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    ~First Post~..Here..

    In between the limbs of now and then,
    I limbo according to the pre-calculated hinges that secure
    my suspension in empty space;
    I walk on the bridge of troubled winds- colliding with
    the storms of eager anger, pushing my glide into turbulent
    maneuvers just to keep my head afloat;
    But I tumble down past the secular catastrophe
    into mounds of consistent contortion,
    where I see things in picasso's angles,
    Twisted and portruding into an unrecognizable soothing
    act of strange,
    I am here endowed with long braids of intricate vision,
    crackling as my footsteps tread fire in my haste to catch the other end
    of what I've weaved,
    I am a circular apphiphany but still a line who can't retrieve it's beginning, always chasing the vacant streams of thought
    unknowing the answer is where I once brought myself to see;
    Now I overlook the bareen stumps that were once ample trees in my forest,
    Now the fruits lay rotten, browned by a scorching sun and foul air,
    the flies suckle on my neglected landscape,
    and I suffer beneath their constant nibbling at what I have to offer;
    I am old with the rancid stench of disamusement;
    confused in the parallels of existence inside my head--
    I was once dead in my plights of new birth,
    Now, I haven't even reached for my spirit or nurtured it with song;
    I've let it succomb to the meaningless works of human hands--
    God has eluded me because I've closed my eyes and walked with the wicked--
    but today faith brushed against my cheek....
    and I was reminded...

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    replied to: Da nfamous
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    this was a good piece..i had to read it twice to really understand but it wouldnt be poetry without a deep outlook..i dont have much advice caws i cant picture it being written any diff..keep up the good work..
    my head is clouded with senseless doubt
    but this seems to be my only escape route
    so ill slither my way across the ground
    to avoid my blyndedsoul from being found
    ~*~YOU LIVE YOU LEARN~*~

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