Week 7 - Contendership: Yung Ghost 3-0 vs B.Nesse

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5 Voting Links Required

Due Dates:
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Verses - due Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Voting Ends - Sunday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.

If you check in after Wednesday, 11:59PM Eastern Time with no notification,
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If you drop your verse after Friday, 11:59 Eastern Time with no notification,
you will be considered a no-show.

10-30 lines
Always match whoever drops first.
Feeding = DQ

Don't Sway or Bitch... you will be punished.

No picture battles, unless agreed upon.

Good Luck!

[Nashvillain]

check.

16?

[B.Nesse]

linkz:
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2
3
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5

[Nashvillain]

went 18.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-l-341667.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-341671p2.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ep-341665.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...tf-341666.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ce-341672.html

[Nashvillain]

i usually dont hit bitches but


now im a man that loves cars, and i can spot it every time
it seems like your verses are rode the way we scion every line
i can give you props in many ways, but saying your dope is a reach
so Nesse youve got balls.... and thats not just a figure of speech
the cops have you as a buddy, but round my way narcs we slaughter
she such a golden snitch she needs to be featured in the new harry potter
no upper body no tits the slut dont even look like a bitch,fuck..
not to mention your torso....
...badly from my hits theres no way of bein stiched up
we all know your scared of me, if i made a bitch slaped u be retrieting foo
but the only time you make a call out... is to 911 when im beating you
got beat in that 3 way champ match, give it up u suck dude
how can u be gay...
when u were in a 3 way wit 2 dudes and they both fucked u?
while were on that tip, we all know u aint gay so fuck wat u say ock
cuz its not hard for nesse not to jump the gun.. when the slut stay cocked
how are you in a contendership when you know u cant fuck wit the best
but if worse comes to worse.... that would just be nesse battling nesse
so before i off you, let's hear your last words before i get pissed
cuz it looks like you got something on ya mind...
...NVM thats just the imprints from the back of my fist

[B.Nesse]

ha...

son's just a pussy whipped loser with no skills, who'll never be ill
so ya best bet's a good foot.. followed by a mean walk in dem heels
this hi-jack ass loser got us all shocked, stunned by the flawless rec
but if the bad outweighs the good.. ur seriously PUSHIN towards death
quit takin back steps, your a ghost but damn y re-live a past act?
'specially after elevating in jr LAST season.. jus to end up right back
it's funnie to me, 'cos while these faggets predictin u over me, i'm...
aware that ya name's foreshadowin ya punches,
...s'why they fade in & out lines

yung ghost Vs. dj... (LLL votes ONLY!)
yung ghost Vs. Ghunz. (LLL and JR votes only!!)
yung ghost Vs Advisory (LLL & JR VOTES ONLY)

your a sucker for front lines, so i'm guessin ur here for the fuck of it
'cos u haven't moved up... yet u force LLL'er's to vote on all ya shit
i'ma Akon terd, takin over this shit since you ain ready to spar bitch
PS: this battle's so over,easy... mod's accused me of bein Lethargic
ghost is free to boast on a good day, he finally got the swag down
but as the going gets tough... he'll fight to stay where he's at now
no elevation'll move you...ur stuck to Jr. like his Wife & Kid, so deal
'cos 30's the new 20.. n ya rec's jus irony for "ur as Yung as u feel"
dude's happy he's battlin me, got his panty's in ah permanent twist
my verse a 2-in-1 strap-on...
...the way u've been fucked front to back by it

blah, mi no kare...gotta work...1z

[Wyla]

now im a man that loves cars, and i can spot it every time
it seems like your verses are rode the way we scion every line
ok
i can give you props in many ways, but saying your dope is a reach
so Nesse youve got balls.... and thats not just a figure of speech
meh
the cops have you as a buddy, but round my way narcs we slaughter
she such a golden snitch she needs to be featured in the new harry potter
l0l ok
no upper body no tits the slut dont even look like a bitch,fuck..
not to mention your torso....
...badly from my hits theres no way of bein stiched up
wording fuck this up
we all know your scared of me, if i made a bitch slaped u be retrieting foo
but the only time you make a call out... is to 911 when im beating you
nah
got beat in that 3 way champ match, give it up u suck dude
how can u be gay...
when u were in a 3 way wit 2 dudes and they both fucked u?
iight pretty cool
while were on that tip, we all know u aint gay so fuck wat u say ock
cuz its not hard for nesse not to jump the gun.. when the slut stay cocked
decent
how are you in a contendership when you know u cant fuck wit the best
but if worse comes to worse.... that would just be nesse battling nesse
ok, wording could have helped but still ok
so before i off you, let's hear your last words before i get pissed
cuz it looks like you got something on ya mind...
...NVM thats just the imprints from the back of my fist
iight

