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Thread: My Life: You Strong Enough?!

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    My Life: You Strong Enough?!

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    Mine is the life like no other, no brothers, losin' family and friends
    Look as my point of view bends, but yall never see outta my lens
    Got cops searchin', strip seachin' and learkin' around for drugs
    "Nigga, you best get off of me, before I unlock a round of slugs"
    Hearts always pumpin', producin' blood to the veins, blood stains
    Unleach a steel chain to whip the insanity out of they insane brain
    So used to this, below the windows when the black pistol unloads
    Chest with bullet holes that cant get sown, blown kidney stones
    Broken door handles, niggas rockin' no brand sandles, no socks
    Two glocks in the pocket, unleash a shot, blow off a arm socket
    Pregnant 12 year old sluts, 200 grown mean tappin' they butts
    Pussy wide enough to fit 5 dump trucks, streach marks and cuts
    No TV cable, niggas be lucky if they got a food table to eat off on
    Kids askin' "whats a dot com?", no computers, not even a phone
    Sellin' drugs at 8, to all adults, they just bait on they dinner plate
    No space when you walk out of ya gate...yeah gate, no faith
    Rollin' up in '76 Cadillacs, got tire tracks across body that lay flat
    Metal baseball bats, not hittin' balls, maybe heads that disattach
    This my hood, if you could would you stay and eat mush with me
    No TV, but believe me, I have good times, wouldnt yall agree
    Nah, dont play dumb, where yall probably from, yall never come
    Livin' with bums, eatin' off tums with no indigestion...just for lunch
    Niggas die everyday in my hall, heads fall, then niggas try to crawl
    It against the law, should be when blood splats from wall to wall
    Police get scared to even roll past my street, 3 am, still no peace
    Fall asleep to rap beats, so much disease, cant hardly breathe
    So after you know about my crib, you think you wont get slit?!
    Aint about ya fat lip, ya broken rib...see if ya strong enough to live

    Something quick...basically off the top of my head.
    Last edited by it's GQ; December 19th, 2003 at 09:01 PM

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    NOW THATS SOME RAW ILLNESS AND WHAT I EXPECTED FROM A YONKERS THUG THAT SHIT IS ILL SON.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Yeah i agree this was a real good piece here.....i enjoyed the read....your structure was real nice.....i liked the emotion in this piece, i was feeling that...i liked the flow, it stayed on in this, didnt really get off...overall this was a good piece...keep at it.

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    Aight, thanks for the comments. Uppin' for more comments.

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    Uppin' on this one more time.

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    Yo man that was ill as hell!!!!!!! I liked the structure and the wordplay and shit ...............good job...............keep that shit up homie....

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    ^^^No dout, still Uppin'.

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    nice work here.....ya got some talent there......really got going....tight drop....keep spitting the rawness....pZ
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    ^^^Wow, weakest reply I've ever seen. Ahha.

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    Arrrhhh, more comments.

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    You got mad skills son dont lose em. Stay up!
    SOUP

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    ^^^Another cheap ass reply, ahha. Thanks though.

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    dope - feelin the emotion

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    ^^^3rd in a row!!! Ahha, can people please write enough to give me advise?!

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    Ape, this was some Ill Shit hommie. That is all I can really say, everything was set at a good pace. Nice drop hommie, real nice.

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