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Thread: Corrupted Visions:Commercial vs Underground{A Must Read}

  1. January 28th, 2004, 12:59 PM #31
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    "I urge you...It's persuasion, 99% of the rappers don't wallow in gold
    Ans as we follow the scroll, your blindfold swallows you whole
    Hollows your soul...bottles your globe...
    But still manage to follow your goals"
    You know how you finally get something soooo good you stop for fear of F---ing up what you had if you'd left it alone? I'm through reading for the day. Hell probably for the week. I'm on my way to do something else now. Lesson for all on the "Order of being an Emcee". Depth, content, style, history, multi's, punches, protecting the art, dissing the destroyers...yea...yea. I wish in something this tight you'd mentioned The Lord somewhere to bring it all together. But that's just hating. We all got our places right?
  2. January 30th, 2004, 12:27 PM #32
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    I just felt like uppin this...let's get 400 views~~Hoo~~Ray~~~
  3. January 30th, 2004, 12:51 PM #33
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    I Feel This When I First Did This Topic No One Would Collab It With Me So I Had To Use Both Influences And In My Opinion You Really Exposed Where My Verses Lacked.this Came Very Strong And Had Few Weaknessess.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
  4. January 30th, 2004, 01:45 PM #34
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    NIce one man true skillz right dere............................
  5. February 2nd, 2004, 09:15 AM #35
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    Quote Originally Posted by Emerge
    im not gonna diminish this piece by dropping some shallow feedback

    all i got to say is....

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    thanks..(but this got denied... )
  6. February 5th, 2004, 10:15 AM #36
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    feel like uppin all my shit...
  7. March 3rd, 2004, 08:12 PM #37
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    This is the one...This piece made me in RB...people started noticing me after this piece..This is my favorite work of all time...It's not my best...but,,It's my favorite...

    Good~Bye~....................For...Now......
  8. March 3rd, 2004, 09:41 PM #38
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    pen never seent his one before now but...
    I think this was dope wusnt really in your normal astyle of
    story tellin it wus more of a battle rap...not between
    people but groups of people pretty nice aproach...
    keep at it>I know you will...
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  9. March 4th, 2004, 08:41 AM #39
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    This is truly the best piece you have ever done in my eyes Penny!!!

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  10. March 4th, 2004, 08:51 AM #40
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    super super super... i mean really super... i liked this... the best an break of both worlds... there is a difference... ha... i actully get it now... yep... thanx dunny... inspire others lol.. great drop... could this be put in the legends? or topic of year month ish... whatever yall got

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  11. March 4th, 2004, 12:18 PM #41
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    Definately Deserves To Be There

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  12. March 4th, 2004, 10:31 PM #42
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    this was one of the best pieces i've read in awhile. everything i read from you is off the hook but this one was crazy. i like how you put different perspectives into this piece. you mentioned alot of the pro's and con's of being underground and commercial and alot of good points. keep writin cuz everything u write is mad good..
    Crazy spit, her shyt be emaculate...oNe
  13. March 6th, 2004, 06:50 AM #43
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    Quote Originally Posted by Nic Caesar
    could this be put in the legends? or topic of year month ish... whatever yall got

    Caesar - On3
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  14. March 6th, 2004, 07:32 AM #44
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    ive peeped this ish before... not gonna rub your back and tellyou how dope it was though... it made me think a little... you had really ill multis... rhyme scheme wwas tight... flow had some scratchy parts...

    good stuff overall...
    Hence Forward
  15. March 6th, 2004, 06:20 PM #45
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    at da beginning i thought the flow was awkward but as i got more glued to it i didnt even notice it any more. and to be truth ful dis shit taught me a lot of shit man. ill stuff keep writing dawg
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