Tre6Ohso Vs Skorp

[Skorp-Eon]

Due in one week
1:30-2:45 MAX
no feeding
no bitching/ swaying

LINKS::
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...427/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...17/index2.html

[Tre6Ohso]

me vs skorpy


this bitch keep askin bout da status of my verse
he'll know when its done cause he'll be underneath the dirt
underneath the ground or hes leavin wit a frown
im chillin sippin crown reppin for my town
brem city stand up tell this faggot take a seat
believen he could win is a leap of faith
he'll fuck around get smoked like swishas thats grape
battlin a rapper wit a swagga this great
im finna reel it in he done took da bait
you gotta be da dumbest fish swimmin in da lake
in dis game of twenty one i bust wit thirty eight
this bitch a witch and im da fire burnin at da stake
wit deese rhymes i create this lame i cremate
turn em into ash yay aint even gotta ask
lyrically im whoopin his ass
call dis a test n diss faggot wont pass
he wont survive wont last its not hard to grasp
ill write your verse for you if you pay cash
he'll pass cause he aint got dough
n he aint finna win cause he aint got flow
he gon do a track but i aint gon listen
to say that you could fathom him winnin u muss be kiddin
it only took five minutes to write what im spittin
ima get dis win outta da way i aint trippin
i refuse to give him more then a minute thirty
hes lucky dat he got dat bitch im in a hurry
i coulda said half of this n won wit no worry

[Skorp-Eon]

*Oso is a bear in spanish for you non spanish speaking people

Oh-so really got no reason to be gassed
fight this Oso with bear hands; he wouldn't leave a scratch
technically you haven beat anybody in a match
fuck a bear trap; winnie Pooh would beat this nigga's ass
im the conductor that'll run you over; you shouldn't be on a track
listen Ese, work on ya essays; got weak transitions from ya thesis to paragraphs
couldn't see him as a threat with a pair glasses on while he's holding a tech-
it aint close to being over yet; breathe into your hands; close them - hold ya breath
your clothes are the tightest thing about you i bet-
you get no respect from ya own set
leave him so upset like me when i spend all this money on a hoe and i get no sex
he got no heart/ to prove it i'll put a hole in his chest
hit em up pac style, no pm, you'll get message
not a close battle at all; like yoga; a stretch
things aint working out ; go get a bowflex
throw some holy water on him, since he's so possessed
life of the devil; surrounded by fire too bad ya flow isn't
i dont quack; never see me ducking battles
know i wont quit- you dont get a no-show
when im throwin punches, like coke addicts, you'll need a new nose
it's broken - but ya keep ya head up - dont give up
this pussy's scared of pussy, thats the only reason why he dont give a fuck
bury the hatchet along with this bastard, send him to hell but his soul's going up
I'll hurt his feelings, while he's bitching and opening up
a can whoop of ass is the only thing i'll open up
i peeped ya myspace and knew you sucked before the page finished loading up
I'll record with +20db just to put a ~clip in him~
put a clip in him soon as i finish loading up
you aint gangsta what the fuck you throwin up?
sipping on some weak shit that sixteen year old bitches drink ; now it got you throwin up
oh-so such a featherweight i can lift him and throw him up
im hard headed, you're soft headed; going head to head, your dome will get crushed
the best part of waking up is laying in bed right next to ya dame with folgers in my cup
you cant muster up the strength to go blow for blow; can't arm wrestle with no muscle
you fucked up on ya first take and couldn't even punch-in
you aint tough, couldn't crush a styrofoam cup
a bitch against a pitbull; end of discussion
he'll seize to exist; basically im dissing nothing
i would mention how he blows but he aint even stronger than a gust of wind
this battle is a breeze; shit; im flushing him


oh so cant keep up, i left him behind a long time ago/
you're so slow/i'll remove your brain from your skull, boy you must be out of your mind

[Tre6Ohso]

uppin, sup wit da votes

[Dramma20]

first things first... dunno if I gotta enuff status to vote but w/e ahha.
Both Tracks were gd, but Skorp's exceeded the max limit ....

BREAKDOWN:

Flow: Both had sick ass flow.

