first real piece take a look

[phoenix808]

blah blah balh, "AGE doesn't matter" blah blah balh "you suck" blah blah blah "what he said" Not to be offensive but they (everyone else who has posted) have a point. take some time and try to write a poem, not a rap, next time

*THIS RAP WAS WRITTEN BY FEDERAL FERRET AND INTENDED TO BE RAPPED BY THE BLOODY RED CRIP

^^^^then what are you doing posting it?
all things aside, peace

[mcBUtiful]

that was ill. you have a lot of talent. keep writing.

[mcBUtiful]

that was ill. you have a lot of talent. keep writing.

[mcBUtiful]

that was ill. you have a lot of talent. keep writing.

[mcBUtiful]

that was ill. you have a lot of talent. keep writing.

[mcBUtiful]

that was ill. you have a lot of talent. keep writing.

[mcBUtiful]

that was ill. you have a lot of talent. keep writing.

[mcBUtiful]

that was ill. you have a lot of talent. keep writing.

[Nic Caesar]

WTF

[Nic Caesar]

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