20 lines
Due tonight
Checks due tonight
blah blah blah
Lay Doubt.
-Twizted-
20 lines
Due tonight
Checks due tonight
blah blah blah
Twizted's Verse
Quit frontin' like you got friends, the truth makes lay not wanna live
Fact is lay's even a loaner, when he's got no money to give
Jesus bitch, LD can't stand losing... you drink so much I'm dying
But you still sway more than half your drunken buddies driving.
And you'll never get bitches like me... you still cry and pout
About how all the girls need you... in the nuts when you asked 'em out
All your battles fake, I heard a lot of dope heads left ya crew in a sec, herb
Well I know 0 - like 74893274 is impossible, unless we talking ya real record
Fuck lookin' up dresses for cleavage, role model? shut the hell up 'for I get pushy
Look we all know every kid looks up to Lay D... in attempts to get pics of pussy
Sayin' you steal from peeps, I dont believe it. Matter fact that shits obserd...
Cuz we all know in this life you aint jack shit... lol.... word.
No one learns shit from your wack verses. teachin' aint an excuse to duck
We all beggin' for you to lesson them lines, please do cuz they stretched as fuck
Mom does everything for you fag. Kiss ya pains goodbye, this time I wont letter
So watch as I leave Lay Torso bad his moms'll have to stroke it better.
N' I'm sorry 'bout ya site beef.. It's sad as hell, quit fightin' wit' spit lay
It's aight tho, eventually ya'll kiss n' make up.... Fuckin' crossdressers these days.
All these bitches thinkin' you got dope concepts.. Shit, you aint even clever
See I'd give you the benefit of the doubt but there aint been one since........ ever.
Last edited by Le Marv.; November 8th, 2005 at 10:01 PM
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Lay Doubt's Verse
wow @ you restarting w.o.w.
you know it's mine bitch, you're the saddest guy in denial
stealing my old crews? wtf.. you weren't satisifed with my style?
.
.
you can go ahead and bring your boys, i'll fuckin blast ya crew
i mean just think about it.. nvm, that's way too much to ask of you
i'm smashin dude, a vet who's 15? no way this foo here's sick
cuz you've only been able to son kids for about two years bitch
keep pretendin like you know shit, but we ain't admittin ya gifted
you understand the win? that just means you ain't gettin it Twizted
started audio so i peeped n' you ain't as hood as doubt bitch
n' i'd congratulate you.. if there was actually something good about it
but i gotta admit it stunned me, not cuz your verse was best
it's cuz ya actually found something you do even WORSE than text
try backing up your ego for real because you suck at bluffing
your trash talk is like ya sig.. looks cool but still adds up to nothing
wankster faggot, tired of the front when you're losin in rapping
so if your verses gets props.. it's cuz we know you use em for acting
heard bout ya moms kickin you out, i know it's awful n' hurts
but it ain't got shit on the pain ya mom had when she saw you at birth
ugly motherfucker, keep on actin hard with a knife like it helps
when all i gotta do is give you a mirror n' you'll start slicin YOURSELF
off my nuts. pzez.
Last edited by Le Marv.; November 8th, 2005 at 09:59 PM
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Twizted's Verse
Quit frontin' like you got friends, the truth makes lay not wanna live
Fact is lay's even a loaner, when he's got no money to give
^ok.....
Jesus bitch, LD can't stand losing... you drink so much I'm dying
But you still sway more than half your drunken buddies driving.
^Wack......
And you'll never get bitches like me... you still cry and pout
About how all the girls need you... in the nuts when you asked 'em out
^2nd line was ok, good use of words/imagenation..
All your battles fake, I heard a lot of dope heads left ya crew in a sec, herb
Well I know 0 - like 74893274 is impossible, unless we talking ya real record
^Blah...
Fuck lookin' up dresses for cleavage, role model? shut the hell up 'for I get pushy
Look we all know every kid looks up to Lay D... in attempts to get pics of pussy
^Played...
Sayin' you steal from peeps, I dont believe it. Matter fact that shits obserd...
Cuz we all know in this life you aint jack shit... lol.... word.
^Filler...
No one learns shit from your wack verses. teachin' aint an excuse to duck
We all beggin' for you to lesson them lines, please do cuz they stretched as fuck
^So...?