Multis: Couldn't Really see many... but sumone has to get this CAT. So... OHSO

Punches: Both Had Sick Punches N Weak Punches.

Wordplay: Skorp Had Sum Sick Wordplay.. As did OHSO but Skorp Stood Out more here.

Personals: I'ma Have to Go With Skorp On This On, OHSO coulda been dissin anyone.

Mic Pressence: Skorp Had More Mic Pressence, makin his track a bit more enjoyable n hardhittin.

Opener: OHSO, Congratz fam that opener worked sick wit this track pullin my attention of the bat.

Finisher: Skorp Kills The Finisher. OHSO u seem to just cut it that's it... I get cha point but it's gotta come off harder than that, this point of the track can make or break it all.....


OVERALL CONCLUSION:
This Was A Hot Tense Battle Between Both Opponents, but there can only be one winner. Both artists came hard, but Only One Man Can Have They Hands Raised.

OHSO:
+ Ur Flow Was On Point And Sat Nicely On The Beat.
+ You Had More Multies That stuck out.
+ The way U introduce your track Was off the hook n kept me tuned in.
- Work On Your Wordplay, Say shit that'll blow us out the water.
- Get More Personal, your battlin not makin a diss track, Use his name, town, age, job, etc. in your raps.
- Work a bit on your mic pressence. It was nice, but u could always get better, better quality mic... or sumthin
- You Opened Sick, but couldn't stick to him at the end.... that's a minus, last 2 bars should be off the hook and make the listener go "Oh" lol

SKORP:
+ Nice Flow Out There, It's ur style n it's nice.
+ Nice Wordplay... but still that could be better, u barely got this.
+ Get More Personal, But U Were better than OHSO for this.
+ I Could Hear U Loud N Clear. Keep It Up.
+ Nice Way To Kill Him At The End Dude.
- U Need Multies.... It Still flowed n hit right, but multies smooths it out.
- Ur Opener Was Too Simple N Dint really grab my attention... This coulda caused sumone to immediately stop listenin before you began... keep that in mind.


AND THE WINNER IS ..... :

Skorp

Overall He Was better, not much more, but her won by a slip of the hair on this one.. taking almost every catagory by the tip of his nose.
*could be cuz he spit second n knew wat to aim for... or maybe not.

but either way my vote goes to Skorp.

Anyone with a problem could talk to me bout it if the breaking it down didnt help.


GREAT BATTLE!!!

[Tre6Ohso]

uppin

[ph0enix]

tresho had good flow but came generic

skorp came in with hard personals but then started to get generic flow was str8

skorp one this tho he came harder overall

[Mykull]

i agree with the dude that wrote the 4 page essay on the battle..lol...for real tho skorp won....but were decent..

[Stezieb]

Ohso, flow was on point, punches were general nothing hard-hitting. Not really any personals, you just came with some creative wordplay here.

Skorp, your flow was on point as well. Your punches came personal and were connecting 99% of the time. You dissed yourself saying that you pay for sex, haha.

Flow:Tie
Personals: Skorp
Punches:Skorp
Wordplay:Ohso

Vote/Skorp

[Lewshis]

Im Sayin that Ohso had a nice flow goin,nice quality, but he wasnt to much focused on Skorp himself. (indirect).Skorp has crazy flow,and harder hittin lines and more direct.
V/ Skorp

[Tre6Ohso]

i dont get how he can juss say my name n dat count as a personal
maybe i didnt say anything bout him personally cause i dont know him personally
and also the dissing yourself for trickin off n complimenting my wardrobe
all dat shit is some shit youd get bood for
n the bar about me punching in seems sorta like feeding off my shit
even though i didnt even punch in and your track was over da limit
but i aint bout that technicality shit im tryna get theese votes
so iight uppin

[Uhb.]

tre- beat was cool. punches werent really hard. kinda like a song instead of a diss. u had like one decent punch..flow was cool i guess...overall 4/10

vs

skorp- cool beat for a battle..lyric were low. need to turn them up, decent disses...u sound like someone i know, cool personals..delivery was cool. cool diss, good flow overall 7/10

vote: skorp