:) vs taxback

[Under Dawg]

aiight ten lines you spit first end of discussion

[Under Dawg]

damn where the hell is this faggot............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ....

[TaxBack]

okay shit i was somewhere else , you made the thread fast i accept .......................
i spit first but you have 15 minutes after i spit my texte

[TaxBack]

I spit in about 1o minutes get ready men .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................................

[TaxBack]

TaxBack vs

What the fuck is this a joke battle with a smiley your gonna choke//
You'll get whipped with my lyrical stroke, you've just been broked//
Your checkmate cuz a smiley ain't able to battle clearly//
I'll whip your ass under the table cuz now your left with no energy//
Now your a sad face, cuz there's no laughing with me, you have no knee,so there's no pity//
You understand , you have no chances your stuck between million of fences//
You've been offences now you know that you need the conprehenses//
Next time bring your mad and strong face//
Cuz you will need some muthafuckin grace// to win vs me
I'll be always there to chase you and make knots in your shoelaces//

so prepare yourself for something more serious ..... next time


go checkin you have 15 minute

[Under Dawg]

aiight for all those that dont know a "G" is a thousand dollars



we can "blaim canada" for givin birth to this WACK CAT
TAXBACK, son your rhymes wouldnt be "shit" even if you wrote them on your "ASS CRACK"

text? we can take it PAST THAT... and bitch ill leave you SNAPPED IN TWO
and physically SMACKED AND BRUISED
ill have your damn face lookin like a "crip bandana"- "BLACK AND BLUE"
youd think that your either just stupid or CRACK INFUSED
cuz you keep postin battles just to RAP AND LOOSE

your a FAGGOT DUDE..and its just stunning how you love to get DRILLED WITH HITS
your damn asshole is like a gay pride parade cuz it stays FILLED WITH DICKS


and as far as money goes you have no CHECKS AND JEWELLS
the closest your gay ass have probably gotten to a "G" is a F IN SCHOOL

[TaxBack]

nice now we just need the votes and uhh you said ten lines not 11???????????????????????????? ?!?!?!?!???

[Under Dawg]

damn man my fualt kid but i cant edit it.. its just one line extra no big deal man

first up................................................ .................................................. ........

[TaxBack]

okay doesnt matter and i thaught you would be a little newbie fuck loll let the votes begin .......................................

[Under Dawg]

shit.. second up in this bitch............................................. .................................................. ...............

[TaxBack]

men we just need the muthafuckin votes .................................................. ................................................

[doc_knock]

decent battle...

taxback had a decent verse, some ok punches, but it was a little off.

...or however the fuck i should write it had better word play, and better punches. flow was better too.

vote:

i spend time on your battles, check mine out

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...did=102139--vs 730

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...eadid=101943-- vs prophacyz

[Under Dawg]

3rd up thanks for the vote man ill check your battles out when i get over 100 post..peace....................................... .................................................. ............................

[Under Dawg]

4TH UP................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................

[DNF]

ite this is how i saw it...


Taxback:

i dont really know what to say about ya verse, but it lacked... lacked hard punches, anydirect personals, no real wordplay... didnt have a consistant flow or rhyme scheme, wasnt bad, but you need to elevate a lot in these area's...


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wow, i really enjoyed reading ya verse, had some really creative ideas, funny punches, good personals and name wordplay, flow and multi's was good thru out... reall did more than you needed to, just to win this battle...


pretty much dominated this whole battle, with better punches, some good personals, and wordplay, some might have been played but it was a much better overall verse than taxback...


props to both emcee's... keep at it taxback you got potential...

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and if either of you could drop an honest vote on my battle with buzzkill we'd both appreciate it. that battles been up for like a week now...