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Last edited by Richard Parker; January 25th, 2004 at 11:56 PM
Whoa.. this wasn't expected at all..lol
whatever you want
Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it
ArtificialIntelligence
AI
i went 12, match it
Back to the league to crack thru Feebs & leave him rejected..
cause personally.. i Define him as Wack
but Webster says he's just Weak & Pathetic
forget it, don't even bother to check it.. cause the point is..
i enjoy how he sets up his verses.............for dissapointment..
truthfully, i destroy men.. but this fag's a rookie, a lost cause..
so don't claim you can Cook E...
when you really want dudes to toss yours..
i lost score.. how much more can my age be rocked as an issue??
especially since Feeble..
Knows he's been blown out more than a box of tissues
so stop with the mis-use.. of fake personals & text joking
cause honestly..
you've elevated Alot....................Less than Token
yeah, you won a couple of battles.. so NOW your the Cat's Meow?!?
but trust me, real Cat's see how....
your more of a Pussy than Tony Soprano's Pal
Feebs is phoney like Shallow Hal .. but you'll learn you cant Play me bro
cause i'll kill all the Noise from FM....like turning off the Radio..
**Whether i win or lose... Sign me out.. I am taking a break from battling for a while
.. i really didnt feel like writing this shit at all... good luck Feebs**
Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it
ArtificialIntelligence
AI
I pmd my verse to a few people, to drop for me if i wasnt here...
dont drop it yall... i AM here ! stop droppin it negros & ima write a real one !
Last edited by Richard Parker; January 30th, 2004 at 05:37 PM
you lost skills quick, newbs infecting ya orfices,
& you didn't evolve to wackness... it was more like metamorphasis
but you're sure to take this? then mind'll freeze ya grin,
& make you have breathing spasms when i seizure win ..
walk away in shaming disgrace, ya rhyming is done,
Eclipse can't start a movement on earth,
..so how the fuck are ya'll aligning the sun ?!?!
don't brag that O.I is ya crew, the objects to have fun,
but i cant make fun of your roster! ..you no longer have one
claim your Rb's hero, but cat's are oddly hating,
I already owned ya league before i started moderatin` ..
he dont got the effect, for which he debated & probed
my lyrics encompass his world, like i navigated the globe...
evolve sucks now, in battle he's bitter fatigued,
& lifes a bitch!
...just like faggots quitting the league ...
Nice Battle I Gotta Say....Feebs Had Dope Wordplay And Hot Punches......Evolve Had Nice Punches And Funny Personals....Nice Shit...
Quotables:
^No Sense In Quoting It By Parts....Every Line In This Quote Was Dope....Token Line Was Funny As Fuck...LoL...Originally Posted by Evolve
truthfully, i destroy men.. but this fag's a rookie, a lost cause..
so don't claim you can Cook E...
when you really want dudes to toss yours..
i lost score.. how much more can my age be rocked as an issue??
especially since Feeble..
Knows he's been blown out more than a box of tissues
so stop with the mis-use.. of fake personals & text joking
cause honestly..
you've elevated Alot....................Less than Token
^Closer Was Nice....Thought Of It Before But I Dont Remember Seeing It Used...Originally Posted by Evolve
Feebs is phoney like Shallow Hal .. but you'll learn you cant Play me bro
cause i'll kill all the Noise from FM....like turning off the Radio..
^Same As Evolves Quote....Only Weak Line Was The Freeze Ya Grin Set Up....Seizure Win Was Nice...Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
you lost skills quick, newbs infecting ya orfices,
& you didn't evolve to wackness... it was more like metamorphasis
but you're sure to take this? then mind'll freeze ya grin,
& make you have breathing spasms when i seizure win ..
^LoL...Nice Witty PersonalOriginally Posted by Feeble Minded
don't brag that O.I is ya crew, the objects to have fun,
but i cant make fun of your roster! ..you no longer have one
Punches - Evolve...Hit Much Harder
Personals - Tie...Both Threw Pretty Much Equally
Wordplay - Feeble....ALOT...Most Was Dope
Vocab - Tie
Opener - Feeble
Closer - Evolve
Enjoyment - Evolve....Just Had Funnier Lines....Token Line Killed It Honestly...
Vote - Evolve....Feeble Dropped Dope Also....Even If Evolve Leaves The League....I Think He Got This.....Just Had Nice Punches Throughout His Verse....Feeble Had Good Wordplay...But Some Of It Was Expected....Like The Eclipse Line....Good Work From You Both Though...
