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  1. #1
    TheProphet777
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    You see my life

    im doing the audio version on this also...so far all i did was the chorus but i just finished my first verse...This is going to be a collab wit denial...and the hynotist on the beat After the rain

    here is the shit. ill post a link in the botoom for the track
    Chorus:x2
    you see my life...its not controlled by my faith/
    i put it in gods hands...every day...threw the day/
    pray for life...i dont know why....peope hate on me/
    every time in my life...i just dont know why...they just hate (on) me/hate me...me..me

    Verse 1: Me

    you see ive been shouted at for shit i havent done/
    people say i cant make rap happen/i just do it for fun/
    whats with you people and your egotistic problems/
    im not your source of energy to conserve..Im not your solver/
    Put yourself in my shoes...Ive been through a lot of shit in my life/
    god knows every trial i hold conserved...including my future wife/
    But only jesus can judge me for who i am/Dont let me be wrong/
    im Just being a typical type of man.../
    Give me the life i deserve...i need the loving and feelings/
    women surrounding me ,praising me for all the time ive been killing/
    Putting forth my efforts and being lazy will get me nowhere/
    life doesnt last long...might as well start from somewhere/
    and if i dont get the things i deserve...i might as well not worry/
    shit doesnt come easy..it will just make you live life slopy/
    controlling my problems and throwing them out like trash/
    balled up into a small shiny ball and put it in my stash/
    money is not what we all beg for but we ask to be forgiven/
    For the wrong doings we put on our parents and our future children/
    Cuz the pain they fealt is now all our hardships./
    Those that remember everything they did for us wasnt bullshit/

    Audio Version:
    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/th...gliljmusic.htm

  2. #2
    TheProphet777
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    9 of you mother fuckers viewed this and never said shit...30000 members wtf is up wit dat?

  3. #3
    TheProphet777
    Guest
    screwed up u fuckers cant comment on this shit..............whateva

  4. #4
    J.Essen
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    Nice..................dat was dope yo keep doin some more

  5. #5
    TheProphet777
    Guest
    upping this shit yo................................................ come on people comment on the audio also.....jesus

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