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Wise Ways
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WhatThatLookLike..?!
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Ain't... starting till you check in
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woah.. lol.. checkin in how bout extedning the line limit to bout 20.. im on a roll here
wtf.. no answer?.....................................
Looking for a trace of talent..not that I can't find it..It's str8 Gone
See you came out of tha closet..He's freely getting head from Sudam
After tha Battle ya loss record's exactly like mine..Damn..only tripled
But how can such large whackness..Be put into such a small symbol?
Been a long time since I've seen a win list w/ that many noobs in a row
Embarassed?Face took a pic of him pissing..Just to proove that he flows
Smiles was pming me to battle..Shit this niggas already all on my dick
Quicker than tha others?Came prepared with his tongue out ready to lick
Shit<--Thats what you..He can only see brown..cuz his visions are crappy
Tha Fuck? you must really be gay..Cuz I just merked ya..And ya still happy
You can't change anything about sig, name, avy
And explain ya votes....10 lines..make deadline
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WhatThatLookLike..?!
hey hey hey! lol
warm ups: even chicks that are involved in DICK BLOWING DISS HIM
cuz any sort of intelligence is what this KIDS FLOWS IS MISSING
his avatar sais it all.. his rhymes are WITHOLDING WISDOM
check this out kid
I'll let my FIST PUNCH this BITCH PUNK till his RIBS CRUNCH
i've heard his audios and them SHITS STUNK,
damn faggot sounds like a high PITCHED DRUNK
mixed with a crackhead version of alvin and the CHIPMUNKS
so kid stop actin like your puttin GATS IN FOES,
cuz your just an ACT AN SHOW ,shit even if you were ASKIN HOES
theyd tell you that every one RAPPING KNOWS
that your thug image is bout as real as michael JACKSONS NOSE
i'll throw you to a shredder and ease your BACK IN SLOW
and after your bones finished getting CRACKED AN CLOSED
you'll be tossed in to the freezing cold LACKIN CLOTHES
lol this kid is ridiculous.. the damn pic in the sig is of a soldier pissing on a pic of sadammn you gay ass.. hahaha
uppin for votes
Can you please stop swaying....
It's called wordplay...
I don't say.. "OMG.. you only had one personal"
Or "OMG..I've never done audio on tha internet in life"
So please don't do it to me
And to get line three...
You have to know Our records
His is 13-2...Mine is 13-0
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WhatThatLookLike..?!
well...this is a good one...
Looking for a trace of talent..not that I can't find it..It's str8 Gone
See you came out of tha closet..He's freely getting head from Sudam
this was alright petty decent opener 5/10
After tha Battle ya loss record's exactly like mine..Damn..only tripled
But how can such large whackness..Be put into such a small symbol?
this is pretty nice personal 7/10
Been a long time since I've seen a win list w/ that many noobs in a row
Embarassed?Face took a pic of him pissing..Just to proove that he flows
i like this one it flows nicely nice personal on his sig 7/10
Smiles was pming me to battle..Shit this niggas already all on my dick
Quicker than tha others?Came prepared with his tongue out ready to lick
wasn't feeling it 3/10
Shit<--Thats what you..He can only see brown..cuz his visions are crappy
Tha Fuck? you must really be gay..Cuz I just merked ya..And ya still happy
ok first line picked it up with the second line nice personal on the smiley face 5/10
27/50
I'll let my FIST PUNCH this BITCH PUNK till his RIBS CRUNCH
i've heard his audios and them SHITS STUNK,
weak perosnal I award 3/10
damn faggot sounds like a high PITCHED DRUNK
mixed with a crackhead version of alvin and the CHIPMUNKS
nice persoanl hav't heard the audio's tho 6/10
so kid stop actin like your puttin GATS IN FOES,
cuz your just an ACT AN SHOW ,shit even if you were ASKIN HOES
alright line nothing heavy 4/10
theyd tell you that every one RAPPING KNOWS
that your thug image is bout as real as michael JACKSONS NOSE
nice punch 7/10
i'll throw you to a shredder and ease your BACK IN SLOW
and after your bones finished getting CRACKED AN CLOSED
you'll be tossed in to the freezing cold LACKIN CLOTHES
nothing real hard so 5/10
25/50
my vote = wise ways
uppin for votes....................................
damn fuckn vote in this bitch.............................
punches ww: But how can such large whackness..Be put into such a small symbol?
that was nice...
personals ww: Embarassed?Face took a pic of him pissing..Just to proove that he flows
metas : i've heard his audios and them SHITS STUNK,
damn faggot sounds like a high PITCHED DRUNK
wordplay ww: Shit<--Thats what you..He can only see brown..cuz his visions are crappy
Tha Fuck? you must really be gay..Cuz I just merked ya..And ya still happy
multies : I'll let my FIST PUNCH this BITCH PUNK till his RIBS CRUNCH
i've heard his audios and them SHITS STUNK,
damn faggot sounds like a high PITCHED DRUNK
mixed with a crackhead version of alvin and the CHIPMUNKS
you was going good but after your first 4 lines you lost it man if you woulda stayed consistant like you was you woulda took it no doubt
overall: i gotta go with wise no hate just an opinion
peep my sig links please
Gotta go with Wise Ways, no hate here. What did it for me was the more traditional approach, punches that landed well because of a well-balanced structure. Just a good battle verse, nothing really too memorable like in some of his other verses, just good sticking to the basics.
, I like your style, it's your own and i understand it's difficult. I think it's tight. Try your best not to sacrifice punches for the flow though, never a good thing to do. Maybe fix your structure up a little bit, people vote on that on this site. And dont' capitalize like that, some vets think it herbish.
Good battle guys. Drop a vote here, : ) already did but i think he forgot to poll
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109567
I am gonna be honest I know I don't like Wise but he took this wit punches and wordplay, Smilie got alot of multis, flow and structure, but Wise wins wit betta punches and that wins battles........................Vote=Wise
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Uppin for tha KO
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