ok man... you said the rules...
10 lines ... ill spit first,,, reply when you see this
cheers,,,,
COM
Eki
ok man... you said the rules...
10 lines ... ill spit first,,, reply when you see this
cheers,,,,
You claim your a legend.. than i am an assasin in this thread
Like JFK... Before your verse has an impact.. mysteriously it ends up dead
I am right under the ^ below your name... cachin up - u running outta gass
Wait! look at it Up-side-down.... now i am on top - squashing your ass
At first you name didnt make much sence.... but it hit me fast
Just like .com..... you always come last
You record was mysterious..until... "Called.. Com..Ill?" Join the crew!
37 wins is pathetic - with all those Dickriders following you ^
Only way a girl will ever make you CUM- is if she cuts the top of the O off
You verse couldn't cum hard...... if it wasnt soft
Who the fuck is this fool?... and why'd he make this thread?
Originality is life... and you're so fake... you're dead!
Havent even heard of you...I never said I was legendary...
You'll finally be underground... buried in the ...cemetary!
My shit is harder to swallow... I'll make your sorrow worse
Your verse is harder to follow... than a tank in reverse!
Took hours on your spit... I'm your curse..
....I'll see you crushed
Spent ten minutes on my verse...
...but get votes coz yours looks rushed!
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lets get some votes in...........
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v/ com by far..
ekis verse, was bad. eki work on your punches - urs are so old, that my grandma was prolly at this board when they were first used. read other newbies battles, and elevate seriously. you can do better. the JFk punch thing was really old too..and the dot com thing against com is played out as welll....
com - that cemetary / underground verse had potential.. it was still ok... much better verse than he had..... figured id vote hoes.the tank punch was blah though com, coulda been worded much much better.
pz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108487
wherd vote there please. sry bout the freepost i'll delete it later, cant edit my other one on this name
uppin for votes...................................
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3rd up............................................
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Eki was more like off-key..
^^you had alot...but it was too streched and very average...no offense..
In elevated u have to have verses that stand out, not average-
Com had harder punches and much better flo...
Also a better structure-
no hate....nice battle
vote - com
I'm here so might aswell vote
Punches - Com
Vote - Com..other kid lacked punches..the essence of battling, even i know that.
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- Artificial Intelligence
Com with better personals, a bit more originality, and definately harder shots.
Eki started off ok with the opener, even if it was stretched.
But the rest was forced punches and wordplay...
And not very original at that.
He went for personals, but just didn't turn em into punches.
Com hit him with good shots and some decent wordplay.
Pretty much all there is to say.
Peace
Holla back...
Vote on this!
OK, here it is:
EKI - Ok verse, nothin spitacular (Jus fuckin wit cha) but I liked this punch alot:
"At first you name didnt make much sence.... but it hit me fast
Just like .com..... you always come last"
Good shit - but the rest of your verse seemed off.. not bad, just not on point. Ok drop though
Advice - keep elevatin, I don't really see too much weakness, just could have been a little more witty, some wordplay would have been nice, but overall I think you did OK
COM:
Vet skillz showin... the punches were witty, this one did it right here:
"My shit is harder to swallow... I'll make your sorrow worse
Your verse is harder to follow... than a tank in reverse!"
Loved that one. Overall consistant, decent punches. Only advice - more personals, and a couple of the punches seemed half assed, but not enough to make a negative impact on your verse since your half ass is better than mosts best try. good drop
vote = COM
please drop an honest vote here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=104931
been slept on too long
thanks
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