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    Verbal Illness, Medicinal Healing

    Verbal Illness, Medicinal Healing

    I'm the bringer of common cold, Lukemia and blood clots,
    Female; now something doesn't quite join up the lyrical dots,
    Hearing gunshots, a cancer of the brain with one aim to turn insane,
    Shatter your limbs with my patter, splatter you lying lame,
    Deaf, dumb and blind, like a virus in the mind,
    Only femcee to make your intestine unwind,
    A rare find; when placed faced down on the operating table,
    I'm missing three vital organs, but my blood pressure's still stable!
    I cut corners in battle so I rattle those points up quicker,
    Lines flicker straight to your liver quicker than a litre of liqour,
    Sicker than influenza , or chronic lung disease,
    I spit bullets at close range; bow down on your knees,
    Bronchitis, my sister had a disease just like this,
    Sept' the doctor said something different...
    Hepititus, A or B? Or was it conjunctivitus?
    I don't remember, does that mean i have Alzeimers?
    Got a verruca on my eye, I spy a wart of some sort,
    Used to have night vision, now i only see it in short,
    Strapped to a ventilator, told my Mom I'd see her later,
    Bitch never came back to see me, guess thats why I'm a hater,
    Highly contagus..on a scale no one can gauge us,
    This is one for Corrupted Visionz, more illness coming up!
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    that was a good verse
    you had some whitty lines
    i liked this punch best
    Lines flicker straight to your liver quicker than a litre of liqour,

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107421

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    pretty nice by my standards.. sum nice lines that made me laugh :P keep uppin. peep my new piece please.

    "Hepititus, A or B? Or was it conjunctivitus?
    I don't remember, does that mean i have Alzeimers?" = my fav line.. for sum reason lol.

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    yeah, that was my fave line too...lol it just popped into my head and i was like, shit, this is dope for me! LOL, i actually think i'm getting better! LMAO

    keep da compliments coming!

    By the way, i used to be called Liba Dee, this name is a more common alias and a new start for me...keep peepin the shyt!
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    Uppin this shyt!
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    can i get some more replies?
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    ..Nice..I didn't reconize the name at first...until I went into crew chat..anywas..this was decent..it flowed well..I thought the content was lacking a little..but..other than that..it's alright...

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    yeah this was pretty good.....made a good read....structure was pretty good.....you had some good flow in this, it was pretty smooth i thought....had some good vocab in there....the content was alright i thought....but overall this was pretty good, enjoyed the read....keep at it.

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    good flow , good structure , vocab was good..keep writin.. Peace

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