6 good lines and 1 meh line

vs




son's just a pussy whipped loser with no skills, who'll never be ill
so ya best bet's a good foot.. followed by a mean walk in dem heels
meh, ok i guess...wasnt really feeling this
this hi-jack ass loser got us all shocked, stunned by the flawless rec
but if the bad outweighs the good.. ur seriously PUSHIN towards death
ok
quit takin back steps, your a ghost but damn y re-live a past act?
'specially after elevating in jr LAST season.. jus to end up right back
nah, not harsh n played
it's funnie to me, 'cos while these faggets predictin u over me, i'm...
aware that ya name's foreshadowin ya punches,
...s'why they fade in & out lines
ok
your a sucker for front lines, so i'm guessin ur here for the fuck of it
'cos u haven't moved up... yet u force LLL'er's to vote on all ya shit
meh, not harsh
i'ma Akon terd, takin over this shit since you ain ready to spar bitch
PS: this battle's so over,easy... mod's accused me of bein Lethargic
ok, wording kinda fucked but ok still
ghost is free to boast on a good day, he finally got the swag down
but as the going gets tough... he'll fight to stay where he's at now
iight
no elevation'll move you...ur stuck to Jr. like his Wife & Kid, so deal
'cos 30's the new 20.. n ya rec's jus irony for "ur as Yung as u feel"
wasnt feeling this
dude's happy he's battlin me, got his panty's in ah permanent twist
my verse a 2-in-1 strap-on...
...the way u've been fucked front to back by it
ok

5 ok lines and 2 meh lines

Pretty decent battle here, but i got to go with yung ghost for harder punches and he barely edged this out. props on a good battle both of you

[Cred]

now im a man that loves cars, and i can spot it every time
it seems like your verses are rode the way we scion every line
lol.. cool
i can give you props in many ways, but saying your dope is a reach
so Nesse youve got balls.... and thats not just a figure of speech
meh..
the cops have you as a buddy, but round my way narcs we slaughter
she such a golden snitch she needs to be featured in the new harry potter
lol.. nice
no upper body no tits the slut dont even look like a bitch,fuck..
not to mention your torso....
...badly from my hits theres no way of bein stiched up
nice..
we all know your scared of me, if i made a bitch slaped u be retrieting foo
but the only time you make a call out... is to 911 when im beating you
meh.. wording was off
got beat in that 3 way champ match, give it up u suck dude
how can u be gay...
when u were in a 3 way wit 2 dudes and they both fucked u?
naw.. wasn't feelin it
while were on that tip, we all know u aint gay so fuck wat u say ock
cuz its not hard for nesse not to jump the gun.. when the slut stay cocked
lol... cool
how are you in a contendership when you know u cant fuck wit the best
but if worse comes to worse.... that would just be nesse battling nesse
lol... niceness
so before i off you, let's hear your last words before i get pissed
cuz it looks like you got something on ya mind...
...NVM thats just the imprints from the back of my fist
naw played closer.. and hell'a stretched

vs

son's just a pussy whipped loser with no skills, who'll never be ill
so ya best bet's a good foot.. followed by a mean walk in dem heels
lol... ok
this hi-jack ass loser got us all shocked, stunned by the flawless rec
but if the bad outweighs the good.. ur seriously PUSHIN towards death
ok..
quit takin back steps, your a ghost but damn y re-live a past act?
'specially after elevating in jr LAST season.. jus to end up right back
lol... nice
it's funnie to me, 'cos while these faggets predictin u over me, i'm...
aware that ya name's foreshadowin ya punches,
...s'why they fade in & out lines
meh... wordin' was off
your a sucker for front lines, so i'm guessin ur here for the fuck of it
'cos u haven't moved up... yet u force LLL'er's to vote on all ya shit
decent at most
i'ma Akon terd, takin over this shit since you ain ready to spar bitch
PS: this battle's so over,easy... mod's accused me of bein Lethargic
ok..
ghost is free to boast on a good day, he finally got the swag down
but as the going gets tough... he'll fight to stay where he's at now
ok..
no elevation'll move you...ur stuck to Jr. like his Wife & Kid, so deal
'cos 30's the new 20.. n ya rec's jus irony for "ur as Yung as u feel"
mehish..
dude's happy he's battlin me, got his panty's in ah permanent twist
my verse a 2-in-1 strap-on...
...the way u've been fucked front to back by it
lol... cool

this is definately gonn'a be the battle of the week. both had some shit that made me laugh. both verse's were pretty dope. yung had some dope shit and i thought he came more consistent then nesse. i wasn't expecting nesse to drop as good as she did but she proved me wrong. lol... i have to say this was definately a nice battle by both. but yung edged this out here. so..

vote - yung ghost

[Nashvillain]

2-0

good battle keep the votes coming.

