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Thread: Those be Fightin words

  1. #16

    Re: Those be Fightin words

    Dropping another verse
    Relentless, yeah you could call me a cut-throat
    blowing you away like lines of coke
    Unstoppable with a will indomitable
    And a mind like a warzone inhospitable
    to stupidity and idiocy accepting only brilliancy
    never been found to turn down the intensity
    and I got a propensity for being on top
    my mind’s analyzing and strategizing nonstop
    always carrying me to new places, greater heights
    and I don’t need the press the attention and lights
    Im in this for me, to build a legacy
    To take it all and hold on indefinitely
    I want to be remembered for genius and intellect
    Turning the world on its head and having an effect
    I’m gonna be a legend, infamous or inspiration
    And even if I’m hated they’ll respect the reputation

  2. #17

    Re: Those be Fightin words

    Last edited by TheProfessor; January 14th, 2011 at 07:45 PM

  3. #18
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    Re: Those be Fightin words

    I'm not a professional so all I can give is my opinion... I definately heard it more then I felt it when reading. I feel you have a nice flow but was kinda all over the place in meaning - kinda like was it all the same rhyme. I think you have definate talent though.

  4. #19

    Re: Those be Fightin words

    I appreciate it and I'll keep working

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