10-20 lines
3-0 knockout or otherwise first to 5
explain ur votes
virtuoso
killaconcepz
10-20 lines
3-0 knockout or otherwise first to 5
explain ur votes
*sry for the delay i was busy wit other shit
…….:::TAKE it easy….the disaster has come….::…
..your ‘conceptz’ are ‘non~sense‘…like a script writer, but they fell short…
..u bad with words.. An couldn’t play ’lines’ on a basketball court…
..I don’t think you’ve elevated cuz the ‘euphoria’ was yet experienced*…
.. I recentally dropped this verse… an well.. No-ones ‘seen’ you since..
..u ain’t “CONNecting”* flows… an no lines are ‘relaying’
..I had to hand you every bar…. Just so u ‘feel wat im sayin’…
.. Like I snatched your sockets… now u got your ‘eyes on me’..
…? You iller than me?…guess you’re a broken “watch“.. Cuz man ‘time can’t see’
….throwing personal punches… I ‘dodge’ an u won’t be ‘hitting me’..
….Now im just gonna leave u alone… like u were a “black street” CD…
*the euphoria shit in his sig
** he is from Connecticut
~ sonned
drop a verse no duckin.......... agiht its been like an hour........................................
HAHAHAHA......sigh.......very wak
AYO
ur repeated tries to land punches failed
i rip emcees for a livin' and don't leave happy trails
if u ain't already white dude i'll leave u pail
u a moterola rappa cuz u'll be the {next} to {tel}
lyrically,mentally,and physically u disturb me
u suck and don't deserve to be called an MC
u r awful and ya rymes should be disposed
landin' so many punches ya teeth is about to be exsposed
no more spitten this battle is done
even if i offered u anotha eye u wouldn't have enough{sense} to run
spray two rounds and play u clown
u like a bike without a kickstand i'll lay u down
the battle is ova the defeat was tragic
in a lyrical race u could would get burnt worst than magic
..ahahha callin me wack.... your practically a newb......fuck it stop talken let the votes come in
vote: virtuoso. he had way better punches but killas best line was u r awful and ya rymes should be disposed
landin' so many punches ya teeth is about to be exsposed
Virtuoso:
..your ‘conceptz’ are ‘non~sense‘…like a script writer, but they fell short…
..u bad with words.. An couldn’t play ’lines’ on a basketball court…
Not much of an opener, bball pun played
..I don’t think you’ve elevated cuz the ‘euphoria’ was yet experienced*…
.. I recentally dropped this verse… an well.. No-ones ‘seen’ you since..
personal, aight
..u ain’t “CONNecting”* flows… an no lines are ‘relaying’
..I had to hand you every bar…. Just so u ‘feel wat im sayin’…
no punch there
.. Like I snatched your sockets… now u got your ‘eyes on me’..
…? You iller than me?…guess you’re a broken “watch“.. Cuz man ‘time can’t see’
weak, weak
….throwing personal punches… I ‘dodge’ an u won’t be ‘hitting me’..
….Now im just gonna leave u alone… like u were a “black street” CD…
Nice close
KillaConcepz
AYO
ur repeated tries to land punches failed
i rip emcees for a livin' and don't leave happy trails
ok, self boast
if u ain't already white dude i'll leave u pail
u a moterola rappa cuz u'll be the {next} to {tel}
rhyme?
lyrically,mentally,and physically u disturb me
u suck and don't deserve to be called an MC
weak punch
u r awful and ya rymes should be disposed
landin' so many punches ya teeth is about to be exsposed
nah
no more spitten this battle is done
even if i offered u anotha eye u wouldn't have enough{sense} to run
That was aight
spray two rounds and play u clown
u like a bike without a kickstand i'll lay u down
I have so heard that before, probly on this site, but I cant prove it, so aight punch
the battle is ova the defeat was tragic
in a lyrical race u could would get burnt worst than magic
Messed up there ^^^^^^^^ a bit, eh? didnt make sense much neway
Ima give this to Virtuoso. Neither of you guys came very hard, sure you can do betta. Virtuoso was the only one with a personal i think. You need those to win a battle, aight?
No hate concepz, aight? Judged it how i see.
Hit up my battles...:
uppin' niggas
wut the fuck....you guys are both online and you cant drop a vote on my battle? comon dogs
close:
Flow;v
structure;v
punches;v
personals;v
close in all categories, but V edges it in all
check this battle...1 vote needed
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...79#post1180879
Boom tick its Brix!
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Im uppin this battle. I voted on this, can ya please return tha favor? Hit up tha link below, aight
Kayohh ill get to your battle in a min but stop freeposting damn.....
uppin this....
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Aight, but you should be thankin me, cuz its uppin ur battle...
virtuoso:your opener wasn't really any good, you tried to throw a punchline in the mix, but it just fell flat. your punches were simple and played ,but I did like the "no=ones seen you since" punch, nice hard hitter there. your structure was sort of fucked, but it still flowed good enough to make it an easy read..really wasnt any meta's, wordplay, or multiples....so lets get your closer.....it was pretty damaging, but not really enough you should be coming that hard in every line you type....keep at it..you'll elevate....
killaconceptz:your opener was played, and simple, but it did hit harder than virtuoso's..so good job on that..just try counting your sylables, so your lines stay equal. your punches were problematic for me as a reader, some of them didn't accually rhyme, especially the phone punch. that wasn't very good. you need to try being more creative...you had no mutiple,wordplay,or metaphors either...so it's closer time.....your closer was saddening, you need to up your vocabulary, cause that was just amature.........
vote virtuoso
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time to vote on mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114089
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112366
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113218
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Wordplay^^^get rid of my Avvy...BIOTCH...LoL..
aight..
Killaconcepts and Virtuoso..you both use the Words "You and I" too much to begin a Line...it gets Boring to Read and HELLA played..
your Punches were equal to me, but in a way Virtuoso had More Complexity and Better Vocab...he Did have a lil better Punches in my opinion...
Virtuoso's Wordplay was Better...and flowed better so..
my Vote is for :...Virtuoso...
Please RETURN the FAVOR and droppa VOTE. My battles are getting mad SLEPT on.
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