I actually was not feeling evolves verse at all. He didnt have any punches or personals that caught my attention and i didnt even chuckle while reading his verse. Feeble, you had some nice punches and personals. Some of your lines made me chuckle. I definately think feeble had a better verse.
^^Definately Nice...Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
^^Also nice....
V/ Feeble Minded
lol, Damn another battle I might nominate for Legendz.
hmmm... tough tough tough... ok open votin here... say what comes to mind...
Feebs personals weren't quite as good as Evolve...well the roster line was hott.
Feeble had better/more wordplay, though Evolves FM line was hott, the Eclipse
line was hott. But the Token line was crazy. Seizure line was "cute". BUT this
has got to be the deciding factor... The flip on the played Evolve to whackness
line was really good but still played and the Owned the league line was played.
and Evolves tissue box line was "ehh..." But Feebles break in those two lines
cost him a superb battle. I vote - Evolve but can honestly say I think since E
is leavin Feebs deserves the title for that verse.
vote - Feeb
Last edited by Mystery~Murdera; January 30th, 2004 at 11:22 PM
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LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
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I liked this battle...very close
Evolve:
Back to the league to crack thru Feebs & leave him rejected..
cause personally.. i Define him as Wack
but Webster says he's just Weak & Pathetic
^nice way to open this shit...good
forget it, don't even bother to check it.. cause the point is..
i enjoy how he sets up his verses.............for dissapointment..
^ nice liked it..good punch
truthfully, i destroy men.. but this fag's a rookie, a lost cause..
so don't claim you can Cook E...
when you really want dudes to toss yours..
^lol..nice wordplay
i lost score.. how much more can my age be rocked as an issue??
especially since Feeble..
Knows he's been blown out more than a box of tissues
^aight punch
so stop with the mis-use.. of fake personals & text joking
cause honestly..
you've elevated Alot....................Less than Token
^aight punch..wasn't feeling that so much
yeah, you won a couple of battles.. so NOW your the Cat's Meow?!?
but trust me, real Cat's see how....
your more of a Pussy than Tony Soprano's Pal
^good punch...nice set up
Feebs is phoney like Shallow Hal .. but you'll learn you cant Play me bro
cause i'll kill all the Noise from FM....like turning off the Radio..
^lol..nice wordplay and personal..aight closer
Feeble:
you lost skills quick, newbs infecting ya orfices,
& you didn't evolve to wackness... it was more like metamorphasis
^lol..nice opener..straight wordplay/personal
but you're sure to take this? then mind'll freeze ya grin,
& make you have breathing spasms when i seizure win ..
^damn...nice flow..nice wordplay
walk away in shaming disgrace, ya rhyming is done,
Eclipse can't start a movement on earth,
..so how the fuck are ya'll aligning the sun ?!?!
^lol..good punch/wordplay of his crew
don't brag that O.I is ya crew, the objects to have fun,
but i cant make fun of your roster! ..you no longer have one
^meh not feeling that
claim your Rb's hero, but cat's are oddly hating,
I already owned ya league before i started moderatin` ..
^nice wordplay/personal..good punch
he dont got the effect, for which he debated & probed
my lyrics encompass his world, like i navigated the globe...
^yea..aight..aight wordplay
evolve sucks now, in battle he's bitter fatigued,
& lifes a bitch!
...just like faggots quitting the league ...
^lol..nice personal...pretty good closer
man this was a close battle
Both had really good quality of verses
So I'm a have to give my vote to who i enjoyed more
And that was Feeble
very close battle fellas
but
v/ Feeble
V/ Feebs...
OK...this was a good close battle.....both came good....
Volve...you had some nice personal lines........and a few really dope lines...the tissue was dope....but i dont think u stayed as consistent...didnt like ur opener...thought it was played....but u still had a good verse.
Feebs - One of your better battles....def have improved...u too had a few dope punches.. i liked the Globe line and the O.I line...those were ur best...but i think the difference was consistency....which u remained the entire verse...so thats why u get my vote.
Hmmm....Feebs PM me...I have a question.
Not breaking it down...for my own reasons. Obvious...
Vote ~ Feeble
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Vote - Feeble
It was close
I'd break it down
but Evolve signed out
slighty better punches and more consistency
lets Feeble hold the HW
til I take it next week
Merk Squad...The Roster you weren't on
Diamond Minds...The Roster you're not on
LLL HW Champion...Been dope since forever
haha, yeah right .. ^
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