[JDoe]

now im a man that loves cars, and i can spot it every time
it seems like your verses are rode the way we scion every line
ok.
i can give you props in many ways, but saying your dope is a reach
so Nesse youve got balls.... and thats not just a figure of speech
ok.
the cops have you as a buddy, but round my way narcs we slaughter
she such a golden snitch she needs to be featured in the new harry potter
meh k
no upper body no tits the slut dont even look like a bitch,fuck..
not to mention your torso....
...badly from my hits theres no way of bein stiched up
ok.
we all know your scared of me, if i made a bitch slaped u be retrieting foo
but the only time you make a call out... is to 911 when im beating you
ok.
got beat in that 3 way champ match, give it up u suck dude
how can u be gay...
when u were in a 3 way wit 2 dudes and they both fucked u?
ha ok.
while were on that tip, we all know u aint gay so fuck wat u say ock
cuz its not hard for nesse not to jump the gun.. when the slut stay cocked
ok.
how are you in a contendership when you know u cant fuck wit the best
but if worse comes to worse.... that would just be nesse battling nesse
ok.
so before i off you, let's hear your last words before i get pissed
cuz it looks like you got something on ya mind...
...NVM thats just the imprints from the back of my fist
ok.

vs.

son's just a pussy whipped loser with no skills, who'll never be ill
so ya best bet's a good foot.. followed by a mean walk in dem heels
ok.
this hi-jack ass loser got us all shocked, stunned by the flawless rec
but if the bad outweighs the good.. ur seriously PUSHIN towards death
ok.
quit takin back steps, your a ghost but damn y re-live a past act?
'specially after elevating in jr LAST season.. jus to end up right back
ok.
it's funnie to me, 'cos while these faggets predictin u over me, i'm...
aware that ya name's foreshadowin ya punches,
...s'why they fade in & out lines
meh k

yung ghost Vs. dj... (LLL votes ONLY!)
yung ghost Vs. Ghunz. (LLL and JR votes only!!)
yung ghost Vs Advisory (LLL & JR VOTES ONLY)

your a sucker for front lines, so i'm guessin ur here for the fuck of it
'cos u haven't moved up... yet u force LLL'er's to vote on all ya shit
lol ok.
i'ma Akon terd, takin over this shit since you ain ready to spar bitch
PS: this battle's so over,easy... mod's accused me of bein Lethargic
nah.
ghost is free to boast on a good day, he finally got the swag down
but as the going gets tough... he'll fight to stay where he's at now
ok.
no elevation'll move you...ur stuck to Jr. like his Wife & Kid, so deal
'cos 30's the new 20.. n ya rec's jus irony for "ur as Yung as u feel"
nah.
dude's happy he's battlin me, got his panty's in ah permanent twist
my verse a 2-in-1 strap-on...
...the way u've been fucked front to back by it
ok.

*This battle was really close...but i have to say Ghost edged with consistency...Nesse had a couple i wasnt feelin...

V/Ghost

[Antonio Banderas]

now im a man that loves cars, and i can spot it every time
it seems like your verses are rode the way we scion every line
Nice opener

i can give you props in many ways, but saying your dope is a reach
so Nesse youve got balls.... and thats not just a figure of speech
barely descent, the figure of speech line in RB's quotables is executed better

the cops have you as a buddy, but round my way narcs we slaughter
she such a golden snitch she needs to be featured in the new harry potter
Nice

no upper body no tits the slut dont even look like a bitch,fuck..
not to mention your torso....
...badly from my hits theres no way of bein stiched up
creative, nicely executed

we all know your scared of me, if i made a bitch slaped u be retrieting foo
but the only time you make a call out... is to 911 when im beating you
descent

got beat in that 3 way champ match, give it up u suck dude
how can u be gay...
when u were in a 3 way wit 2 dudes and they both fucked u?
Creative, but as a personal she did better than Advisory so this barely hit

while were on that tip, we all know u aint gay so fuck wat u say ock
cuz its not hard for nesse not to jump the gun.. when the slut stay cocked
Nice

how are you in a contendership when you know u cant fuck wit the best
but if worse comes to worse.... that would just be nesse battling nesse
descent

so before i off you, let's hear your last words before i get pissed
cuz it looks like you got something on ya mind...
...NVM thats just the imprints from the back of my fist
Nice closer

