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    Opposite ends of the Spectrum

    this is an audio verse that i have but here's the lyrics...

    I'm the cause of destruction and the creation of life
    but they balance each other out w/ the lyrics that i write
    offerin you further insight to look deep past the light
    cuz it always keeps you blinded, try as hard as you might
    the harder the fight, the harder that your going to fall
    your lucky anyone was there to yell out timber at all
    in a place like this where you're surrounded w/darkness
    it's hard for anyone to embark its....
    so cold outside and the weather remains ever-changing
    like the patterns of your life when there steady re-arranging
    and it seems so strange now that all the colors dissipated
    now your growin agitated cuz it's not what you anticipated
    so your trying to change back to a more familiar mode
    but your feelings are so built up your about to explode
    about to corrode, your mind is travelling down the wrong road
    now your detached from yourself like 3rd person point of view
    steady confused no matter which route you decide to choose

    i replied to Mirrors, Repetitive Occurences and Dev's Untitled
    Last edited by Diverse; January 19th, 2004 at 02:52 PM Reason: forgot some stuff

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    yo nice shit bro, basic, deep and simple, flow was tight but proply coulda used a lil more vocab but your wordplay and multi's made up for that and I really like the closing line really finished the piece off nicely. only thing I do really wish for though was this to maybe be longer and maybe a hook added but dope shit bro keep droppin.

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