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Crooked-Comical
Black Lizzard
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U crooked? nah like jenny craig in Mc donalds never happen ..
This bitch cry's hoe whats the dilly?. after i slapped his fag ass silly
crooked u think u took it?act fresh like u from philly,& u jus a retarded hill billy
U couldnt come new,.. blah worst than garbage u best go on & , recycle
& ur dad is jackin'(son's) is gettin fame,when he's hookin up with michael..
Think again b4 u try to face me, fuck it this shit, jus amaze me..
u try to face me..u a fugazy who wants to be me, can u be free?
nope u cant, ur in this trap, start a crew - 'united&retarted'
this homo is like a wigga with a cold dont get me started
Those are wins in ur sig? its the net does that 'rings a bell?'that must a hurt!
U couldnt merk , u just a nerd ..with a face of a misformed terd
U need explenations?
Beating You Is Like Taking Candy From A Baby, Your No Test/
Bitch Beating Me Is Like Drawin A Circle On An Etch A Sketch/
Cant Be Done , Im Number One ,Your Just A Worthless Prick/
I will "Crusify" You, Then You Will Really Be "Shit On A Stick"/
You Are The Biggest Dick On The Board, But Your Still Pussy/
Im So Hard , Your Mushie n Gushie Like A Porn Stars Tushie/
Dont Push Me,Cuz I Can Guarentee You'll Get Pushed Back/
Asked Anybody In My Sig What Happens "WOOSH SMACK"/
I Crushed What You Brang, Still Would Have Won if i Sang/
Lighting Dynamite Is The Only Way U Can "Leave A Bang"/
Last Line Supposed to Be
" Leave with A Bang "
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yeh not bat of a battle.
Black lizzard came good. Oright punches. But whats with the italics man? You trying to make it harder to read?
Anyway i feel Crooked took this just . With better punches, better flow and structure. But not much in it
please return the fev and vote honestly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101043
Such a bullshit vote, ...i ripped him !
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blak lizzard won
both sucked arsehole but his wasnt as bad
improve improve improve improve improve improve
cos i dont want to see another battle like this
You need Ghost Dog in your DVD collection
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it's a bold statement - the new youtube
hmmm this battle was pretty sad
there wasnt really much punches in this battle, kinda fell off, both verses seemed like there was babbling about nothing thrown in there...fillers
but lizzard had that micheal jackson line lol, thats basically like the only thing that stuck out in this battle...i advise both of u to elevate
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Not the one to come through ya house when the company jet...
I"m bin laden, come through your house with the company jet
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yeah. this was a pretty weak battle, but lemme break it down.
punches - tie: hardly any were thrown
flow - c-c: lizz, ur flow was aight, but it kinda came off course at some times
multis - lizz: i dont think c-c had very many if any at all so i feel lizz gets this
structure - c-c: lizz was aight but kinda hard to read. it was cool but i think c-c's was better. no hate
vocab - c-c: this was a pretty close one. lizz had a few good words but c-c's was a lil better
overall - c-c: not a bad battle. weak. but not bad.
be sure to hit the battle in my sig. p'z
vote - c-c
ehh B Lizzard & were even but il go with Lizzard cos u had gay lines like mushie tushie
Punches=L
mutlis=C
Vocab=L
Flow=L
Crativty=C
Read new voting rules.. out of all people you should know them.. Vote gone -Token
Last edited by Token; January 3rd, 2004 at 01:29 PM
Alright boys...
I say that crooked comical got this battle..
He had better structure, rode better in my head.
He had cool punches but actually he got beat in this category..
Crooked just had a lot of constant punches and a lot less filler.(Taste great Less Filler!)
I say that you both need a lil elevation but I definitely like the progress... keep repping boys
I took my time so....keep it gangsta!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103514
Ya Yall Have Seen me Around Here .. I Admit This Was A Weak Battle .. This guy Is So whack i Didnt Even Wanna Respond .. But
Instead Of No Showing I Just Whipped Out Some Lines .. Blah ..
This Was A Whack Battle .. I Seen His Verse And Didnt Feel Like Trying
Pretty Bad Im merking Him And Didnt Even Try
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