--------------------

son's just a pussy whipped loser with no skills, who'll never be ill
so ya best bet's a good foot.. followed by a mean walk in dem heels
descent opener

this hi-jack ass loser got us all shocked, stunned by the flawless rec
but if the bad outweighs the good.. ur seriously PUSHIN towards death
descent

quit takin back steps, your a ghost but damn y re-live a past act?
'specially after elevating in jr LAST season.. jus to end up right back
descent

it's funnie to me, 'cos while these faggets predictin u over me, i'm...
aware that ya name's foreshadowin ya punches,
...s'why they fade in & out lines
barely descent

yung ghost Vs. dj... (LLL votes ONLY!)
yung ghost Vs. Ghunz. (LLL and JR votes only!!)
yung ghost Vs Advisory (LLL & JR VOTES ONLY)

your a sucker for front lines, so i'm guessin ur here for the fuck of it
'cos u haven't moved up... yet u force LLL'er's to vote on all ya shit
I didnt feel this was hard enough, barely descent

i'ma Akon terd, takin over this shit since you ain ready to spar bitch
PS: this battle's so over,easy... mod's accused me of bein Lethargic
barely descent

ghost is free to boast on a good day, he finally got the swag down
but as the going gets tough... he'll fight to stay where he's at now
Nice

no elevation'll move you...ur stuck to Jr. like his Wife & Kid, so deal
'cos 30's the new 20.. n ya rec's jus irony for "ur as Yung as u feel"
Nice

dude's happy he's battlin me, got his panty's in ah permanent twist
my verse a 2-in-1 strap-on...
...the way u've been fucked front to back by it
barely descent

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I got Young Ghost taking this battle. This was another good effort by B Nesse who definitely is one of the better battlers in LLL JR.


Vote - Young Ghost

[JIST]

young ghost

more consistent with his verse and funnier lines

sorry nesse

[Lawd]

iight battle

ghost- ya verse was iight but the word play that u had in ya verse was played, u came with some iight punches but ur wording was off at times n' there was some but that could have been nice if u fliped it or worded it better but iight verse like i said

nesse- ur verse was ok u were coming out good in the beginning with some ok punches then it seemed after LLL voters line u started to fall off a bit, but the difference between ur verse n' his is that u had more ok personals then iight punches but keep working at it

this was a ok battle both came iight/good so i'ma say

V/nesse, for her personals

[Warming]

now im a man that loves cars, and i can spot it every time
it seems like your verses are rode the way we scion every line
[ok]
i can give you props in many ways, but saying your dope is a reach
so Nesse youve got balls.... and thats not just a figure of speech
[nah]
the cops have you as a buddy, but round my way narcs we slaughter
she such a golden snitch she needs to be featured in the new harry potter
[corny, awkward wording]
no upper body no tits the slut dont even look like a bitch,fuck..
not to mention your torso....
...badly from my hits theres no way of bein stiched up
[meh, mad choppy w/ awkward wp]
we all know your scared of me, if i made a bitch slaped u be retrieting foo
but the only time you make a call out... is to 911 when im beating you
[meh]
got beat in that 3 way champ match, give it up u suck dude
how can u be gay...
when u were in a 3 way wit 2 dudes and they both fucked u?
[didn't like]
while were on that tip, we all know u aint gay so fuck wat u say ock
cuz its not hard for nesse not to jump the gun.. when the slut stay cocked
[ok]
how are you in a contendership when you know u cant fuck wit the best
but if worse comes to worse.... that would just be nesse battling nesse
[meh]
so before i off you, let's hear your last words before i get pissed
cuz it looks like you got something on ya mind...
...NVM thats just the imprints from the back of my fist
[stretched, otherwise ok flip]

overall: ok overall, i think you used too many sex lines though

vs

ha...

son's just a pussy whipped loser with no skills, who'll never be ill
so ya best bet's a good foot.. followed by a mean walk in dem heels
[meh, could use a stronger setup]
this hi-jack ass loser got us all shocked, stunned by the flawless rec
but if the bad outweighs the good.. ur seriously PUSHIN towards death
[meh, a bit played]
quit takin back steps, your a ghost but damn y re-live a past act?
'specially after elevating in jr LAST season.. jus to end up right back
[ok]
it's funnie to me, 'cos while these faggets predictin u over me, i'm...
aware that ya name's foreshadowin ya punches,
...s'why they fade in & out lines
[the way you structured this ruined it for me, it was too long and the pauses were in unnatural places, without those it could be an ok punch]
yung ghost Vs. dj... (LLL votes ONLY!)
yung ghost Vs. Ghunz. (LLL and JR votes only!!)
yung ghost Vs Advisory (LLL & JR VOTES ONLY)

