Com vs Avenge

[Avenge]

Friendly battle
10 lines ill drop first
3-0 ko

[Avenge]

Coms shooting BB’s…..Av deplores bombs…
I’ll be the Dot in RB because im always before COM
Adore psalms, Grab his limbs and watch the twig snap
Cuz this battles like this line
.................................................. ...A big gap
Kick back…cuz like feeble n’ OI im quick to dismiss you
Say you “made me”….but get sonned quick when I diss you
I pull pistols have ya hands so high you’ll be wreckin the roof
Yeah, ill admit your DECENT…if I feel like stretchin the truth
Com don’t think just cuz you’re a ‘Vet’ you’ll win
Blah…I cant joke about wits end
…..cuz when the good people left….they let you in

[Erupt]

I just saw this via a tryout link.. i'm gonna drop tonight sometime after work

[Erupt]

blah,,,, just did this at breaktime at work ... no polls so i dont really care

This fag's allready owned... told me on AIM that I'm the man
Your verse smells of shit... and this guys the biggest fan!
So who's the bigger man?... this wigger lies likes he's cursed
Even lying in his check in... theres no "ill drop first"!
Take a pill before you're worse... what you say is stupid
Only way you'd be my match... is if you payed cupid!
I swear this gay's crooked... he's decieving...its so sad
you've got more recycled lines... then charity notepads!
This guy's verse was a tryout before mine was designed
But now its next to my mine... one word..... DECLINED

[Born To Kill]

Yeah...

Avenge got beat.

Wittier and more personal from Com.

I'd say Avenge lost it when he went gangsta and had him "wreckin da roof".

Why in fuck would you stoop to that?

So, basically, no drop offs from Com...
(though that 'notepad' line did drive by the whack neighborhood, it didn't enter...)

And Avenge had a couple.
(didn't like the 'gap' line...all filler...no punch)
(didn't vibe with his 'son' line either, played)

Winner: Com

Peace

Hit up mine and Feebs or mine and B.I.'s in Elite...
Thanks

[Erupt]

1-0 thx for tha vote....................and in my verse against BI Detained i was referring to Young P....

[Erupt]

upping............................................ .......

[Avenge]

Uppin.....

[Derive]

Com took this, pretty easily also.

Com: Some nice punches, nice structure, and good flow.

Avenge: Some played punches, structure was ok, and flow was ok. You couldve done much better but you had too many played concepts and some filler.

V/ Com


Hit up my battle against K.Largo up with an honest vote, its set up in elite...

[Otherwordz]

I've seen both of y'all come a WHOLE lot iller than this...Com...ya punches were good...but ya multiez and flow weren't as on point as usual...and Avenge...on the other hand...ya multiz and flow were good...but ya verse didn't really have any hard hitting punchez...and since punchez are what winz battlez...I'ma give this one to Com...

[Freeman]

nice from both...

COM was more consistent... His punches hit harder at stayed hard hitting through-out...

Flow... Structure... Vocabulary were about the same...

So...

v/ COM

For a more consistent verse...

Pz...

[MICHIE]

AHHHH..... not bad

yo avenge u gotz some pretty phat lyrics

but some of dat shit i didnt know wat u were saying

if u kept ur shit melow but yet still had meaning

yea i would of voted 4 u.

but i say com...

[Derive]

This is months old.....stupid noob.

[It]

close this...
vote/com...
he had better punchlines...
no need to go further than that...
theres no poll..so it dont need an explanation...
peace out...