Rappers and the game (quick keystyle)

[LM]

Quick keystyle on my thoughts on rappers, the game and all that shit.


As artists there's only so much bullshit we can really take...
'Fore we snap, release all our anger, frustration and our hate...
It aint our fault, you push us further than we can tolerate...
So we gotta diss eachother for reps and set the record straight...
By then the peace has been and gone and it's way to late...
To hold up our hands and make sure the situation dont esculate...
Coz with every rapper comes an image, a picture that they paint...
Sometimes it's fake, but there's one thing that I truly know...
That is that as an Mc I will forever and always continue to grow...
Coz I will never walk in footsteps or follow in anothers shadow...
I will forever be true to myself, I aint in this game to attract ho's...
I'm here for one reason, which is so the world can see my flows...
I love the rap game from the top of my head to tip of my toes...
And If I lost it I would feel the hardest of any body blows...
It just goes to show that there is passion in my heart and mind...
And one way or another, in memories I will never die...
I will be forever alive....As I keep livin life...
One day at a time...

Feedback is appreciated!!!

[LM]

Wow.....no feedback yet, lazy bastards

[apkblackman]

u ripped that from eminem. From the song with One Day at a time.

[Epic_Last_Donz]

LMAO HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA U ONE WANNABE EMINEM DOGG HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA GET YOUR OWN FUCKING STYLE

[SinfiC]

The concept was good but I think that you should try to change up the words you rhyme with, there were 3 different sounding words you used, try using more. I'm not sure what these guys are refering to when they said it was like em's piece, I didn't notice it sounding like eminem at all....anyways keep writtin and it will come.

[FormulaMC]

Even Tho This Is Almost A Carbon Copy Of Em's One Day At A Time Shit, I Was Feelin' This Verse. . Flow Was On-Point, Everything Was Good. . Try Something For Your Own Next Time So The Retards Up There Can Stop Actin' Like They Cool. . Keep Um Droppin Cuz. . Pz.

[Katz.Frost]

you bit like the whole verse off of eminem. wot the fucks up wit u?

[SinfiC]

you shouldn't be spittin, if your spittin bittin'....I think someone should post the verse they are talking about so we all know how similar they are....just a thought.

[SinfiC]

Yea, the guys are right, this did sound similar to eminems verse...

[Eminem]
Only learn to take, our anger and our hate
Control our mental state, settle down, and just set it straight
Maybe we can learn to take a second to pump the brakes
For we said it, regret it later, and let it escalate
Cause by then its too just late, theres so much we can take
Theres only so much someone can swallow and tolerate
To the point that he just breaks, snaps and thats all it takes
You'd think that we was learning from other rappers mistakes
But we aint
Its plain to go against, with every artists, comes the image he portrays
And a picture that he paints
But in the midst of all this anger and this angst
Never once did you hear me say I'm a gangster and I aint hear no complaints
But I know, that I will always continue to grow,
As long as I lead and never follow no one else's shadow
There will never be another me
And that I can guarantee
Thats why the fuck I remain sucker free to this day
The game will never be the same
No matter how much fame or success they attain
There will never be another me
And no matter what they do
There will never be another you
You can search but you'll never find
You can try to rewind time
But in your hearts and your minds
We will never die
We are forever alive
And we continue growing....

I got this off of: http://www.lyricsstyle.com/t/tupac/onedayatatime.html

[Kredit's NOT A Fag]

Eminem-
We can only learn to take, our anger and our hate
Control our mental stakes, settle down and set it straight
Maybe we can learn to take a second to pump the brakes
Before we said it, regret it later and let it escalate
Cuz by then its just too late, there's so much we can take
And there's only so much someone can swallow and tolerate
To the point that he just brakes, snaps, and its all it takes
You think that we was learnin from other rappers mistakes
But we ain't, its plain to go against,
With every artist comes the image he portrays and the picture that he paints
But in the mist of all this anger and this angst
Never once did you heard me say I'm a gangster and I aint hear any complaints
But I know, that I will always continue to grow
As long as I lead, and never follow no one else's shadow
There will never be another me, and that I can guarantee
That's why the fuck I remain sucker free
To this day, the game, will never be the same
No matter how much fame and success they attain
There will never be another me
And no matter what they do, there will never be another you
You can search but you'll never find
You can try to rewind time, but in your hearts and your minds
We will never die, we are forever alive

[SinfiC]

^^looks like I beat you to it yo...lol

[LM]

That song is what i was listenin to at the time so I am guilty of takin a lot of it out but what the fuck who cares. Atleast I admit that I took a lot of ideas from it and this was only done coz I was bored shitless.