~Haiku Cypher~
5 syllables first line. 7 syllables second line. 5 syllables third line.
Example Topic: Socialism
Socialist Visions
Impacted Moral Fiber
Assault from the Left
When finsihed leave a topic behind for the next member. This is an elevated thread and we only want serious people with serious contributions posting in here. You will be baned from this forum for breaking any of the rules! Good luck to all and keep up the elevation...
Here's the topic: Innocense
Last edited by Bounce; February 19th, 2004 at 07:48 PM
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Im not sure...If you mean the White Flower, The Smelling type aroma thing, or Being Inocent. So ill do the Flower (technical meaning)
Opened White Angels,
Staring Into The Heavens,
Innocent Beings.
Next: Stumbling Through Dark Underground Caves.
Very nice Jixi, thanks for taking this serious unlike the idiot below you. What ever direction the topic takes you fine as long as you apply yourself. It's not easy to say so much in such a small strucutre. It reflects your skill and concentration.
~Bounce~
Last edited by Bounce; February 20th, 2004 at 12:04 AM
Fuck that I am the cypher governor and I can rip anything even this bullshit ass haiku shit, check this bouncedoggydog
five seven five line
dark underground caves sublime
Fuck a haiku rhyme
next topic....death
You're governor of shit! I warned you kids about pathetic posting in the elevated threads. You are the first to make the list, good going there! Please take this cypher serious or get the hell out the forum!
~Bounce~
Last edited by Bounce; February 20th, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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Take me away now
To heaven or hell I go
Where? i will soon know
That right bounce?
Good job and technically sound. Thanks for dropping a serious piece. This will prove to be a great thread!
~Bounce~
Next topic....School
Last edited by Bounce; February 20th, 2004 at 12:56 AM
A few achievements here and there
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......School Sucks A Cock Believe
...Soon As They Teach You To Read
..........I Suggest You Leave
meh..I hope I did it right..*dosen't want to be banned*
Nice attempt, atleast you gave it a try. Your first line is off by one syllable, should be 5 not 6... Other than that It would have been fine. You can edit it later. No... You will not get banned for actually try'n!
~Bounce~
umm..next topic is: Machines
Last edited by Bounce; February 20th, 2004 at 06:42 PM
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You get the tip while I piss on the barcheck. Give the bitch some head that I pult out of a carwreck. Am I angelic or just slightly off track? My bones shift when my ripped off wings flap. -Cage
Mechanical Drones
Substitution for True Life?
Humanity Lost...
Next subject > Greed
...
Money I live for
never have to much of it
long to jus touch it
Next:sleep
A few achievements here and there
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Closing Eyes Flutter,
Intoxicating Fumes,
Sandmans Nightly Rounds.
I think Mainly the poetic people do a good job. Nice Somber....i know whats going on because i do Haiku in my spare time. LETS ELEVATE MORE! Hehe
Another decent attempt Jixi, your second line is comprissed of only 6 syllables, should be seven. Fumes is a one syllable word.
~Bounce~
Next Topic: Graffiti (the feeling of bombing a train)
Last edited by Bounce; February 20th, 2004 at 06:43 PM
Bombin' trains feels sweet
Cops around, time to beat feet
Grabbin' cans, need green
Next: Breakdancing
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tha feet break tha sounds...
upon the very slick beats...
and tha crowd cheers loud...
Next: Abortion...
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- I'd Be Brilliant, If Only, It Was Not For Love's Immortal Stand Offs -
...Understandable...
End life at my will
no a baby is no more
gettin rapeds not cool
Next-government
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aight let me give this a try........
Assemblies Enthralled,
Controversy Between Laws
That's Government Yall.
NEXT: MUSIC
Guy's are doing good...Here is a tip tho, Try and Use Complex words that realy make you "Feel" whats going on.
The Audible dawn,
Beats Piercing Your Inner Core,
Entranced with Rhythm.
Next Topic: Snowman
Last edited by JiXi; February 20th, 2004 at 05:52 PM
Mindless man of ice,
Replacment for true beings?
No, snow has no soul.
Damn, that's suprisingly hard to get anything meaningful or interesting.
^Yes it is, great exercise in elevation, keeps you focused. great job so far guy's, keep it up.
~Bounce~
Next topic: Your soul
Last edited by Bounce; February 20th, 2004 at 06:27 PM
I'm surprised they didn't delete me ages ago...
...........Eat Shit and Die!
..................../
............:vanja:
Your soul is confused
Like ur buddy Michael Jackson
Make up your mind son
lol, never written a haiku b4, was it any good?
Decent attempt at Hiaku, your second line has 8 syllables as opposed to the correct amount of 7. Nice try, it's not as easy as it seems,,
~Bounce~
next topic: Immortal
Last edited by Bounce; February 21st, 2004 at 07:09 PM
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