Mom does everything for you fag. Kiss ya pains goodbye, this time I wont letter
So watch as I leave Lay Torso bad his moms'll have to stroke it better.
^Wack...
N' I'm sorry 'bout ya site beef.. It's sad as hell, quit fightin' wit' spit lay
It's aight tho, eventually ya'll kiss n' make up.... Fuckin' crossdressers these days.
^WTF...... wack....
All these bitches thinkin' you got dope concepts.. Shit, you aint even clever
See I'd give you the benefit of the doubt but there aint been one since........ ever.
ok....
Overall... Better than most dukes text, but I'm not really impressed..
I'm sure you can do better... And I'm sure you know what ur missing...
Lay doubt hit with better flow overall, and better punches... punches were ok, good to go... I'm sure he could do better tho. Personals were hitting ok..
blah... decent verse......
v.... LD
upps to both...
Stay Up..
1
Masked & Murderous
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^ I guess lay's the only dude who gets my personals on him. Wtf @ people that never vote NEAR my battles voting now.
Why dont you do me a favor and vote on more of 'em? You fucking whores. Get out.
Lay, Id hate ta do this to ya, but this is how its goin down.
Twiz.
Quit frontin' like you got friends, the truth makes lay not wanna live
Fact is lay's even a loaner, when he's got no money to give
good.
Jesus bitch, LD can't stand losing... you drink so much I'm dying
But you still sway more than half your drunken buddies driving.
rofl.
And you'll never get bitches like me... you still cry and pout
About how all the girls need you... in the nuts when you asked 'em out
nah.
All your battles fake, I heard a lot of dope heads left ya crew in a sec, herb
Well I know 0 - like 74893274 is impossible, unless we talking ya real record
gay.
Fuck lookin' up dresses for cleavage, role model? shut the hell up 'for I get pushy
Look we all know every kid looks up to Lay D... in attempts to get pics of pussy
alright.
Sayin' you steal from peeps, I dont believe it. Matter fact that shits obserd...
Cuz we all know in this life you aint jack shit... lol.... word.
lmfao.
No one learns shit from your wack verses. teachin' aint an excuse to duck
We all beggin' for you to lesson them lines, please do cuz they stretched as fuck
eh.
Mom does everything for you fag. Kiss ya pains goodbye, this time I wont letter
So watch as I leave Lay Torso bad his moms'll have to stroke it better.
stupid.
N' I'm sorry 'bout ya site beef.. It's sad as hell, quit fightin' wit' spit lay
It's aight tho, eventually ya'll kiss n' make up.... Fuckin' crossdressers these days.
aight.
All these bitches thinkin' you got dope concepts.. Shit, you aint even clever
See I'd give you the benefit of the doubt but there aint been one since........ ever.
kinda played, but nice flip.
vs
lay.
you know it's mine bitch, you're the saddest guy in denial
stealing my old crews? wtf.. you weren't satisifed with my style?
.
.
you can go ahead and bring your boys, i'll fuckin blast ya crew
i mean just think about it.. nvm, that's way too much to ask of you
dope.
i'm smashin dude, a vet who's 15? no way this foo here's sick
cuz you've only been able to son kids for about two years bitch
alright.
keep pretendin like you know shit, but we ain't admittin ya gifted
you understand the win? that just means you ain't gettin it Twizted
played, gay.
started audio so i peeped n' you ain't as hood as doubt bitch
n' i'd congratulate you.. if there was actually something good about it
aight.
but i gotta admit it stunned me, not cuz your verse was best
it's cuz ya actually found something you do even WORSE than text
i used this like, 2 years ago.
try backing up your ego for real because you suck at bluffing
your trash talk is like ya sig.. looks cool but still adds up to nothing
...nah
wankster faggot, tired of the front when you're losin in rapping
so if your verses gets props.. it's cuz we know you use em for acting
word.
heard bout ya moms kickin you out, i know it's awful n' hurts
but it ain't got shit on the pain ya mom had when she saw you at birth
playyedd.
ugly motherfucker, keep on actin hard with a knife like it helps
when all i gotta do is give you a mirror n' you'll start slicin YOURSELF
lol.
LOL @ shanks not breakin down lays verse, c'mon man, shitty vote.
it was close, but lay came played as a mother.
v/twizted, easily.
