coolio In..Keening N Kel
meh, nope, closer was weak.......


check it,

Lame... changed ya name in the hopes I pre-wrote... No Luck
On-Knee-Skryptz... perfect name considering your Flow Suck
nice opener, creative with nice wordplay
fuckin Snitch / Biter... but you don't have to take my word
Gossipin Herb... startin up bitch-made threads like I Heard...
another nice line, setup well
I know ya Mechanics in beef... you just lick Nuts and Bolt
this Bout might be a Heavyweight... but a Match-Up it Won't
not really feelin this, 2nd line wasn't bad tho
helped you get House Broken... but turned you to a Nympho
tried to have sex wit me... cuz I threw you In-Ya-Window (inuendo)
sex related but this one worked for some reason, nice...
read ya 18 lines of Filler... I could barely get Through It
sayin' How Bout 20 Lines... why would you add Two To It?
good personal, nice wording
go ahead dude, Do It... so you could seal ya own Fate
you confused... Wordplay don't mean use Words that's Played
okay, wording made it kinda weak
you dropped quick... Me? I Forgot and took my Time
cuz you can't See Me... so it's Outta Sight, Outta Mind
line had me laughin, not too bad
you Clog threads... I $pit Fat and clog Veins if you Bite
I got you in the Dark... but check it, I'll Sell-You-Light (cellulite)
nice punch here, creative
you think you a Super Star... you listen to K-oss Too Much
but it still don't matter... ask Carl Jr., I eat Superstars for Lunch
don't have Carls Jr. in Texas but I like that place and this closer

there's ya 18....



overall:Spit took this battle, both verses were nice with wordplay and flow but Spit just presented his verse with more creative punches and better, more in depth personals.....nice battle by both of you though