In Respect

[FanTa ZeE]

i like this...

i like this alot..

Open mics that have emotion burning through the lines are, in my opinion, the pick of the bunch. Anyone can get on a mic and diss someone, but some people find it really difficult to show there true feelings through words. Its a passion, writing, and a rhyme without emotion is like victoria beckhams stomach; flat. This was really good..

[LM]

its a passion, writing, and a rhyme without emotion is like victoria beckhams stomach; flat.

LOL.....thanks for the comment

[FreeThinker]

Lm this touched me man. You went so dead and it looks like you imprented your emotions into text. Your vocab wasnt to complex whihc i feel brough the meaning and the point of the piece out a lot more ... hmm what else can i say Sturcture was good flow was consistant , never droped.. props man .. keep doing your thing!

[LM]

Thanks...

Uppin

[KanseRous]

After reading this... i was truly in aww. This flow and structure and scheme was very good. like the uptop guy said. its easy to diss someone or rap about urself and whatnot, but write something thats emotional and with true meaning.. thats what the real skill is all about, bringing ur emotions into the text for when it comes down to spit it... ur ready and ur flow is ready. i liked this epice alot...

ps favour for a favour, drop some feedback on my song called "The struggle"
it would be greatly appreciated.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116695

Sylem