Twiztid
Quit frontin' like you got friends, the truth makes lay not wanna live
Fact is lay's even a loaner, when he's got no money to give
^^ lol nice
Jesus bitch, LD can't stand losing... you drink so much I'm dying
But you still sway more than half your drunken buddies driving.
^^ haha, sorta played cuz everyone says he gets drunk...but nice
And you'll never get bitches like me... you still cry and pout
About how all the girls need you... in the nuts when you asked 'em out
^^ lmao
All your battles fake, I heard a lot of dope heads left ya crew in a sec, herb
Well I know 0 - like 74893274 is impossible, unless we talking ya real record
^^ harsh.. I like harsh lol
Fuck lookin' up dresses for cleavage, role model? shut the hell up 'for I get pushy
Look we all know every kid looks up to Lay D... in attempts to get pics of pussy
^^ haha nice
Sayin' you steal from peeps, I dont believe it. Matter fact that shits obserd...
Cuz we all know in this life you aint jack shit... lol.... word.
^^ meh... sorta lacking compared to other punches
No one learns shit from your wack verses. teachin' aint an excuse to duck
We all beggin' for you to lesson them lines, please do cuz they stretched as fuck
^^ nah...
Mom does everything for you fag. Kiss ya pains goodbye, this time I wont letter
So watch as I leave Lay Torso bad his moms'll have to stroke it better.
^^lol ewwww
N' I'm sorry 'bout ya site beef.. It's sad as hell, quit fightin' wit' spit lay
It's aight tho, eventually ya'll kiss n' make up.... Fuckin' crossdressers these days.
^^ meh...
All these bitches thinkin' you got dope concepts.. Shit, you aint even clever
See I'd give you the benefit of the doubt but there aint been one since........ ever.
^^nice closer
a lil bit stretched but I liked how u kept it nearly consistent, I got u with 3 quoteables
Lay
you know it's mine bitch, you're the saddest guy in denial
stealing my old crews? wtf.. you weren't satisifed with my style?
^^ nice
you can go ahead and bring your boys, i'll fuckin blast ya crew
i mean just think about it.. nvm, that's way too much to ask of you
^^ lmao had me laughing for a bit
i'm smashin dude, a vet who's 15? no way this foo here's sick
cuz you've only been able to son kids for about two years bitch
^^ haha puberty line lol
keep pretendin like you know shit, but we ain't admittin ya gifted
you understand the win? that just means you ain't gettin it Twizted
^^ meh...
started audio so i peeped n' you ain't as hood as doubt bitch
n' i'd congratulate you.. if there was actually something good about it
^^ nice personal, but lacking compared to others
but i gotta admit it stunned me, not cuz your verse was best
it's cuz ya actually found something you do even WORSE than text
^^ lol ok, but people have said that before...
try backing up your ego for real because you suck at bluffing
your trash talk is like ya sig.. looks cool but still adds up to nothing
^^ cool... but a sig punch?
wankster faggot, tired of the front when you're losin in rapping
so if your verses gets props.. it's cuz we know you use em for acting
^^ haha havent seen that before
heard bout ya moms kickin you out, i know it's awful n' hurts
but it ain't got shit on the pain ya mom had when she saw you at birth
^^ harsh lol
ugly motherfucker, keep on actin hard with a knife like it helps
when all i gotta do is give you a mirror n' you'll start slicin YOURSELF
^^ cool closer
Well I have seen better from u, and u slacked a lil bit in the middle but u did have a nice verse, I got u with 2 quoteables, really 1 but that 2nd bar had me laughing lol
Ok this was dope as hell, Lay u came hard and more consisntent then Twiz, but Twiz had some nicer disses in his verse, mostly u jsut said he was ugly and sucked at audio which I know u can do better than that, so V/ Twiztid for some better punches and hitting harder at times.
Great Battle guys
for real?
Been a real one.
^^yeah I just had him with a bit better lines yo
Twizted's Verse
Quit frontin' like you got friends, the truth makes lay not wanna live
Fact is lay's even a loaner, when he's got no money to give
^^heh ok pretty good
Jesus bitch, LD can't stand losing... you drink so much I'm dying
But you still sway more than half your drunken buddies driving.