your a sucker for front lines, so i'm guessin ur here for the fuck of it
'cos u haven't moved up... yet u force LLL'er's to vote on all ya shit
[weak statement- the concept wasn't used as an effective personal.. if could have been funny if it was like... if they wanted to read your shit.. oh wait your battling here kind of thing]
i'ma Akon terd, takin over this shit since you ain ready to spar bitch
PS: this battle's so over,easy... mod's accused me of bein Lethargic
[better than above but still reads like a forced personal]
ghost is free to boast on a good day, he finally got the swag down
but as the going gets tough... he'll fight to stay where he's at now
[decent]
no elevation'll move you...ur stuck to Jr. like his Wife & Kid, so deal
'cos 30's the new 20.. n ya rec's jus irony for "ur as Yung as u feel"
[blah]
dude's happy he's battlin me, got his panty's in ah permanent twist
my verse a 2-in-1 strap-on...
...the way u've been fucked front to back by it
[meh.. wasn't really feeling this]

overall: overall decent, made a good effort, backfired when you tried too hard on some of the personals though

this was a real tough battle to call, both of you had a couple of pretty hard lines but i think ghost just edged it

v/ yung ghost

[Mr.Mal]

now im a man that loves cars, and i can spot it every time
it seems like your verses are rode the way we scion every line
^^lol cool
i can give you props in many ways, but saying your dope is a reach
so Nesse youve got balls.... and thats not just a figure of speech
^^meh, played
the cops have you as a buddy, but round my way narcs we slaughter
she such a golden snitch she needs to be featured in the new harry potter
^^this was good
no upper body no tits the slut dont even look like a bitch,fuck..
not to mention your torso....
...badly from my hits theres no way of bein stiched up
^^ yea ok
we all know your scared of me, if i made a bitch slaped u be retrieting foo
but the only time you make a call out... is to 911 when im beating you
^^nah man, wasnt feelin this
got beat in that 3 way champ match, give it up u suck dude
how can u be gay...
when u were in a 3 way wit 2 dudes and they both fucked u?
^^ i see wot u tried doin but you can still be gay in a three way threesome dude. wording ruined the punche and the set up pretty much di the same. gets a no from me
while were on that tip, we all know u aint gay so fuck wat u say ock
cuz its not hard for nesse not to jump the gun.. when the slut stay cocked
^^lol ok
how are you in a contendership when you know u cant fuck wit the best
but if worse comes to worse.... that would just be nesse battling nesse
^^ yea decent
so before i off you, let's hear your last words before i get pissed
cuz it looks like you got something on ya mind...
...NVM thats just the imprints from the back of my fist
^^ ok

vs


son's just a pussy whipped loser with no skills, who'll never be ill
so ya best bet's a good foot.. followed by a mean walk in dem heels
^^ haha good
this hi-jack ass loser got us all shocked, stunned by the flawless rec
but if the bad outweighs the good.. ur seriously PUSHIN towards death
^^ yea cool
quit takin back steps, your a ghost but damn y re-live a past act?
'specially after elevating in jr LAST season.. jus to end up right back
^^ nah aint really feelin this
it's funnie to me, 'cos while these faggets predictin u over me, i'm...
aware that ya name's foreshadowin ya punches,
...s'why they fade in & out lines
^^ ok punch
yung ghost Vs. dj... (LLL votes ONLY!)
yung ghost Vs. Ghunz. (LLL and JR votes only!!)
yung ghost Vs Advisory (LLL & JR VOTES ONLY)

your a sucker for front lines, so i'm guessin ur here for the fuck of it
'cos u haven't moved up... yet u force LLL'er's to vote on all ya shit
^^ meh, weak to me
i'ma Akon terd, takin over this shit since you ain ready to spar bitch
PS: this battle's so over,easy... mod's accused me of bein Lethargic
^^ lol decent
ghost is free to boast on a good day, he finally got the swag down
but as the going gets tough... he'll fight to stay where he's at now
^^ haha thoguht this was cool man
no elevation'll move you...ur stuck to Jr. like his Wife & Kid, so deal
'cos 30's the new 20.. n ya rec's jus irony for "ur as Yung as u feel"
^^ wording fucked this up man, not felin
dude's happy he's battlin me, got his panty's in ah permanent twist
my verse a 2-in-1 strap-on...
...the way u've been fucked front to back by it
^^ weak closer

v// ghost as i just feel he had one bar over your verse nesse man, you could have won this if you finished much stronger cause i felt your last 2 bars had potential. i nthe other hand i felt you did just enough her ghost to take the win although i think some of your punches could have been worded better.

decent battle here guy/ lady