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  1. #1
    evilbombsquad
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    ImCorruptinPoetry wit the Soultress

    keep a dirty face 2 cover a filthy mind
    elevate my skillz to where birds fly
    will gouge out anybodies Third eye
    belive nuttin ya hear, cause words lie //

    my vain burdon drinkin plain burbon
    that i play mentals like brain surgon
    Joe's king of the hill bringin the kill
    addictted 2 dope not clingin 2 skill
    that and i be takin a smarter route
    usually i be blazin a quarter ounce
    no hero fight defy these sterotypes
    wit zero might they whores for christ
    really i do depsise skanks n whores
    live filthy, so Soul what u bathen for?
    structure for rules in vain I ignore
    the Norm it aint allowed me, no more
    so now I...

    keep a dirty face 2 cover a filthy mind
    elevate my skillz to where birds fly
    will gouge out anybodies Third eye
    belive nuttin ya hear, cause words lie //

    Justice will never be done, some say
    everyday ends the same in one way
    life's too complicated for any gun play
    complex like should I now run or stay
    King Koopa ran away like everyday
    Watch the cartoon* you 'tarded loon
    i speak like anyother crummy goon
    one of many from the dummy room
    but i alone...

    keep a dirty face 2 cover a filthy mind
    elevate my skillz to where birds fly
    will gouge out anybodies Third eye
    belive nuttin ya hear, cause words lie //

    this free flow is how my cold palms talk
    devestatin everything likE bomBS dropped
    against me? Who has sumptin 2 prove
    like Winner take all i gott nuttin 2 lose
    2% like im nothing what this crazy Is
    fadin duh im more like what crazy does
    walkin around town with a crazy buzz
    like said my 2 cents is what crazy does
    spit Mentality when i spit my rottin rage
    ebs be decapitatin kats like Johnny Cage
    cant be denied !!!

    keep a dirty face 2 cover a filthy mind
    elevate my skillz to where birds fly
    will gouge out anybodies Third eye
    belive nuttin ya hear, cause words lie //
    _________________
    Soul hooked the re-curring chours
    I posted the verses, appreciatte the read none the less
    *the Super Mario bros cartoon ya tarded loon
    Last edited by evilbombsquad; February 1st, 2004 at 07:50 AM

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    What about Soultress? None of this looked like her writing..

    Anyway, this was OK..didn't really seem like poetry, more of an open mic, some parts just didn't fit at all and on a whole it seemed like you wrote more for the multi's than you did the content..Wasn't really feeling it...Stay up
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  3. #3
    evilbombsquad
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    i reflipped Souls part to make it flow better
    appreciatte the fee still, stay up

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