^^ok not bad, personal
And you'll never get bitches like me... you still cry and pout
About how all the girls need you... in the nuts when you asked 'em out
^^heh not bad
All your battles fake, I heard a lot of dope heads left ya crew in a sec, herb
Well I know 0 - like 74893274 is impossible, unless we talking ya real record
^^nah, plus rhyme is weak
Fuck lookin' up dresses for cleavage, role model? shut the hell up 'for I get pushy
Look we all know every kid looks up to Lay D... in attempts to get pics of pussy
^^not feelin it
Sayin' you steal from peeps, I dont believe it. Matter fact that shits obserd...
Cuz we all know in this life you aint jack shit... lol.... word.
^^heh kinda played, not a bad flip
No one learns shit from your wack verses. teachin' aint an excuse to duck
We all beggin' for you to lesson them lines, please do cuz they stretched as fuck
^^s'ok but wordplay wasn't really logically connected well enough by the setup
Mom does everything for you fag. Kiss ya pains goodbye, this time I wont letter
So watch as I leave Lay Torso bad his moms'll have to stroke it better.
^^not too bad
N' I'm sorry 'bout ya site beef.. It's sad as hell, quit fightin' wit' spit lay
It's aight tho, eventually ya'll kiss n' make up.... Fuckin' crossdressers these days.
^^meh, didn't like how you tried to pull this one
All these bitches thinkin' you got dope concepts.. Shit, you aint even clever
See I'd give you the benefit of the doubt but there aint been one since........ ever.
^^benefit of the doubt punches have been used alot :-\ not a bad flip though
vs.
Lay Doubt's Verse
wow @ you restarting w.o.w.
you know it's mine bitch, you're the saddest guy in denial
stealing my old crews? wtf.. you weren't satisifed with my style?
^^hehe witty
.
you can go ahead and bring your boys, i'll fuckin blast ya crew
i mean just think about it.. nvm, that's way too much to ask of you
^^kinda meh, not too bad though
i'm smashin dude, a vet who's 15? no way this foo here's sick
cuz you've only been able to son kids for about two years bitch
^^heh ok I get what ya saying, coulda been worded better
keep pretendin like you know shit, but we ain't admittin ya gifted
you understand the win? that just means you ain't gettin it Twizted
^^actually this is pretty clever
started audio so i peeped n' you ain't as hood as doubt bitch
n' i'd congratulate you.. if there was actually something good about it
^^naaah
but i gotta admit it stunned me, not cuz your verse was best
it's cuz ya actually found something you do even WORSE than text
^^lol funny but a bit simple
try backing up your ego for real because you suck at bluffing
your trash talk is like ya sig.. looks cool but still adds up to nothing
^^meh
wankster faggot, tired of the front when you're losin in rapping
so if your verses gets props.. it's cuz we know you use em for acting
^^props/acting wordplay mad played, ok flip
heard bout ya moms kickin you out, i know it's awful n' hurts
but it ain't got shit on the pain ya mom had when she saw you at birth
^^blah!
ugly motherfucker, keep on actin hard with a knife like it helps
when all i gotta do is give you a mirror n' you'll start slicin YOURSELF
^^heh if the personal stuff is true this is harsh, not sure how true it is though, so ya only get half props, heh
actually I got this pretty even on punches, now y'all both know I always vote honest, so in this case it's gotta come down to secondary criteria like rhyming, flow and basically Twizted's lines were stretched in places and Doubt had nicer generally multi-syllable rhymes so overall I was feelin his verse more, even though punches were pretty even. So sorry Twiz, gotta go with Lay
v/Lay
Ex Calibur's vote un-explained..... poll 2-2
And to Ads.... I felt I had no reason to cover LD's verse breakdown.. So fuck off.
Masked & Murderous
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lmao at deleting my vote. why?
^^Well... If you happen to be ex calibur or what eva... a vote that consist of two sentences is not a vote at all..
i.e
blah took this battle cause blah had blah punches. blah blah came with blah, but the flow was blah blah blah.... good blah but blah was better...
Vote = Blah
~Shanks
Last edited by Dirty Shanks; November 9th, 2005 at 04:16 PM
Quit frontin' like you got friends, the truth makes lay not wanna live
Fact is lay's even a loaner, when he's got no money to give
Blah!
Jesus bitch, LD can't stand losing... you drink so much I'm dying
But you still sway more than half your drunken buddies driving.
Eh...very true at times...even if it ain't his battle, but kinda bad wording.
