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    In Respect

    For Harry....much more than an uncle

    I hav'nt cried since I found out you had died
    That was the last time tears fell from my eyes
    Took me by suprise, never thought you'd leave
    I miss you, like a lung you helped me breath
    And I believe you watch over me from heaven
    You were there for me since my birth in 1987
    My veins are severed but I'm still here, alive
    I dont see you no more but memories survive
    Your health nose-dived so now you dont suffer
    You were my heart beat, there wont be no other
    Now all I got is my brothers, they are the world
    I love 'em so much.....much more than any girl
    In life's twists+turns, I'm under cloudy skies
    But it's OK, coz we'll meet again on the day I die
    So in my rhymes I expose my heart and my soul
    I know your proud as I chase my personal goals
    The blackholes in society are tryn'a to suck me in
    But you protect me, from deep under my skin
    All my sins come out from underneath my flesh
    It must be all my fears which are bein addressed
    Coz since your death, my life aint been the same
    Now I got nothin to lose...but everythin to gain


    Rest in Peace......I miss you
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    Dope.....very enotional..was this from recent tragedy??? Is..I'm truly sorry..

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    Think this is very touching, makes me think about all the relatives i've lost...am moved...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Penskills
    Dope.....very enotional..was this from recent tragedy??? Is..I'm truly sorry..
    No....he died in 2002. But I've got family problems so it's bringin it all back to me. Thanks tho
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    there is no way you are 16 with such great lines.I like your bridges, I like your the way you end your lines and I like your imagery...you ain't 16, stop lying boy. You like 25 and you act like you ain't got skills but you do. I hate reading but I'll read anything from you
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    Lm a really nice emotional piece. I recently lost my gamps and my uncle and i'm gettin where your comming from! great flow and structure. peace man!! (R.I.P)
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    Quote Originally Posted by carlosbarrett
    there is no way you are 16 with such great lines.I like your bridges, I like your the way you end your lines and I like your imagery...you ain't 16, stop lying boy. You like 25 and you act like you ain't got skills but you do. I hate reading but I'll read anything from you
    I'm definatly 16.....thanks anyway.

    Thanks for all the feedback so far
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    this was pretty dope,

    i liked the flow and ity had tons of emotion

    props
    this was extremly deep which makes you think


    i was feeling this,

    is this the same LM from lw that i battled before??

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    ^^No I dont think so...

    Thanks for the comment
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    like they all said..sorry for ur loss son
    nice peice, it was indeed from the heart and heart dwellin'..very emmotional, cuz i know haow it feels to loose fam bro..
    nice verse and keep ur head up kid

    peace

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    Thanks.....uppin
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