Timesless vs. Waz

[Waz]

20 min blind spit

10-15 lines reg rules
no d/r
no hate votes
no recycleing

[Waz]

check in and go ima start mine now
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[Waz]

Check it.

I'ma chew you up and spit you out fuck you so hard that I can't get my dick out
this should be a quick bout ..... you're no competion
your rhymes aren't worth the porcelen I take a piss in
their whack, their weak, their garbage
this battle should be sensored from this forum.... theres too much carnage
how'd u make it this far bitch? ... you're no Mc your lyrics are too empty
please don't tempt me, I make dyke's scream in fight scenes like i'm tryin' to win an emmy
you'll never put an end to me .... my rhymes are too viscious
you're like a pitbull bitch with a big bark but as soon as somebody starts all you wanna do is "give kisses"
you're dickless ...... you're a pussy with no back bone
pissed off cuz u hafta hear that hobo make your fat mom moan
bitch go back home .... find your little sister
shes more your type to battle rap on
and when your done make sure u thank her and kiss her.

-peace

[Reeco]

lol at the no personals in that, mine will be a lil longer coz one of my wrists are broke!!! give me 15 minz!!

[Reeco]

ok lets use some wordplay....

woz thinks bout ma pencil skillz, which leaves him with lead in his head
Just like sex with spider man, u always gettin fucked on the web
No need to cry woz, ive showed im to COOL with my wordplay
U been embarassed by my CLASS, like startin skool on your first day
Woz says hes done pipes & mushrooms, but only when he hooked on mario
Im huntin u DAWG, coz u a BITCH, just look at my tally, hoe!!! (Tally Ho)
I sed ya had no personals, but hell i aint gonna bitch and moan.
coz no-one be seeing you lines anyway, just like a cordless phone!!
i bring in flows, like cash, as if i was the battling boss
i know i'm the greatest coz "i'm the best there is, and ever, WOZ"

if ya dont get the wordplay please dont vote!!

[נєм]

aight here we go.............
WOZ...it was an ok drop but you had a few if any personals your punches were weak, you went on about dicks to much,flow was ok.

Timeless...your drop was nice you had personals im some hard hittin punches,nice closer good way o use his name..
\/0te......Timeless


Best Line.. coz no-one be seeing you lines anyway, just like a cordless phone...
^^^^^^clever line...

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[Doc.t theSandGod]

lets review

metaphores:times
Punchlines:both
Strctures:times
flavor:times
overall:timesless
bestline:

i bring in flows, like cash, as if i was the battling boss
i know i'm the greatest coz "i'm the best there is, and ever, WOZ"

V/timesless

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[Waz]

nice shit timeless
i pmed u and said i was gettin ready to leave work and was doin this real quick

not my best shit and i should've used more personals
Timeless learn how to spell my fuckin name bitch its WAZ

How could ya;ll say my punches were weak
BULLSHIT!
He may have had a couple better metaphors but dont say my punches were weak u bitch

Rascal u bitch

[Aines]

holy shit time u merked this kid wit a dope and funny opener and u came wit punch afta punch and u had personals unlike WAZ......waz ur way out of ya league battlin time as he is way 2 advanced......ur structure was stretched nuttin hit hard and ur vocab was basic.......i isuggest u look at times verse as a example on how 2 come hard and how 2 sort out ya structure.....time u came wit hard punches and a dope opener nice personals and a good flow.....no need 2 breakdown more as time clearly took it

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[Reeco]

^^^ damm thats the secound one to be taken away. ohh well uppin.....

[UNDEAD.]

MY VERDICT

Waz: you didnt use any puches all u did was insult and make weak attacks u have to get more technical and complex. Try doin punches and personals but not a bad start since ur a newb. 4/10
my favourite line:
"this should be a quick bout ..... you're no competion
your rhymes aren't worth the porcelen I take a piss in"

Time:Good shit but not ur best nice work with wordplay and personals and that spiderman attack would of been better if his avy was spiderman.but still funny and smart. 7/10
My favourite line:
"i bring in flows, like cash, as if i was the battling boss
i know i'm the greatest coz "i'm the best there is, and ever, WOZ"

overall this was a aight battle but Waz you were outclassed and outclashed but still atlest u tried and didnt bak out just cause time has a good record.

metaphores:time
Punchlines:time
Strctures:time
flavor:time
overall:time

MY VOTE : Timeless

+please return the favour and vote on my battles.
ShortY battle is almost over.look in my siggy.

[Aines]

seein as ma last vote was taken away imma do this agen....along wit ^^^That up there imma break it down


I'ma chew you up and spit you out fuck you so hard that I can't get my dick out
this should be a quick bout ..... you're no competion
your rhymes aren't worth the porcelen I take a piss in
STRETCHED 2 FUCK AND PLAYED,SORT IT OUT
their whack, their weak, their garbage
this battle should be sensored from this forum.... theres too much carnage
WEAK AND STRECTCHED NEEDS SORTING
how'd u make it this far bitch? ... you're no Mc your lyrics are too empty
please don't tempt me, I make dyke's scream in fight scenes like i'm tryin' to win an emmy
STRETCHED ONCE AGEN...PUNCH WAS IGHT THO BUT BIT NEWBI ISH
you'll never put an end to me .... my rhymes are too viscious
you're like a pitbull bitch with a big bark but as soon as somebody starts all you wanna do is "give kisses"
DIDNT GET THIS MADE NO SENSE TO ME...WACK
you're dickless ...... you're a pussy with no back bone
pissed off cuz u hafta hear that hobo make your fat mom moan
FIRST LINE WAS IGHT BLAH SECOND LINE
bitch go back home .... find your little sister
shes more your type to battle rap on
and when your done make sure u thank her and kiss her.
WACK ONCE AGEN NEEDS DEVOLOPING...VISIT W.E.C 4 ELEVATION TIPS



woz thinks bout ma pencil skillz, which leaves him with lead in his head
Just like sex with spider man, u always gettin fucked on the web
DOPE AND FUNNY KILLED HIM ALREADY
No need to cry woz, ive showed im to COOL with my wordplay
U been embarassed by my CLASS, like startin skool on your first day
NICE
Woz says hes done pipes & mushrooms, but only when he hooked on mario
Im huntin u DAWG, coz u a BITCH, just look at my tally, hoe!!! (Tally Ho)
LMAO PIPES AND MUSHROOMS SHIT DOPENESS
I sed ya had no personals, but hell i aint gonna bitch and moan.
coz no-one be seeing you lines anyway, just like a cordless phone!!
THIS WAS IGHT...THOUGHT IT WAS A FILLER THO
i bring in flows, like cash, as if i was the battling boss
i know i'm the greatest coz "i'm the best there is, and ever, WOZ
LOL NICE CLOSER DISSIN HIS NAME GD


TIME TAKES IT 4 THAT VERSE AND REASONS IN MA PREVIOUS POST

[Reeco]

ok, three more votes, uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Mentality]

aight time gets this for the simple fact that
1.he didnt come played...there were original lines in there that had some good wordplay
2.he used personals...really helped ur verse
3.good flow...not stretched

waz u gotta work on some things
u got some potential but work on some things first then battle

time less had the btter vocab and wordplay while he also had the punches and the personals

waz...ur verse was wack and stop swaying
ur punches didnt hit at all....work at it

v/timeless

yo time........hit up the battles in my sig and ill come back and poll vote

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[Reeco]

damm it, people vote properly!!!!! thats 3 now arrrggggggg, uppin