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Thread: RvTopical: Inevitable

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    RvTopical: Inevitable

    Arthur rarely travelled by train, he was fearful of enclosed spaces
    So this was a first, a one off, one of `those` special cases.
    Out of all the places, he felt so at home but not at home
    And there was a reason for this, the reason- he wouldn’t feel alone.
    An ideal even evil couldn’t condone! Spared, if born by another
    `Cause this was the tyranny enforced by sin’s scorn lover.
    Even Lady Macbeth would, at best, keel from this regime of disdain
    And this is what Arthur engraved in the inside of an Auschwitz headed train;

    “The window acts as a frame, this painting seems out of reach
    I have a taste for hope but unfamiliar ash between my teeth.
    How can God be? When His conception deals such destruction
    I’ve never questioned faith. I used to blame society’s corruption,
    Religion prolongs death and we abide, attributed to conformity
    Heaven and Hell conceived civilization accompanied w/ a deformity.
    What if we mean nothing? What if suffering saved no one? What if?
    I’m destined for death, the journey reinforces this, faith? I’ve lost it
    Husband of one and father of two. My Life is the only self infliction.
    But what’s this? . . .”

    . . . Arthur never finished his inscription
    Contrary to the diction, Arthur Gould wasn’t fiction and far from it
    `Cause familiar voices were heard suddenly. They reached a summit!
    38 trains travelled that day, but only one broke the norm convention
    And no one knows whether it was fate or even divine intervention
    That wasn’t of mention, we are all Arthurs, making us inseparable
    But in life nothing is determined, and death is never inevitable
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    the pound is stronger than the dollar, HOLLA !

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    ..Dope..I don't use that phrase much..but..this fits that description..very good imagery..great content..overall..very nice..peace..

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    Arthur! thats nuts.
    I am reading a book where the main character is named arthur. he isnpired me to perfect the art of sandwich making.

    this piece was very faith-based. a lot of my early writing was like this, except worse=). I appreciated your metas in the inscription.
    The window acts as a frame, this painting seems out of reach
    I have a taste for hope but unfamiliar ash between my teeth.

    Religion prolongs death and we abide, attributed to conformity
    Heaven and Hell conceived civilization accompanied w/ a deformity.
    very well done, Methane. the first bar I quoted is one of the dopest I've ever seen....record it =)
    wordperfect?
    ..o0Pure0o..

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    Cheers doods

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    maven said record it.....loki does audio?

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    Maven: Arthur Dent is gay. Get over it. . Ford for life, yo!

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    This was good. a lot of detail and faith description.
    The 2 quotes up above i thought were really well writtin.
    Flow was good. and so was the vocab.
    Excellent read.
    Keep it up.
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    Cheers lads. .

    Errr. . might come to audio. . I will do our collab first, pat. .
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    Yeh really nice piece...I liked the story cos it was unusual to what people usually write about.

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    I DIG YA.VERY GOOD

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    you dig me? calm down there Fonzie
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    show me whatchu got

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    We got bitches on the left, Niggas on the right
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    Do what you gotta do, Nigga keep it tight
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    But make um understand
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    Its Westside foe Life

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    Think You Just Called Him Out Or Whatever 6 Months Late Son.............
    I WILL GET THROUGH TO YOU EVENTUALLY...
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    nice shit that was tight

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