And you'll never get bitches like me... you still cry and pout
About how all the girls need you... in the nuts when you asked 'em out
Haha! Funny!
All your battles fake, I heard a lot of dope heads left ya crew in a sec, herb
Well I know 0 - like 74893274 is impossible, unless we talking ya real record
Blah!
Fuck lookin' up dresses for cleavage, role model? shut the hell up 'for I get pushy
Look we all know every kid looks up to Lay D... in attempts to get pics of pussy
Haha! Funny as fuck!
Sayin' you steal from peeps, I dont believe it. Matter fact that shits obserd...
Cuz we all know in this life you aint jack shit... lol.... word.
Eh...predictable, but nice-ish.
No one learns shit from your wack verses. teachin' aint an excuse to duck
We all beggin' for you to lesson them lines, please do cuz they stretched as fuck
Almost cute...
Mom does everything for you fag. Kiss ya pains goodbye, this time I wont letter
So watch as I leave Lay Torso bad his moms'll have to stroke it better.
Eh...decent at best...seen "torso" before...and I'm thinking, better.
N' I'm sorry 'bout ya site beef.. It's sad as hell, quit fightin' wit' spit lay
It's aight tho, eventually ya'll kiss n' make up.... Fuckin' crossdressers these days.
Blah! Get over the Spit shit...kid ain't even around anymore! PLAYED!
All these bitches thinkin' you got dope concepts.. Shit, you aint even clever
See I'd give you the benefit of the doubt but there aint been one since........ ever.
Eh...kinda seen this before too...
VS
you know it's mine bitch, you're the saddest guy in denial
stealing my old crews? wtf.. you weren't satisifed with my style?
SO fuckin played! You stole my style, Kap's style, Evolve's style...BLAH OPENER!
you can go ahead and bring your boys, i'll fuckin blast ya crew
i mean just think about it.. nvm, that's way too much to ask of you
Hehe!
i'm smashin dude, a vet who's 15? no way this foo here's sick
cuz you've only been able to son kids for about two years bitch
Eh...nice, but light.
keep pretendin like you know shit, but we ain't admittin ya gifted
you understand the win? that just means you ain't gettin it Twizted
He...funny.
started audio so i peeped n' you ain't as hood as doubt bitch
n' i'd congratulate you.. if there was actually something good about it
Eh...too statement-ish! Not enough wit.
but i gotta admit it stunned me, not cuz your verse was best
it's cuz ya actually found something you do even WORSE than text
Predictable and kinda played, but it still hits nice.
try backing up your ego for real because you suck at bluffing
your trash talk is like ya sig.. looks cool but still adds up to nothing
Hahahahahahaha! I like this one!
wankster faggot, tired of the front when you're losin in rapping
so if your verses gets props.. it's cuz we know you use em for acting
Eh...I see what you mean...nice, but yet...somehow still eh. Wording?
heard bout ya moms kickin you out, i know it's awful n' hurts
but it ain't got shit on the pain ya mom had when she saw you at birth
Decent...long on words though...
ugly motherfucker, keep on actin hard with a knife like it helps
when all i gotta do is give you a mirror n' you'll start slicin YOURSELF
Blah!
I dunno, this shit's pretty even...both had some nice shit...
But both had some whack, weak, and boring shit as well.
I think Lay had the best line of the battle...that "sig" hit was nice as fuck.
Eh...after re-reading shit...I think Lay BARELY, BARELY, BARELY...
Squeaked by.
Vote: Lay
Stop underestimating cats.
Peace
Last edited by Born To Kill; November 9th, 2005 at 04:35 PM
If you didn't notice, It's bitten. go peep mybattle vs. Kareless. He dropped before Lay and almost the same exact fucking line/concept.
^I checked, and.... How do you figure?
I see no proof from the battle with Brix..
~Shanks
lol, chea, I just read it... Looks like I was wrong about being bit. Blah. Still makes the sig joke played
Uh, ~Twiz
Last edited by -Twizted-; November 9th, 2005 at 05:36 PM
lmao.. we both used your sig, that doesn't make it a bite. oh, and i never even read his battle before i wrote my verse. just shut up for real. i didn't underestimate him born.. i just didn't feel like spending time on my verse. i didn't thought my verse was aiight anyway. it's coo tho.
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