My Love Song

[Se7eN]

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(verse 1) (Se7eN)
(yeah, I love you)
Ayo,
My loves pushed inside, you a freak, what’s on your mind
I hit you from the front, smoke a blunt, and hit you from behind
You roll your eyes, back in your skull, your getting so bold (fuck me)
It changes a lot, it went to being hot, when it used to be cold
Your 20 years old, freak at night, turn off the lights
I’ll make you scream, so after tonight it’ll never be tight
Yeah! I’m white, but I still hit it, and of course I still lick it
Orgasms given for hours, instead of only for minutes
I’m so sick, your lips intersected wit my hard hit plan
You love playing under the covers, cause I’m not a one minutes man
Sweat and juices, this is a sport, that no one ever loses
You wanna know my secret (hell yeah), but you still kinda clueless
So much slipping and sliding, we lose control when you riding
I push harder and you start to yell and then you start biting
Lighting the sex up, so much, you scream and start to explode
Kiss you down your whole body, from your head, down to your toes

(chorus 1) (repeat) (x2) (Se7eN)
This is My………………………Love………….Song…………………For You
No matter where you are, I’ll be the one who makes ya scream
This is My………………………Love………….Song…………………For You
This is a scene that you can only imagine and……………………….. try to dream

(verse 2) (Se7eN)
My loves like Ice, it melts if the temperature gets to hot
So shit happens, when we’re parked in the back of the parking lot
Dogs Barking a lot, but we go at it like animals reproducing
I use the right spots, like the real thug Gs be using
Losing, abusing control like we made our own noise
All the people in the neighborhood here your screams and your voice
They wanna know your choice, raw or protected wit a shield
So many pushes and hits, along wit rides that are dealed
No toys, no whips, juss straight banging and that’s it
I love thick girls, but I like to stay away from the fat chicks
That’s magic, it’s tragic the way I lift you up from your bed
I go as ruff as you feeling like you need first-aid and a MED
Head or Eating, your like sex is the only thing to live for
I got you dick-whipped, I ask for one hundred dollars, u give 4
I love you, but I ain’t getting hitched, I wanna stay single
I can’t have kids, problems, and jobs to interfere or mingle

(chorus 2) (Repeat) (x2) (Halob)
This is My………………………Love………….Song…………………For You
No matter where you are, I’ll be the one who makes ya scream
This is My………………………Love………….Song…………………For You
This is a scene that you can only imagine and……………………….. try to dream

[Se7eN]

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[Se7eN]

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[Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic]

Bleh...to me it felt cheesy, uninspired and surprisingly, too gimicky. I didn't like it too much, tough it wasn't to bad. Just felt, it wasn't good either.