...II...(of the Epic)
Last edited by Penskills; April 3rd, 2004 at 12:54 PM
I think this is my best OM yet...^^...It's alot better than the one that made the Hall of Fame...
God dam...You just keep comin with these...wow man fuck. I loved it...The entire concept and everything...was great from the start to the finish...lol, is it me or is anybody else's mind blank after reading that...? crazy shit penskills...I love it.
dope verse now kick it I wanna hear some one rock this in audio
very nice.....it was a great read. Loved the vocab you put in this... and it flowed great. Nice wordplay and storytelling. Cant imagine how you write like this... all the fricking time...lol. Well once agian dope peice
Scytsophrenia
i hate penskills!....damn you and your dope creative ness.....dope...multies vocab content etc..all dope
Always Impervious an Axis Power.
Supermod Me.
i think this was another good drop from you, but i think your starting to overuse vocab in places, not much but thats just my opinion.... the vocab was good, and so was the wordplay...other than what i said..... nice, well written.....
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Very nice piece - it's all been said above.
very nice drop..u have some skill for paintin' pictures and tellin' stories nicely..
i'mma start lookin' out for ur posts..very hot
peace
iight...
Unlike half of the people in this thread... Ive read it... So a can give some decent feedback...
This is making a good 3 part 'epic'... Lol... Looking forward to part three...
Back to this one...
Vocabulary in this was like... Whoa... Maybe too much... Like Devvy Boy said... But its not a major problem... That is the only thing that a can see wrong with it...
It was a good idea to seperate the verses like you did... Because a solid block of writing wouldnt of suited this piece...
You had nice wordplay...
Concept is really forming...
You say this is your favourite piece... Nah... Might be yours... But mine will always be Journey... Illness...
Keep it at this standard and you will be remembered forever... Lol...
Pz man...
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Daaaaaamn once again Pen does it again......The sad thing is you dont get the recognition you deserve........The people have no word in this place an if your not down wit the mods crew you aint gonna get in legends (which is bullshit).......But once again your skill truly shows in this piece.........excellent 2nd part! Cant wait for the 3rd man.........drop it soon..........Peace..........
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^ Thanks for the support...^^
Jesus Christ man..............every single OM you do is dope especially this one. And no T West my mind went blank too.
Originally Posted by T West
cool sig~~~
this is the first open mic i've read from you. And it was dope. I was very surpised to see what I saw, Your vocab, though others thought was overdone, I thought it fit very well into this piece, wordplay was excellent when used. And the topic, though heavily played, shined throughout the piece. Very good drop, Hope to see more from you...
And if you could, hit my OM in my siggy, its short and sweet, easy to read
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