thing vs lyric

[÷Thìñg÷]

10 l
blind
no h d/r
no bull
45min due limit
if u fail 2 drop you lose i win
no feed
no bite
no recycling
no herbish
check in
and dont no show

[Laureate]

checkin in

[So SiK]

lol damn wow rules but ive seen lyrics battle so i think this will be good sry to freepost but when ya both spit ill vote poll wise cuz by then i will have enough posts but only if you vote on my battles in my sig...thanx pz

[Laureate]

You throw feminine punches cause jus look...thery're all misses
Your like the special olympics cause you throw retarded disses (discus)
I extract abstract verbiage and inject it into your clogged veins..
Lyrically breath for the first time let the oxygen numb your brain
÷Thìñg÷ can't compare...Subtract bitten rhymes and its "Are you tryin?"
In Addition, every line that he spits leaves whackness Multiplying
Whyd you make an alias...You we're doing fine as .::It::. dike
But the ÷Thìñg÷ is .::It::. dun matter cause ya merked twice
Damn yo posted a shitload of rules..But only one stands out

no herbish

You broke it..Can I get my win now?

[÷Thìñg÷]

"makaveli" must be ya only way 2 ressurect "circus freak shows!"
this kid worships a legend but 2pac dont suport"1 lyric"wont own
tries 2 advertise ownership wit his title but spelled "dont" wrong!
.. ..i will fuck wit u & also rip ya fuckin "make up" head off!
i hate ya characteristics and all ya "IJL"ya not the clown "It"
if u mastered in text physics u still wouldent inpress "carson jet"
if ya captured a punch u would easily fondal it wrong & get K O`ed
u was a target for the unknown & just got a L probe stuck n ya ho
fuck you "joker"off of batman cuz im the bat & ya the ball
wit this verse a homerun ya "laughter"just got soned.. ..haha

[Laureate]

Uppin..drop a good vote and a link and it will be hit

[Laureate]

up2

[Aines]

lyric took this 1 quite easily in my opinion thing ur shit was played and had fillers and ATTEMPTS which didnt cum off well.....u had alrite punches but not as hard as lyric....both structures were good so no prob in that department....

lyrics finisher got it 4 me as it made me laugh and was strong......

overall lyric gets it 4 cumin harder on the punches and personals nice verse tho thing

[Aines]

i 4got 2 drop ma link sorry 4 tha freepost but cud u both hit it up plz wit honest votes thnx both ya

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115684


pz

[Laureate]

up3

[So SiK]

i agree with Anies lyric had much better flow punches structure and he did have that closer which was funny things verse was very played and tried to hard to come down on lyric which made a fool out of him

Vote-Lyric

[rule]

Lyric
You throw feminine punches cause jus look...thery're all misses
Your like the special olympics cause you throw retarded disses (discus)
^^Good opener but played...nice flip though

I extract abstract verbiage and inject it into your clogged veins..
Lyrically breath for the first time let the oxygen numb your brain
^^Okie line not much of a punch...but nice filler

÷Thìñg÷ can't compare...Subtract bitten rhymes and its "Are you tryin?"
In Addition, every line that he spits leaves whackness Multiplying
^^LOL good line i enjoyed that

Whyd you make an alias...You we're doing fine as .::It::. dike
But the ÷Thìñg÷ is .::It::. dun matter cause ya merked twice
^^Good line

Damn yo posted a shitload of rules..But only one stands out
Quote:
Originally Posted by ÷Thìñg÷
no herbish

You broke it..Can I get my win now?
^^blah

Thing


"makaveli" must be ya only way 2 ressurect "circus freak shows!"
this kid worships a legend but 2pac dont suport"1 lyric"wont own
^^Blah

tries 2 advertise ownership wit his title but spelled "dont" wrong!
.. ..i will fuck wit u & also rip ya fuckin "make up" head off!
^^Didn't rhyme an was a gay punch

i hate ya characteristics and all ya "IJL"ya not the clown "It"
if u mastered in text physics u still wouldent inpress "carson jet"
^^Not bad...pretty witty

if ya captured a punch u would easily fondal it wrong & get K O`ed
u was a target for the unknown & just got a L probe stuck n ya ho
^^Started off good but didn't finish

fuck you "joker"off of batman cuz im the bat & ya the ball
wit this verse a homerun ya "laughter"just got soned.. ..haha
^^Blah

Over all Lyric won with moer consitant punches an actual punches...most of thing lines were just filler and didn't really create a hit...if this is an alias for'it' i would've expewcted much better

Vote Lyric

[Laureate]

up4 Yoz your vote please

[Mimesis.]

lyric - structure was good.......flow was on target.......vocab was good.........nice multis........i was likin alot of ur wordplay........most of ya punches connected.........personals were nice.......

thing - structure was good......flow fell off a lil......vocab was ok........some of the multis were aight........i didnt really like most of ya wordplay........more of ya punches would have been better, but some of them didnt rhyme........ok personals......

breakdown -
structure - tie
flow - lyric
vocab - lyric
multis - tie
wordplay - lyric
punches - lyric
personals - lyric

conclusion - this was a pretty one sided battle......lyric takes this in flow, vocab, wordplay, punches, and personals, so he gets my vote........

VOTE - LYRIC

[Mimesis.]

^^^uhh i cant poll cause it says u have to have 1,000 posts to poll......

so i apologize for that.......

thats just my feedback.......