Since the world began
I laughed in the face of fear
I am immortal
First line has 6 syllables, it should be 5. Nice try...
~Bounce~
Next topic: Bein played by a female
Since the world began
I laughed in the face of fear
I am immortal
First line has 6 syllables, it should be 5. Nice try...
~Bounce~
Next topic: Bein played by a female
Last edited by Bounce; February 21st, 2004 at 07:11 PM
Forsaken By Time
Unbearable Existence
No Eternal Sleep
I accidently did the same topic ( Immortal )...sorry....
Next Topic > Fear
Last edited by Mantra; February 20th, 2004 at 10:31 PM
...
okay ....i think im gettin' the hang of this......
Fear By Night and Day
Soulful sounds of an Artist
Fears are Gone, I Prayed.
Next Topic: Common Wealth
Uhhh...Honestly I have no idea of what you mean by your topic. Leme just give u an random Haiku From my archives...
Broken brains spill red,
Laying silent in the gutter,
Awake tommorow.
Next Topic: Computer.
Stuck here on RB
Forget all of this net beef
I'm just a textee
This is kinda difficult..But I jus wanted to say I love the idea of it...
Your second line only has 6 syllables, it should be 7... Nice try...
~Bounce~
Next: Life
EDIT: Doesn't forget have 2 syllables?
Last edited by Laureate; February 22nd, 2004 at 12:11 AM
A few achievements here and there
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upon this world is
tha essence of another
that has now been brought
(went sorta for a loop, lol)
topic:
Lost
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- I'd Be Brilliant, If Only, It Was Not For Love's Immortal Stand Offs -
...Understandable...
*Tip: Haiku aren't supposed to rhyme....And its more legible if you do your best for proper spelling and punctuation*
Wandering About,
The Feet of Thousands Stamps the Ground,
Yet I lose My Way.
Well Jixi, another decent attempt. Your second line is off. It has more than the 7 syllables to satisfy a Haiku. Oh well this will help you elevate, keep practicing.
~Bounce~
ahhh your right...:S Sry i was in a rush....
Next Topic: Car Crash & Your in the Drivers Seat.
Last edited by JiXi; February 22nd, 2004 at 02:41 PM
The sudden stop jerks
Life flashes wonderously
Red light and Red blood
sorry i forgot the topic... = media
^Next time edit your original post instead of generating a new post..
~Bounce~
Last edited by Bounce; February 21st, 2004 at 07:21 PM
Hence Forward
Takes multiple forms,
Epitomised by the net,
Can be used for lies.
Next topic: Lying
I'm surprised they didn't delete me ages ago...
...........Eat Shit and Die!
..................../
............:vanja:
@media
commercialism
telling people what to think
money and business
oops, dragon beat me to it
@lying
not always lieing
hard to explain in detail
still streching the truth
next topic: friends for life
Last edited by Unwritten Hazard; February 21st, 2004 at 05:51 PM
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"I rap like no one out there can fuck with me"
i gave you honest feed, so be honest with me
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Whenever I'm down
Pick me up...makes me feel good
Back me up til death
Next: stress
A few achievements here and there
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monkey on my back
stuck in the back of my mind
pressure and worry
next top: james bond
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"I rap like no one out there can fuck with me"
i gave you honest feed, so be honest with me
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I'll fuck up his tux
The black slowly turns to red
Silenced bullet to the head
The last line is 7 syllables, should be 5.
~Bounce~
Next- your community
Last edited by Bounce; February 22nd, 2004 at 06:44 PM
A few achievements here and there
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Young Teens Drinking at,
Bars watched by Security Guards,
Matters Never Age.
Next: President/prime minister
Leaders of the West...
Wage war for humanity...
Freedoms rightous quest...
Next topic: Self expression
Last edited by Bounce; February 22nd, 2004 at 06:59 PM
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